Reviews for Thy Good Neighbor |
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![]() ![]() ![]() gehrman must be sneering in disgust if he heard cyril considering him as the doll's father. |
![]() ![]() ![]() milquetoast sounds like a delicious word for a nice toast. |
![]() ![]() ![]() milquetoast sounds like a delicious word for a nice toast. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent work. Will there be beasts or elements of Yharnm creeping in if only around the workshop? I really want to see where this goes and how it changes things up. Trick-weapons in the Rebellion. Also is Doll still a doll or is she somehow a real girl(i.e. Pinocchio)? |
![]() ![]() Nice story. Do you already have a sizable backlogs or are you some sort of fast writer? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I’m loving the pace you have set with new chapters I know it is probably unsustainable but until it ends I can’t wait for the next chapter! Bloodborne is awesome and there are so few stories with a good hunter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice to see a new chapter. I see Brandon's recklessness did indeed show itself in the end as expected. His action is certainly very unexpected, and provided a very intriguing twist, especially with the hunter's follow up proposal. I'm looking forward to seeing how far Brandon will go under Cyril's tutelage, hopefully a hunter is what's needed to curb down his wolf's blood. Cyril's composure and talk with Luwin were very interesting to see. Then again, I guess the former is to be expected when you go from nightmare difficulty to casual at best. I am intrigued by the hunter talking about rent. While it is true he can't just buy the land without swearing fealty to House Stark, I imagine he's not planning on staying in the North for long. Given the fact he's talking about Rent, I wonder if he's planning on just poofing the entire mansion somewhere else when he's done with the North. I hope to see more interactions between the Hunter and the Doll with the smallfolk in the future, rather than focusing entirely on just the noble houses and their men. The smallfolk are very overlooked sometimes. Looking forward to seeing the next chapter, keep up the great work. Have a nice day and stay safe. |
![]() ![]() I loved this one. It'll be interesting to see how Brandon will turn out over time. He's known for his arrogance and ill temper in canon... Hence, what ends up happening to him. Well... There's no guarantee the Mad King wouldn't have still done what he'd done, but Brandon (more or less) calling for Rhaegar's head certainly didn't help. I have a feeling that training under a Hunter will not only leave him as a fantastic fighter, but also instill in him some much needed discipline. I'm really looking forward to where you go from here. :) |
![]() ![]() Found this gem by browsing random category. |
![]() ![]() ![]() While the Northmen might consider what Brandon did an absolutely dishonorable conduct, for Cyril it's just another saturday. I doubt he's care enough about being backstabbed considering how he himself had probably backstabbed the entire population of Yharnam. Plus being an eldritch squid likely would make it futile anyway. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A pretty short chapter overall. None of them feels weird or anything, though Brandon is acting odd |
![]() ![]() ![]() The quality is just... mwah! |
![]() ![]() so cool |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! |