jinchuriki should be absorbed in ascending order, i.e. from the first to the ninth tail. thanks for episod

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Well, I'm done. Honestly I really loved how selfish he was at the beginning. I always found those OCs who want to save the world stupid. Like why burden yourself when you barely know those people in a world who could kill you easily. It's a different matter when you do it once you're strong and have political influence but doing it when you're weak is just stupid. So I was really glad when fujin decided to leave the uchihas alone even if i felt sorry for meiko. I was also glad with how careful he was with showing his skills. I think fujin did the best to balance training himself while not appearing to be a genius so as not to be targeted of all the naruto fics i read. I also loved the fact that he doesn't mind killing people in a world of kill or be killed, because I'm so tired of characters having mental breakdowns. But that doesn't mean I like a sociopathic character. He is strong enough now to not be vulnerable and yet he still doesn't have a purpose in life other than getting stronger. Even after being S rank and having hiraishin meaning he's basically never gonna get killed he still wants Jashin's power? He's literally basically orochimaru. He gets more and more apathetic as the story goes on rather than being a better human being as he grew stronger. I was looking for a "help yourself when you're poor, help the world when you're rich" kinda story not "fuck everyone else other than me". Of corse if you wanted to make a story with a villainous MC that's fine too. But even villains need to have a reason to be so. He doesn't. He was helped by Genki, then his sensei, and then hiruzen wholeheartedly to be where he is now and he still doesn't give a shit about konoha. Even once Danzo targetted him, he was no longer vulnerable so he couldn't do anything to him. Meaning he was selfish just because that's his entire personality, not because he was forced to be by the world. It's disgusting.

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Absolute fart of a story
But i really can't be bothered writing anything mself so whatever

I can tell from the first paragraph the author has a low intelligence, doesn't know english very well and is trying too hard to make up for it.

Slop Fic. Imagine writing 455 chapters of pure slop bruh
over for u

Awww, it would have been pretty funny to watch what happens.

Ahhhhh, the politics is so exciting~~~~My inner sakura is all CHAAAAA!

Oh, hurricane fist is a cool name

Honestly, this mission/arc has gone on too long. And I dont understand the chuuni appeal of creating your own hidden ninja group. Particularly for someone who is about to be anbu captain, and will likely be a konoha leader in a few years. Seems like way too much work for very little gain.

Nice summons

Seems pretty clear some type of clone trick was used

Ok, this has lost me. It feels pretty aimless.

Wow. This hasnt been the best OP ninja story by any means, but the flow of it feels like it has turned into a game rather than something more serious. Lol, the idea of asking hiruzen for chakra blades. What a farce. The kids in the class at 8 years old are already way more capable than the main characters were in canon at 12. This is ridiculous. The author here has fallen into the chuunibo trap.

3 from senju? The fuck? Tsunade was the only senju left long before minato became hokage or naruto was born. This didnt give the impression of an AU setting, but if this carries forward, it sure will be.