Reviews for Thy Good Neighbor |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly... I'm a bit disappointed. It's like an elephant was put in a sandbox. The Hunter himself was too strong for AOSIAF, and the Ascended one even more so. Everything would have been bearable if the hero's powers were revealed as needed and problems with the locals arose. But for some reason the author decided that it would be cool to make the Hunter another noble knight, who was certainly set up by the Horus and Mensis, apparently they killed his beloved dog, and who went to turn the upcoming most interesting event in AOSIAF into an empty place because of... What? So that what is happening would finally turn into some kind of dull sitcom, where there is no one to worry about and there is no reason to. -_- |
![]() ![]() ![]() And the White Walkers learned the hard way a new concept: Gid Gud Thank you so much for this new chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story, it is amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() The AN is half the chapter. Not a good look. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wight walkers with their pumped kicks better run from the strangers gun |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the chapter! The fight was dope, and I now pity the poor Others. They never stood a chance. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that moment when the MC becomes the Final Boss. brotha id start running, if only to get some exercise before the afterlife |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tutorial boss LOL! |
![]() ![]() ![]() thy good neighbor is updated: lesgooo It's a hunter chapter: WE'RE SO BACK a hoonter must hoont |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very cool i liked how you describe the bunter healing themselves as more breaking the reality of a wound as backwards logic like that is par for course with great ones |
![]() ![]() ![]() Welp, I guess it's GG for The Others. Good show chaps, but you never really had a chance. I understand having to take creative liberty when the Lore doesn't provide, and honestly, I think you did a good job. Considering aoiaf isn't really that high up in terms of power scaling for a fantasy setting, this was only gonna end one way, and I think you captured the difference in sheer strength very nicely. Patiently awaiting more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So, while all the drama happened in Harrenhal, that is what Cyril was doing, invalidating Rhaegar's actions, well, in specific, his visions, making a visit to the north of Winterfell, to see his others not so friendly neighbors (The Dark Mother and the Children forming a support group of entities terrified by Cyril, XD) Now imagine the Wildlings or the Night Guard, always terrified of The Others, finding them and surprise to see the terrifying monsters, apparently fleeing from something, someone; or given its characteristics, without fleeing but being massacred by a person who is quite notorious in the north and ally of the Stark house, well, assuming that they recognized him, first And if he did not eliminate them the first time, maybe being there, where Cyril takes Brandon to train how to be a Hunter Good luck and keep it up |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW not a word :) |