Reviews for To Shatter Fate |
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Crywolf178 chapter 35 . 1/16 So safe to say that was winter in a white fang mask, both killing a traitor while also making people doubt Adam’s political movement all while staying squeaky clean as why would a Schnee of all people wear a white fang mask and why would she do something so “evil” as killing the “honorable heroic” headmaster. |
Saiyanwarrior22 chapter 35 . 1/16 you’re most definitly a person of culture, that sonic reference at the end was awesome |
Naedine-Daki chapter 35 . 1/15 I’m amazed by your writing and the way your story left such a powerful impression on me. I believe it has the potential to shine as a comic, and I’d love to discuss that with you. As a commission-based digital artist with a background in comic collaborations, I’d be excited to work with you. Let’s connect on Discord: lishafang or Twitter: Pelu_Oficial123. |
Guest chapter 35 . 1/15 Dude, smarter, calmer Adam is unfathomably based here. Nothing bad about him. |
PasiveNox chapter 35 . 1/13 Great chapter wonderful |
Nai Darkor chapter 35 . 1/9 Luck is such a bullshit semblance. |
Trife chapter 4 . 1/9 You have a habit in these chapters to overly explain how Ichigo moves to using words that just does not fit with what you’re trying to show in the story. I’m hoping it gets better in later chapters cause it’s getting pretty annoying. Other then that it’s a good story. Trife |
Chaos Bringer chapter 1 . 1/9 You should watch Unicorn of Wars youtube,Video titled " I Rewrote Volume 8" were salem is given the ability to alter her body into a more monstrous and powerful form similar to Lady Dimitrescu from the Resident Evil Games. |
Guest chapter 10 . 1/8 That end part was bloody golden! |
ChildeRoland13 chapter 14 . 1/8 The way you described Amber as being certain that she'd had parents, when she apparently didn't, and the way that she can't seem to remember anything about them, reminded me of Senna, from "Memories of Nobody". |
Chaos Bringer chapter 35 . 1/8 Screw Ichigo fighting Sienna next chapter he's most likely going to meet Salem face to face instead. |
Guest chapter 35 . 1/7 I can so see Ichigo being sent to fight Sienna in the next chapter. |
Wraithangel08 chapter 35 . 1/7 Raven trying to send Ichigo away via her semblance, he vanishes into portal, connection severed and return to deal with Yang and her team only for a white claw curtesy of Ichigo grabbing her face from the other side of a garganta. "Did you really think that would work?" |
LoveLifeForever chapter 3 . 1/7 I think the one thing I hate is how few people address the fact that I've doesn't have a shinigami side. White is his Hollow side, Old Man is his Quincy side, and Ichigo is the Human side... and maybe Fullbringer too. Will we ever get to see the Shinigami powers he was supposed to have? Also, what is White's special ability? Pretty much every Hollow we've seen gets one. |
GoldQuartz chapter 35 . 1/7 Oh shit, Ichigo's been portalled |