|Reviews for A Guiding Light: An After Talpa Story|
| Hocapontas chapter 3 . 12/1/2008
That was weird! Why didn't you write the rest of the story? I want to know how the other ronin warriors were captured. I was thoroughly confused when I started this chapter. I thought I had missed something. Did you write the whole story on another website?
| MoonlightBushido chapter 6 . 12/2/2004
Magnificent, are you a Sage fan? Thanks for portraying him as a stubborn fool that realizes things almost too late. I like it when he's made out to be an idiot sometimes and not just a pretty boy flirt. Long live Sage of the Halo or Korin no Seiji!
| Strata-chan chapter 6 . 1/5/2001
*gawks at the screen* That was a beautiful story, even though I can't seem to find the 8th chapter, but who cares? I commend you, Melissa, for a well-written storyline. Also, this story actually gave Sage some emotions instead of the stone wall that almost all fanfic writers portray him as. Congrats on a job well done.