Reviews for In The Coils of a Serpent
Issei Lucifer chapter 6 . 8/22
Wow , I liked everything ! Hurry up the next chapter . More Voldemort x Harry moments )
Rosier1389 chapter 1 . 8/22
I am not the masochist but this whole thing got me aroused
ArtistGamerMage chapter 6 . 8/21
i think itd be interesting if you made a...(for lack of a better word) more lighthearted story. maybe with Harry suddenly finding himself back in first year.

maybe having him now with his foreknowledge and maybe actually try to make things better. (and as somewhat unrealistic as itd be) maybe have that he is able to keep his loved ones safe, and try to get Voldy, and Tam to "become good".

as mich as it wouldnt exactly fit your dark tone. i think itd be fun to read.
Jaoheah chapter 6 . 8/20
Since FFnet is cracking down on NSFW fanfics, this might get deleted soon. Upload it on other sites like Archive of Our Own, and QuestionableQuestion dot com
ThePhenakism chapter 6 . 8/14
Awesome chapter!
PrimalWhiteStar chapter 6 . 8/14
Loved it
Soph Soph Riddle chapter 6 . 8/14
After months, and more months, finally you updated this fic.
It was worth the wait? For sure, my second favourite chapter of yours thus far.
However, the waiting was painful as fuck, i tell you.
It's kinda unfair, you know? Having you creating such a beautiful and tragic story just to make us wait with nothing but our desires to more when you're updating your other works, truly hurtful.

Looking forward to new updates, maybe we will get lucky and you will please us with another chapter still 2023? Muahahahaha
PrimalWhiteStar chapter 5 . 8/5's wrong to think that I want to know how this story will end?
Fumble Flute chapter 5 . 6/15
Well, that was certainly an interesting read.

Could go on about how messed up the story is, but it was just too repetitive, I got desensitised to all the torture/seggs stuff and just stopped caring because it was nothing new. There was no sense of hope or that things could get better, it was just one unfortunate yet uncontrollable event after another.

I was looking forward to the Harry-Twist interactions, but honestly, that felt like a huge letdown with no payoff. They just talk to each other like strangers really, I expected her to be more concerned about his mental well-being but she just doesn't seem to care.

I won't continue with this story tho too many characters are dead, and too many connections to the world have been cut. It feels like a dead world really.
HughJasz chapter 5 . 3/11
I told myself I wouldn't read this story after the first chapter but my curiosity and boredom have gotten the better of me. This story is truly fucked up in the most heinous of ways.

I can't help but compare Delphini and Voldemort to Fleur in your Champions story and I have to say I really dislike that there are quite a few parallels. I can't help but think that the author idealizes very very fucked up relationships which just can't be healthy in any manner.

This whole thing just has me sad and angry at basically everyone. This was terrible.
Matthaus117 chapter 4 . 2/7
Update more if possible
Sons of death chapter 4 . 2/7
how will Delphini react.
Liamtheharrypotterfan chapter 4 . 2/7
This is fucked up and I’m all for it! Bravo!
rolandrichardson16 chapter 4 . 2/7
You ruined it, the first 3 chapters were VERY fucking close to unacceptable but the 4th goes way past that line. "Everyone dies fuck you readers go eat a dick. Weasleys? They all die and Ginny is brutally tortured fuck you. Hermione? Her family is slaughtered and she is brutally tortured, gangraped by werewolves, and then killed fuck you readers I'm a dumb fucking cunt. Literally all the other likeable characters? I describe their deaths in a few paragraphs because FUCK YOU READERS! I do what I want! Now let's read about daRRrRch LeiDEE VoldEmORt and how she LEEEEERVS hEry."
MidnightGlasses chapter 4 . 2/7
I simply adore your stories. The effort you put into your work is simply astonishing.

Can't wait to read more of your work.
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