Reviews for Take My Breath Away
SilverCat64 chapter 3 . 8/21
I didn't leave a review the first time around but this really good. I just love the Victoria/Bella ship and the plot uve created is a fantastic approach. Overall great writing!
ThE InFamOus HeRo chapter 3 . 7/2
I love this start and your writing. Its exciting to see how this unfolds. Hopefully things get a lottle easier for you to manage in your personal life
ghostlord6977 chapter 3 . 6/21
I love the story man so far hope to see more from you
catgrl chapter 3 . 6/4
Aww so Victoria told Bella that she is a vampire along with a few things they can do. Can’t wait for more to come.
HadesVampire chapter 2 . 1/30
I really love Victoria's narrative. Also how she caught Bella's scent and was plotting how to get to her to drain her until their eyes met. Honestly, I love your writing style. Bella's voice is fun too, I love how she tried to intimidate Victoria with her dad being home and the chief of police in forks.

I'm loving this so far! Such a great start. I can't wait to see what happens once Bella opens the window!
BellamioneForever2022 chapter 2 . 1/25
ThE InFamOus HeRo chapter 2 . 1/22
I love the balance!
ThE InFamOus HeRo chapter 2 . 1/22
More please! More! Love the plot.
godric777 chapter 2 . 1/4
Nice 2nd chapter :)
JustToTalk chapter 2 . 1/3
I LOVE THIS! It should make it easier there's no James or Cullen.
catgrl chapter 2 . 1/3
Ohh I’m liking so far and the pairing. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Hmm do you have a thoughts on giving Charlie a mate?
flemingmanon chapter 2 . 1/3
J adore ton histoire vivement la suite
JessyM83 chapter 1 . 1/1
I’m already hooked. Fantastic intro to the pair, look forward to more.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/28/2022
Such a brilliantly written first chapter. Such beautiful composition, and execution of the English language put a smile on my face. The cherry on the cake, one of my favourite pairings. I eagerly await the next chapter.
godric777 chapter 1 . 12/30/2022
Good beginning. Please continue this :)
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