I didn't leave a review the first time around but this really good. I just love the Victoria/Bella ship and the plot uve created is a fantastic approach. Overall great writing!

I love this start and your writing. Its exciting to see how this unfolds. Hopefully things get a lottle easier for you to manage in your personal life

I love the story man so far hope to see more from you

Aww so Victoria told Bella that she is a vampire along with a few things they can do. Can’t wait for more to come.

I really love Victoria's narrative. Also how she caught Bella's scent and was plotting how to get to her to drain her until their eyes met. Honestly, I love your writing style. Bella's voice is fun too, I love how she tried to intimidate Victoria with her dad being home and the chief of police in forks.

I'm loving this so far! Such a great start. I can't wait to see what happens once Bella opens the window!

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I love the balance!

More please! More! Love the plot.

Nice 2nd chapter :)

I LOVE THIS! It should make it easier there's no James or Cullen.

Ohh I’m liking so far and the pairing. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Hmm do you have a thoughts on giving Charlie a mate?

J adore ton histoire vivement la suite

I’m already hooked. Fantastic intro to the pair, look forward to more.

Such a brilliantly written first chapter. Such beautiful composition, and execution of the English language put a smile on my face. The cherry on the cake, one of my favourite pairings. I eagerly await the next chapter.

Good beginning. Please continue this :)