Reviews for In The Clear
ladyqueerfoot chapter 39 . 3/7/2024
rip riley u were a real one. if marcy dies we riot at dawn.
rising-balloons chapter 37 . 2/29/2024
i can't believe u...
FlawlessCatastrophe chapter 37 . 2/23/2024
- "She couldn't jump into the trial in the girl's place even if she wanted to, which she does not." LMFAOOOO thank you for clarifying eris
- "Lawrence Yao-Sartre and Marceline Toussaint." about damn time...
- "She lets her hand fall over Marceline's" fuck you [forcibly makes u learn 006's name]
- "Without warning, the girl leans forward into what could almost be described as a hug." oh my god...
- "Yet, she feels herself holding on almost as tightly despite not knowing why." ouh im gon be SICK TFFF...

- "Except that reason never even mattered." yeah you werent fast enough :/ tuff
- "The way he's rubbing two of his fingers together on either side puts Casi immediately on edge." the fuck is he doing?
- "This is easily the highest word count Casi has ever heard come out of the inmate's mouth." HELP ME
- "Lawrence starts to turn away, their cheeks having turned far too warm in the seconds of silence." omg theyre embarrassedddd...
- "For the first time since Omar's announcement, Casi feels wide awake." bye HFHDJFSKF.
- "At this point, he's not sure if that's better or worse." its always worse _

- "In fact, it was probably the first non-selfish thing he's done." i love when characters have this sentiment!
- clocked him w the mina coffman description LOL
- "He'll tell himself that Alec isn't watching until it's the only thought that fills his mind." yikes.
- "Yet, when Riley's eyes move along the ceiling searching for cameras, his gaze is notably softer." YOU GAY FUCK...
- "In his season, he was able to connect the disjointed pieces of himself and start on his way towards excellence in medical research." hello
- "You possess stark depravity inside you that has, after years of normalcy, managed to take control of you." WHAT THE FUCK

- "She knows that she isn't in the clear yet." ROLLLL CREDITS!
- "No. I won't." OK MFFFF STAND UR MFIN GROUND OKKKK
- "The inmate whose voice she didn't recognize is Bowie" you spent all that time w bowie but u couldnt even recognize their voice?

- "He wouldn't even call his choice personal. She's pissed him off a few times, enough to remember her." BYE LMFAOOO
- man ider who 4 is
- (grumbling) (pulls up the blog)
- bridget ok thats what i thought
- "Fucking Battleship." god bless riley for identifying the game for me
- "Each one feels like it could be thin enough to break through." (violent squid game flashbacks)
- "It's too bad Riley never looked at his own ships long enough to know where they were on the grid." HELP
- "He just has to make sure that, eventually, she'll have nowhere to run." i cant wrap my head around this but it looks like riley has an idea of what he's doing

- bowie dom trial is so devastating bruh
- bowie being a comforting hug force WILL make a bitch (me) cry. because thats what omar did for them while he was alive
- not that omar is fully a comforting hug force but he was sorta
- "Yet, she trusts them." YOU SHOULD! BOWIE HAS NEVER HAD BAD INTENTIONS EVER!
- "And they still face the start of the maze side-by-side." A LITTLE REBELLION OF ITS OWN...

- "They're outside, at the top of a building." what the fuck...
- "The concrete starts to growl and groan beneath her." oh god im sweaty what the fuck is happening
- "He meets her petrified gaze with stark surprise." oh god a laurie expression

- "Amadis never even tried to show up." smh playing hero
- "It's not the same irritating playfulness that she experienced during their session. Still, it's something, and Amadis is almost grateful." wahh...
- "He looked at her like she was insane yesterday." people have just been telling casi insane things this entire time theyve been on the show. taste of your own medicine kiddo!

- "It feels uncomfortable to invade her space in that way, no matter that their spaces have nearly combined into one." hes so respectful
- "Comment allez-vous?" How are you?" OMFG FRENCH COLLAB?!
- "Now, they have no choice but to await an answer. It's only courteous." SOOO POLITE
- "This is the first time that Lawrence wonders if what they're feeling might also be described as fear." oh god what if i throw up...
- "Lawrence takes a slow breath and she mimics it, though they're unsure if that's purposeful. They do it again and again, she follows suit. After the third time, it seems that her breaths have finally calmed." WAHHHH I THROW UP VIOLENTELY
- i love the french collab hate to say it but i really do
- "They don't believe that this is them being nice at all." theyre literally just being normal
- normal cosplay
- "The last thing that they expect her to do in response is scream." HHHUHHH
- "They cannot remember a time when tears have streamed down their face or when screaming felt like an option. They've felt euphoric and they've felt anger but suddenly none of that feels as raw as the girl in front of them." laurie will never understand the teenage girl range of emotion
- "They remember his smile before the game started, the playful eyes that were so intense that even Lawrence got caught in them." i wish he would stop being such an intense [redacted]
- "And maybe that's the reason that the next time their hand threatens to slip, they allow it." BRO NOOO UR SO SEXY DONT BEAT URSELF UP FOR NOT UNDERSTANDING HUAMN EMOTIONS HAHAHA NOOOO
- "And Lawrence realizes that's all they've ever wanted to feel." WHAT THE FUCKKK
- "about the eighteenth coffin that doesn't actually exist." whyd it exist and then it didnt
- "And, when she finally does, Marcy looks down and all that's waiting beneath her is blue." NOOO.. FUCK WHAT THE FUCK...
- "Lawrence Yao-Sartre has been found guilty." NOOOOOOO
- BANGS THE TABLE
- WHAT THE FUCKKKK

- "Both lines are the same length; it's more of a plus sign than an actual cross. It still makes their stomach sink.

It reminds them of him. Everything does." IM YELLING NOT ThIS
- i miss his catholic ass FUUUCKK...
- I MISS SOMEONE ELSES CATHOLIC ASS NOOOOO
- "they refuse to be remembered the same way they'll always remember Omar." oh god...
- "Afraid of losing the first person to say everything Bowie wanted to hear." Withered.
- "Bowie wants to be proud of themself." bowie im SO proud of you
- "Bowie can't ignore those no matter how badly they wish to forgive themself. It's not their choice. It wasn't Omar's either." bro fuuuuckkk...
- "Almost immediately, a second one follows - I won't let her down." YAYY POSITIVE THINKING
- "Bowie won't be able to surprise her and go through first. She'll be able to stop them if they try." mutual impasse
- "Dom lands on her backside and stares through the doorway. Bowie just stands there, their arms still half-outstretched and fearful tears wet in their eyes. It's at that point that she realizes.

Bowie isn't outside the maze. She is." BFUCK WHAT THE FUCK?
- "Thank you," Bowie says, and the words are as clear as the glass surrounding them. "For everything." WHAT THE HELL
- "Dom screams and leaps to her knees as a silver hatchet swings through the glass from the top of the doorway. It shatters the entire box on impact and slices down through the middle of their thin body." HOLY SHIT WHAT THE FUCK!?
- OH MY GOD. THATS SO AWFUL.
- "Bowen Bridges has been found guilty."

Their words couldn't be more wrong." THEY HAVE NEVER DONE ANTTHING WRONG. THIS IS AN AWFUL CHAPTER THIS IS SO UPSETTING

- bridget i cannot deal with you rn im praaying for your downfall
- pear phone status: excessively violent
- "After nineteen rounds, she managed to get four hits. Riley has managed ten." damn bridge sucks ass at this game
- "And the most infuriating and terrifying part is that Bridget doesn't think he even knows what he's done." shes like IM LOSING TO A DUMBASS?
- "Instead, she hears the loud gasp leave her lips as the floor beneath her feet gives way. " oop
- "He wants to see this through to the end even as the background whimpers get louder in his ear." NOT THE BACKGROUND WHIMPERS LOLLL
- "Riley doesn't know what the verdict will be but he almost doesn't care. She will still have lost. He will still have won." hbfhjdhsgjkks...
- "You'll understand, won't you, Alec?" devastating sentiment thank you
- "This trial has exceeded the allotted time limit. A mistrial has been declared." bye. u hesitated too long riley
- threw a hissy fit cos he couldnt finish bridget...
- christ... GET A GRIP
- "And, no matter how much he despises them, he still wants to win." hes just a little toy soldier _

laurie: im going to miss your little weird fascinating ass. you didnt deserve any of the hate u received em twas truly right and u were a little meow. was deeply invested in his journey to understanding Human emotions and empathy and friends and compassion and im so glad i got to see a french collab before someone went. fly high sweet prince (i like to think he didnt go to hell)

bowie: BOWIE NEVER DID ANYTHING WRONG IDGAF... CALL ME OMAR BECAUSE IVE WANTED TO GIVE THIS SKRUNKLY SO MANY FUCKING HUGS THIS WHOLE TIME... sobbing curling up on the ground weeping nasty snottily uglily... so naive but so kind and just wanted someone to give them the benny of the doubt. hahhh why did MY TWO REMAINING FAVES SACK THEMSELVES IN THE SAME CHAPTER WHAT THE FUCK. EM FUCKING HATES ME! im going to miss you my sweet.

m*ne: omo
my meows: laurie, bowie,
cuties: dom, marcy
yea: amadis, eris, bridget, myra
man idk: casi, riley

man FUCK you for obliterating my meow tier i hope you eat shit

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SYOT Verses Discord chapter 34 . 2/19/2024
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In the Clear
Chapter 34:
when marcy set the place on fucking fire. em i'm gonna get you (ricky when i catch you ricky…) - RB

The fire was naturally the highlight of the chapter and Laurie's realization that he didn't want to win was one of the most memorable bits for me. Also, Omar getting stabbed. - Lily

Chapter 35:
sorry no comment i'm still speechless - RB

the fight at the gym... JESUS CHRIST - Linds

the ending. holy shit. the entire chapter was a total banger but the reveal in the morgue just has me sitting here blankly . good lord. (rip omar i will miss your crazy ass) - Erik

THE EVIL IS DEFEATEDDDD - Nell

sigh. when they put down the rabid dog. - Moose

when omar was scaring everybody (rip to my son, fly high 3 (i know hes certainly not)) - Brooke

I think the interaction between Riley and Omar was my favorite just because of how errie it is to see this character who's probably the strongest of the surviving cast be so genuinely freaked out by Omar. - Lily

Chapter 36:
Myra glitchinf - Linds

shockingly the laurie pov but i think that's just bc i liked the predicted placements moment (i want casi's blood) - Laney

the part where eris *still* does not know marcy's name - RB

no one die 3 - Jade

Dom and Bowie's conversation was such an important moment for both of them with their arcs and it was so wonderful to see the both of them get maybe a little bit of peace of mind after so much internal conflict. (Also the Bridget pov stabbed me through the heart, but I'm biased, so.) - Lily

uhhh myra being a bitch at the end (em i will come find you if myra ends up in another trial) - Moose

Chapters 34-35:
oh the moment where omar got stabbed in the back and he just started at bridget and bowie... his whole rampage was rlly fun tbh - Goldie

it was cool when riley committed atrocities i like watching him get worse (i miss omar tbh) - Laney
FlawlessCatastrophe chapter 36 . 2/16/2024
lawrence:
- "Now, most of them produce similar short scenes." bro what the fuck is even that
- "They had scenes, but just like Casi there was no matching corpse when they turned around." what the hell...
- "It doesn't take long to recognize them as measurements of basic vital signs." CREEPY. WEIRD
- why didnt he italicize marcys name
- "Their throat also seems to have taken on an inappropriate dryness." the way he phrased this man HAHHAH
- love how he talks in his head
- "As of this moment, the panel is predicting that Casi will finish in seventh place." wow wth they have predictions? weird...
- "Casi. All thoughts, no matter how many times Lawrence has tried to sway them, lead back to that name." ... you know what im about to say
- a slur
- "They wish so badly to go back to that moment." points Homo
- "So, maybe, it's okay to tell themself that they're not ready to meet it just yet." shrivels up and dies
- little mwoew meow

myra:
- hope youre happy after you killed my son...
- "If they're here to kill her, most of her just wishes that they would hurry up." oh my god girl :sob:
- "Yet, his face now seared in his mind doesn't even bring forward a cursory shiver. There's simply nothing." damn nobody give af about omo... as they shouldn't!

bowie:
- "By the time they got back to the library, Bowie had been all but carrying the girl." oh my god :sob:
- so stronk
- "Yet, Bowie hasn't felt safer in almost a year." wow... thats not true u felt pretty safe w omar at the beginning
- ahhh bowie dom and myra. estranged people alliance
- "They don't want to think about him but the silence seems to pull him too close." hehehhe
- "Omar is waiting just behind their eyelids." OOP SICK HAHAHHA
- "He welcomed Bowie despite the knife they allowed to slip into his back. He seemed relieved to see them, like he was glad that someone had arrived that would finally understand." i miss his bitchass sooo bad
- "Bowie wanted to believe it could be, but it isn't. Omar wasn't good. He hugged them and comforted them and maybe some of that was real but none of it was true." hahahhah
- "People can be good, right? And people can be bad." They pause. "Do you think it's possible that someone can be both?" wow twirls hair why are you asking that bowie...
- "It can't be both day and night; people can't be both good and bad. It's one or the other. Omar was one or the other; so are they." thats a way to look at things
- "But then, how could she call herself good after she killed people - not just a police officer whose life she was apathetic towards, but a child who'd done nothing but go for a walk with their mom?" hahahha withered
- "He cared about me, at least I think he did. But he killed Madigan, and I think he was going to kill her too." They gesture to 017 and Dom's suspicions are confirmed. "I don't know where he falls." hes so fascinating isnt he
- "I don't think a bad person would care this much." but even a good person can fuck up again and again excellently and at that point does it even matter if youre good or bad?
- not saying that uve fucked up that much bowie. love ya!
- "Why not? People are always changing."

She realizes that she actually believes that." hell yeah... souls are transient bro...
- "Bowie knows that, at one point, they considered him a friend. They also know that he scared them more than anyone they've ever known. Both of those things can be true." isnt that so fucked up
- "Despite the scalding temperatures, she realizes that part of her has been cold for the past couple of days." wahhh...
- "The blood over her eyes finally seems to have scabbed over." why is there blood over her eyes again
- is that from stabbing omo? hahahh
- "The room falls into silence once again, but this time it feels far more soothing." anything is better than alone w omo 3

amadis:
- "lying down feels exactly how she imagines drowning would." op why in the everloving fuck would u say thta
- "It's too dangerous to involve anyone else." gurl u think ur a mfin martyr or smth? everyones dying here babes
- "What if they don't want a Winner at all?" IT REALLY SEEMS SO (LOOKS AT 18 COFFIN ROOM)
- "They're making sure whoever was inside knew she was coming." waht the fhell?!

riley:
- "What good is beating on a fucking cot?" hes such a Male weirdo
- "Fuck off," he says under his breath." BRO IS TALKING TO HIMSELF LMFAOOOO
- "Talking to yourself, a great sign." no literally
- "He'll return to Alec as barely a person if it means he gets to see him one more time." wow that is such a sentiment
- i ahve to respect it but jesus christ man
- pathetic man alert...

casi:
- omg another amadis casi collab
- "Barely a second later, she turns them over again to look at. From what Casi knows about the stoic girl, they can only assume that this is her version of panic." oh my gosh :sob:
- "The game is still happening, but Casi feels so separate from it." yeah bro is not clutching up in any department
- except i guess the bomb undetonating department
- "Maybe, if they're lucky, he'll run into whatever she was supposed to." bro is feeling suicidal

marcy:
- "She wipes them away but they replenish even before her hand reaches her pant leg. It comes away covered in ash and she feels sick all over again." sooo severely withered.
- my poor girl
- "This time, Eris turns away completely and her heart falls." wahhh...
- "Just when things were starting to feel almost comfortable between them, Marcy feels like she ruined it and she can't even figure out how." failgirl...
- youre fine marcy eris is probably just thinking really hard about kaya
- "Know you," Eris says," WOW THATS A DEVASTATING WAY TO FINISH THAT SENTIMENT.
- "It would also make sense that the girl's flown before. A lot of people do. Yet, hearing both of those things confirmed feels as intimate as a name right now." guuurll...
- "She can't stop thinking about her sister. She can't stop thinking that, in leaving 006, she's somehow letting her down again." ouuww...
- "Kaya wouldn't be dead in her mind without a headstone." head in hands
- "She's good for you. Maybe her sister is right again, but she can't bring herself to listen." i hate everything so bad
- bitches pussyfooting fRIENDSHIP

bridget:
- "She still listened to every word as if any one of them were directed at her." creep... /j
- "No one will ever forget us. Bridget knows that the only way to ensure that is to win." i guess...
- "She hates herself for every single second she sits there, yet when she finally stands she hates herself even more." what sauce are you smoking em? its like uve been hellbent on causing max psychic damage with every line this chapter

- "All contestants are to report immediately to the Common Room, a trial is set to begin." FUCK OFF!
- oh shit bowies gone ope
- maybe they went to the restroom silly!
- "It's a trial, it's not optional."

"I don't care." gurl...
- "Dom doesn't give the girl even the chance to pull herself free. She yanks as hard as she can until 017 is standing beside her and then pulls one more time towards the door." nice
- "It's only then that 017 pushes back. She shoves Dom with more strength than she expects and she lands hard against a nearby bookshelf." gurl... x2
- "You're that eager to give up? Be my fucking guest then." head in hadns
- "Myra doesn't want to remember yet again that the last time she hugged Ram was there. She doesn't want to think about the fact that, hours later, she let them die." ok. brutal.
- "How did that go from sounding so appealing to so terrifying?" because fear is the most primal human emotion...

dread.

m*ne: omo
my meows: laurie, bowie,
cuties: dom, marcy
yea: amadis, eris, bridget, myra
man idk: casi, riley

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darthnell chapter 36 . 2/5/2024
alright lets goooo! Ooh what is Laurie watching..? :0 this seems a little obsessive... OH we still in the morgue.. ahh the panels... yes remembering last time that laurie saw fucking. Meg ;-; everyone has a box.. th eboxes produce scenes.. inch resting. ohh funky, medical information.. :0 Whos box is this..? current vital signs... ohh its oscillating between predicted placements oufff.. oh my god he misses Casi so much but is struggling to like.. understand that HJBVDHJVFB.. buddy... ;-; oh my god "the end will always be waiting"... BANGER LINE...

Myraaa.. whos following her.. is it Bowie ahh.. She feels nothing :V good lord.. this is so. Her arc has been so fun and miserable... now shes kinda forcing herself not to care but also not feeling SCARED.. huge. Ohh Bowie and Dom too haie.. ;-; THEY FEEL SAFEST HERE... head in hands. OHH MYRA IS SHAKING ;-; oh no is she feverish.. oh god not Omar being relieved to see Bowie reminding them of how their mom... thats sick. The illusion of good isnt the same.. :v god Bowie asking Dom about good vs bad.. "their thoughts dont matter theyre gonna be dead anyways" BRO? Ohh Dom ;-; "There has to be grey. The only problem is that Dom doesn't know which shade she belongs to." ;_; MAN. OMAR WANTED TO BE GOOD, BUT HE DIDN'T WANT TO CHANGE. HE JUST WANTED TO BELIEVE THAT HE WAS GOOD... YEAH. That popped into my head as soon as thye brought up changing, like Omar Didn't want to change. You said it exactly right. He had no interest in changing himself, only other people's perceptions of him... woof. MAYBE THERES STILL TIME... ;_; Oh my god shut up Bowie fell asleep Instantly :sob:

"Lying down feels exactly how she imagines drowning would." :V Oh shit.. Amadis wondering if they dont want a winner :VVVV IDK MAN WHAT IF THEY DONT.. DOESNT FEEL IMPOSSIBLE. Ooh interesting how she's only concerning herself w the final result :0 Oh shit beep bbeep motherfucker.. Huh? Someone's got a clever plan ig but. I have no idea who :sob: Eris and Marcy ig..?

Help Riley... He's doing such a goodbad job. Is he... talking to himself now..? Bro's gonna break his toes LMAO. Yo Riley are you like. Okay. Ohh he is so losing it... "He doesn't need to memorize the shape of her bloodstain like the one from them or him." Good fucking lordddd! Go back to bed :sob: No crying allowed!"And if Riley doesn't get out, he will be remembered as nothing but the person that killed everyone who dared step too close." Stares directly into the camera.

Ooh Casi and Amadis hi ! Yo, it was her HANDS that beeped?! Bruh what ! Trial...? Do they not want Amadis to run into this person bc they haven't had a trial yet and they'd rather her (Marcy I'm assuming...) have her trial than be killed by Amadis ? :0 Or it has to do with Their trial... does Amadis have a bomb in her hands . Ohh ok they want her to get killed. That is a much simpler explanation vbhdfvbhfd. CASI IS CRYING..? ;-; They're definitely feeling so lost without the prospect of vengeance on the horizon.. rip ;-;

The girls are bing chilling! And crying, naturally. At least on Marcy's end bvhdfjjbhvf. Ahh flying home.. those mean different things for Eris and Marcy, alas. Help does Eris still not know her name . YEAH. SHE CAN'T KNOW HER. Miserable. Ohh.. shes good for you.. ;-; What a place to find a friend like that :skull:

OHH ITS BRIDGET... ok... Bridget was the one to hear the beeps, nice.. Ohh.. eavesdropping reminds her of how things used to be with her sister before aww ;_; She is living so very vicariously rn, poor thing ;-; Shes so... I hold her so gently ;-;

Ooh announcement ! Ouh where did Bowie go. Pls tell me they just dipped out to go to the bathroom or something.. Ack.. Looks like they did leave though.. but. Why ? ;-; Augh Myra get off your ass bby its trial time you dont wanna get Shane'd.. No shock.. Haha Myra small. Yeahh Myra time to go ! Get Motivated ! It can't be for Nothing !

Excited to see how this trial goes ! I don't remember who's left aside from Marcy and Laurie so that. If that's what's up.. That'll be Fun ...! Excellent chapter :heart: I think the convo w Dom and Bowie was my fav ;-;
rising-balloons chapter 35 . 1/18/2024
this chapter made me debate becoming illiterate again

u deeply frighten me. excellent work!
darthnell chapter 35 . 1/12/2024
THE EVIL IS DEFEATED YEAHHHH! Popping in to let u know that this chap was fantastic, what a really great combination of scenes.. I love the way everyone ganged up on omar here it was iconic truly. his last pov was so haunting, he was so clearly Losing it.. not long for this world... and i gotta say. good riddance ! I don't miss you! this is gonna have some fun repercussions though. stan myra. also hey. hey. what are u doing with megs body. squinting rly hard at u.
FlawlessCatastrophe chapter 35 . 1/11/2024
- “Baby pink paint peels where it should've been replaced years ago. Everything his eyes touch - plastic dolls, tiny dresses, a picture frame still shedding glitter - crumbles into putrid dust. Omar glances up and the ceiling itself is caving in on top of him.” Good god
- Melanie Martinez core
- “Except when it does, it's not white like the marble cross around his neck.” Not his fucking rosary
- “And the next time he looks down, his hands are drenched with melting red snow.” Oh beautiful
- I’m living for this opening sequence
- “He searches for snow, for the wet carpet that she was so excited to pick out for her new bedroom, but it's all turned red.” That’s haunting
- “Meg with eyes that never left him, even when the light left them.” Not this…
- the formatting is going brazy wow
- he’s losing his mfin mind… twirls hair
- “He's fixing it. He's saving them but still their eyes bore into him. And still they fall.” They’re so ungrateful so true
- “They stare at her so differently.

Like she's perfect. Like she's an angel,” SHE STOLE HIS MFIN NAMESAKE! SOOO RUDE.
- “Even the knife that slides into his back is ice cold.” Gaddamn
- “Yet, the pain in his back hasn't let up and it drips like ice down his leg.” I’m cringing
- “Red like the melted snow.” Just like that omo :heartbeat:
- “The ones that don't understand, that want to hurt him when Omar would never wish the same. He would never hurt anyone.” Right.
- he sounds so fucking insane I love it so bad
- “He might not wear white, but he can still be an angel.” THIS IS SUUUUCH A GOOD LINE IF I DIDNT HAVE A WEIRD ATTACHMENT TO MY CURRENT STATUS ID CHANGE IT TO THIS LINE RIGHT HERE :heart::heart::heart::heart:
- insane pov 1 wow
- god bless omarica. just kidding he’d be too lucky!

- “He refuses to let any of the broken thoughts inside his skull come even close to getting in the way.” this guy is suffering trauma to unimaginable degrees
- “Nothing fucking matters except the one thing that Riley's promised he would do from day one. He's going to make it out of this place.” I mean he’s done good on that front thus far
- “He honestly looked like he was trying, like he wasn't a spoiled shit that was willing to manipulate anyone for one more measly day of life. He almost fooled Riley.” Cmon man…
- in another universe y’all kissed
- embrace the yaoi /j
- well too late for that anyhow
- “His eyes are bloodshot, like he'd been crying but there are no tear stains on his cheeks.” Ewww…
- “The way he looks at Riley, it's as if he can't even see him. Rather, his gaze stares straight through him.” Oh that’s fucking creepy
- “He just stares down at the weapon that's being held now by each of their hands.” RILEY AND OMO HOLDING HANDS NOT CLICKBAIT?
- “007's lips turn up ever slightly into a grin. "You don't mean this, I know you don't." Holy god what the fuck is wrong with him
- “He's surprisingly strong and Riley's back hits the concrete wall behind him.” my god u mean to tell me Omar could kabedon Riley if he wanted to?
- “007 staggers but that doesn't last long. The smile returns, but he doesn't stop coming.” STOP SMILING :raised_hand::raised_hand::raised_hand: MFFF
- “The knife is still held tightly in Riley's hand, but it suddenly feels like not nearly enough.” Wow my son can intimidate the person w the highest kill count here. Wow
- his… power…?
- “The words don't match his actions. The smile doesn't match the weapon.” He contains multitudes…?
- “Riley presses himself up off the floor and starts towards the boy, who grabs the blade of Riley's knife in midair.” I audibly went What The Hell,
- Omar cmon you are acting loca man cmon…
- “Riley's hand starts to tremble around the handle as blood drips to the concrete below. His eyes widen as tears start to drip gently down the boy's cheeks. Still, 007 doesn't let go.” WHAT THE FUCUCKJJJJJK WHAT THE FUCKKK WHAT THE FUCKKK
- "I forgive you," he whispers, though Riley can feel him starting to pull the handle from his grip. Riley holds it tightly, but his entire body is shaking.” LITERALLY HE HAS RILEY FEARING FOR HIS LIFE RNNN
- DUD THIS PUSSY ACTUALLY JUST RUN A WAY HAHAHAH
- DID HE LEAVE A PISS TRAIL
- that was great

- “Is it possible to cry without tears in your eyes?” Yes, omo proved. Hope this helps!
- “He's coming.” HES WHATTING?
- “He didn't even flinch.” Jesus Christ HAHAHAH.
- “He isn't dead. It's been hours and the announcement hasn't come.” Yeah L. Aim better next time
- “That has to count for something. It has to.” Yeah! I am pretty proud of u bridge!
- “Except if that were true, her body wouldn't be breaking out in a cold sweat at the mere sound of footsteps.” Everyone is so scared of him it’s perfect.
- "I forgive you," he whispers, though Riley can feel him starting to pull the handle from his grip. Riley holds it tightly, but his entire body is shaking.” LITERALLY HE HAS RILEY FEARING FOR HIS LIFE RNNN
- DUD THIS PUSSY ACTUALLY JUST RUN A WAY HAHAHAH
- DID HE LEAVE A PISS TRAIL
- that was great

- “Is it possible to cry without tears in your eyes?” Yes, omo proved. Hope this helps!
- “He's coming.” HES WHATTING?
- “He didn't even flinch.” Jesus Christ HAHAHAH.
- “He isn't dead. It's been hours and the announcement hasn't come.” Yeah L. Aim better next time
- “That has to count for something. It has to.” Yeah! I am pretty proud of u bridge!
- “Except if that were true, her body wouldn't be breaking out in a cold sweat at the mere sound of footsteps.” Everyone is so scared of him it’s perfect.
- it pleases me deeply
- “In an instant she recognizes him” oh god oh fuck
- HOW DID HE FIND HER SO FAST BYEE.
- “There's red stains all over his face and neck, along with what look to be dozens of deep scratch marks.” Jesus Christ?
- “She doesn't know where she's going. She just knows that she has to go.” Bitch u r Prey rn
- WHY IS HE JUST STANDING THERE BUFFERING
- ITS LIKE A FUCKING HORROR MOVIE HAHAHAH.
- “She barely manages to slip back inside the stairwell before gagging violently.” God so true
- “She has no idea what he would do to her if he knew she was right here.” He would Not Hurt You obviously

- “She doesn't know why she said yes. Truthfully, Dom can't even remember if she did. They ran in here hours ago with panic in their eyes and begged her to stay.” WAS IT BOWIE WAAAA
- “The bloodiest murder she wishes she'd never seen.” Ahhh fuck. Yeah.
- I miss him :(
- waaa it is Bowie ;;;

- “There were several points over the last few hours where she firmly believed that would stop.” Yeah cuz all that fuckin smoke girl.
- “"Eris." Even the whisper is hoarse, making the name sound like it's been chopped to pieces.” ITS LIKE THE FORST TIME SHES EVER SAID HER NAME… OR MAYBE EVEN THE FIRST TIME SHES SAID ANYTHING TO HER PERIOD I CANT RMEMEBER…
- “Before Marcy can get even halfway across the rooftop, she breaks down again in violent tears.” waaa babygirl…
- “Yet, she can't help but think of her half-sister every time she looks at 006.” Sobbing.
- "Did I hurt anyone?" Um yes girl…
- "Did I hurt anyone?" It's the same words, though Eris can't be sure if they're what actually left her lips.” OH SHUT THE FUCK UP RN :::(((
- “She closes her eyes so that she doesn't have to watch the girl's expression. "Yes." She’s still brave for choosing honesty
- “She knows too well how it feels to find out that you're not the person you thought you were.” Ouhh…
- “The fierce desire to help that made 006 almost close a burning door is so much like her sister.” Like the self sacrificing type of fierce desire?
- “And maybe, just maybe, they don't deserve to die believing otherwise.” Thats a really brave thing to say and I know Omar would hear that and take it wildly out of context
- i rlly liked that pov waaah.

- “She hadn't wanted to leave them. She had to. They wanted her to. They never wanted her.” Okyyy girl…
- “Yet, she had left them and she's never going to forgive herself.” Never could be a really short time depending on how you play your cards these next couple chapters!
- “Yet, the first thing that catches her eye is him.” Is it Omar again I’m scared.
- “The only thing that discredits that is the bloodshot eyes” ah yes. It must be.
- “The rest of him looks almost too put together. Myra remembers him, but it's hard to settle her mind on any one event. Even his clothes don't look wrinkled enough.” Nearly Picture perfect as always
- so composed…!
- "You don't have to be scared." Who in their right mind would not be scared rn.
- “Myra can't be certain that he's talking to her, but there's no one else here.” GOD… SO CREEPY…
- “His words are kind. He doesn't want to hurt me. No part of Myra believes him.” AND U ABSOLUTELY SHOULD NOT LMFAOOO.
- “007 puts a hand out in front of him, curling it slightly as if wrapping it around someone's shoulder but there's no one there.” WHAT THE FUCK IS HE DOIINGGG IS HE IMAGINING SABINA
- “It was him, standing there as blankly as now as he stared straight at the body of another contestant.

He's looking at her in almost the exact same way.” JESUS FUCKING CHRIST.
- ANOTHER BODY THAT NEEDS SALVATION…!
- UMMM THE VIBES R GETTING SOOO RANCID.

- “They have to warn her. She has to know.” Do you know about our lord and savior Omar Jardinez
- “They can't go. They can't help her. They can't. Bowie knows the voice next door too well.” OH GOD MYRA AND OMAR ARE NEXTDOOR?
- “"It's him," they breathe, but the admission only makes the next one harder.” THIS IS GENUINELY A HORROR.
- “They sob into their hands as another shriek tears through the room. They've never felt so helpless and it pulls at their chest as much as the continuing screams.” Jesus fucking Christ
- They’re actually shitting like crazy

- “She can't stop herself from thinking it sounds like Dom.” Aint no way it’s Dom. Amadis has gotta be hallucinating
- “Amadis knows that she isn't prepared for what she's going to find.” HAHHAHAH….
- “The boy's back is to her, but she can see it - the knife stuck in the swollen bump of skin beneath his shirt.” JESUS GOD ITS STILL FUCKING THERE.
- “Yet her eyes are begging me to help her.” Ud be one brave ass soul to help her now.
- “He looks… almost gentle. Yet, nothing about the way he holds her is gentle.” DUDE THIS IS FUCKING CREEPY. ITS FUCKING WEIRD HES REALLY FUCKINF WEIRD HAHAHAH.
- GET YOUR FUCKING HANDS OFF AMADIS!
- “She just couldn't stand to do nothing.” again. Brave as fuck. Maybe stupid but certainly brave.
- “Instead, they snap back to 007 as a loud crack comes from behind him.” BAHAHAHHA
- DID DOM DO THẬT?
- THE POWER OF LESBIASN?
- “She stares in horror as the same girl from earlier stands behind him, holding the same hammer that she saw earlier.” Oh no just Myra
- good job though Myra!
- “He's already holding 017's hammer by the time he stands clumsily to his feet.” UMMMM.
- “He wields the hammer in one hand, squinting with the matching eye. There's a spot of blood that's dripping down his cheekbone and all of the blood vessels in that eye have painted his cornea red.” OH JESUS CHRIST HAHAHA. WOW.
- "It's okay," 007's voice is trembling, but when he turns towards the pair there's a frigid smile on his face. "It's okay. You're not like this. You're not like this." The copium is unbelievable
- Omar looking like y/n the way he can fix everyone
- “He smiles as a spot of blood drops to the ground between them. "But it's okay. I will always forgive you." EWWW HE IS REALLY COSPLAYING GOD RN.
- “Over and over again she hears him use the word 'forgiveness'. Never once does she understand what he means.” Call his ass out!
- there is so much Omar this chapter wow
- “No, not the door, he's staring at someone.” Oh god. Is it Bowie.
- “He seems to have been calmed by Bowie's presence,” HELLO WHY.
- “"I'm proving," Omar says, swallowing breaths between words that look almost painful. "That I'm good, no matter what. I love them. I will be forgiven because, look, I've forgiven everyone." after everything they’ve all done to him! Wow he’s doing SO GOOD!
- god ew,
- “Their blurry eyes are still set on Omar. "Look at you, you're hurt." Why do they still sound concerned for him starts sobbing
- “"No!" Omar shouts, bringing the hammer up and holding it close to him. It almost looks like the way a child would hold a stuffed animal, but there's blood coating the handle.” Girl what the hell girl… haunting visual
- "They're here," Omar seethes. "They're here and that means everyone thinks they did it. They can't leave it alone. They can't understand that it was years ago and that she's already gone but they would never hurt her." Holy fuck he is projecting hardcore rn
- “"You would never hurt her." It's hard to tell if Bowie knows what they're saying, or if they're simply going off his words.” Someone get Bowie a job as a 911 operator the way they’re deescalating this shit
- or trying to at least
- “His next words are so soft Amadis isn't sure that she heard them correctly. "She would have forgiven me." MY FACE RN.
- "You don't get to make that choice, Omar," Bowie says with more certainty in their words. "Maybe she would, but you don't get to choose." They shake their head. "Not for this." OMFFFF SPITTING. SPITTING!
- “None of this conversation makes any sense to her. Who are they talking about?” CRYING HAHAHAH EVERYONE ELSE IS LIKE. MAN WHAT THE FUCK AM I WATCHING RN?
- “You don't know what you're talking about." Fighting words omo watch it
- “You said you wanted to help everyone get out. What happened to that?" Twirls hair
- they’re grilling tf outta him rn
- “Amadis sees the twitch of the hammer a moment before it happens. He swings it upwards, narrowly missing Bowie's chin” oh my god.
- “The second swing comes just as quickly, and this one lands hard at the top of their arm. "I would never hurt anyone!" DUDE. DUDE!
- “The first thing Amadis sees when she looks back at them is blood. It pours onto the floor and coats Omar's hand as he brings his hand away from his lower back.” HOOOOLY FUCK. HOLY FUCK? HELLO? OHH MY FUCKING GOD?
- DUDE. HE JUST PULLED THE KNJFE OUT HIS BACK? THATS FUCKING BONKERS HELLO?
- “He howls again as he takes a step towards Bowie. It's only at that point that Amadis sees the knife in their hand.” OR… BOWIE PULLED THE KNIFE OUT?
- “He rolls into a crawl before starting after them again. "You don't know!" Ohhh this is so deeply pathetic. Nice.
- This feels like it’s over for him tbh
- too long without doing anything about the injuries. He’s hurtling off the deep end donkey kong style(don’t ask me what that means)
- “There's so much blood but it's not enough to convince her that any of them are safe.” There’s nothing more terrifying than a boy with nothing left to lose!
- “She watches Dom help a sobbing Bowie to the floor. At the same time she finds her discarded knife sticking out of Omar's throat.” Hooohhhh fuck.
- yeah sayonara son.
- “His body convulses for what seems like an eternity, but his eyes are barely open. He reaches for something, but there's nothing in front of him. Everyone else in the room can do nothing but watch. No part of it feels real.” HES STRUGGLING FOR TOO FUCKING LONG STOP STRUGGLING.
- “She's the only one who was close enough.” Omg Myra kill…
- “"Is he dead?"

There's been no announcement, but the blood gives a better answer.” Jesus Christ I know it’s so joever but it’s even more concerning why the announcement hasn’t sounded yet. LIKE JUST. WHY ISNT HE DEAD YET. HELLO?
- “"Angel Jardinez has been eliminated. Ten contestants remain." God not the government name
- heaven jsut lost another angel, hahah…
- haaaahhhh…
- goddamn…
- “Amadis only stares in response, then shakes her head. Finally she opens her mouth, but it's not anything that Dom had hoped for. "Don't follow me." Damn lady.
- “She turns slightly away, as if that's going to convince her she's right. When it doesn't, she reluctantly shakes her head again. "Fine, let's just get her out of here." Dom ya big softie…
- goddamn what a section. no words. rip angel boy.
- I’m gonna pop some mfin champagne purrrrr:nail_care::nail_care::nail_care::nail_care:

- “He's had their hands covering his face since it was finalized.” THATS RIGHT HE DIDNT EVEN GET TO DO IT HIMSELF HAHAHA.
- “Lawrence finds it to be somewhat of a relief to look and almost immediately understand.” Open book right?
- open book x crazy closed ass book dynamic goes hard
- “The thought of Marcel laying dead by another hand while they sit in prison is one of nightmares.” Jesus fuck HAHAHAH.
- “- “ They hadn't realized that he'd been crying. This, for some reason, sends a strange dryness to their throat.” U r such a homosexual istg
- “It makes sense even if part of Lawrence's brain wishes to insist that it doesn't.” Waah heart clench…
- “Casi nods sharply, releasing a few more stray tears down his cheeks. "Good luck. I mean that." I guess… shit man…
- Omar’s dead, the party’s over… pack up the yaoi we’re going home..
- “Lawrence watches them until he's completely out of sight, and then for several minutes longer. They remain standing for even a while after that, until the silence starts to seep its way into their mind.” Dude he’s even emptier than before cmon HAHAHAH
- “Lawrence finds themself blinking faster, though it's hard to say why.” NOT HIM CRYING.
- “ They enjoyed their time with Casi but they will not go against his wishes.” Oh he is so peculiar. He is so important to me.
- eighteen boxes…
- “They're all wrong in their own way, longer in width than depth, but this one especially so. This one is see through.” What the fuck
- “"He tried," Lawrence says softly towards the transparent window. "They cared about you a lot." Not says softly ::((( i cry so hard I puke
- “Lawrence isn't certain if the bodies are truly there or if they're merely images.” What the fuck does that mean
- “Either way, they're glad at least that Casi never realized they were there.” Cási woulda defaced the everloving shit out of omar’s

- “He was a wonderful challenge for me to dive deep into a person that is so completely irredeemable.” hehe no it was my pleasure thank you for writing him so well… i couldn’t have put him anywhere else thats for sure!
- “I hope you appreciate the ending I decided to give him” shitted on by literally half the cast? No it Was great!
- pats his head GET IN THE FUCKING CASKET!
- the beginning of the end…

- that was a really enjoyable chapter em, thank u so much for giving my son a great story and outro :smile_cat: ""outro""... in quotations because i have a little theory... it is in the discord channel u sick fuck...

i have to change my tier list a lot
m*ne: omo
my meows: laurie, bowie, cuties: dom, marcy marcy
yea: amadis, eris, bridget, myra
man idk: casi, riley

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ladyqueerfoot chapter 34 . 1/2/2024
you think you're opressed? try submitting vasi and loving noam while also being a riley stan.

glad we've kept up the kitchen murder trend ! marcy is a great chef :)
FlawlessCatastrophe chapter 33 . 12/26/2023
rubs hand together interlude time...
to be so real i dont really know whats going on in these (theres a lot of subplot knowledge im missing...) but im here to show my support as a itc verse participant!

mina:
- "This doesn't feel like some kind of drill; the ones they've had have never been like this." haha yall are in danger
- "Mina has no desire to be in charge of whatever's happening, but someone needs to be." shes such a boss for this
- "His eyes almost look like his own again." i cant tell if this is a comforting or ominous statement
- ominously comforting?
- "There is no plan anymore," Levi says hurriedly. "We need to get out." oh fantastic! haha great!
- "the only people who they'd be concerned about breaking in would be FFN or the government" WHAT THE HELL DOES FFN STAND FOR IF NOT FANFICITON HAHAHA
- i might be dumb
- its ok
- "Of course they're worth it because Mina wants to believe that someone would've thought the same thing about her, about Zoe, about Rajan and Calvin and Guiliana and all the kids that died around them in the last decade." ;;; thats a ssentiment thats gonna make me emo as fuck

toe:
- "Please."

He doesn't know what exactly he's asking for. He can't think with all the noise." hes OUT of it
- "When you find them, tell them I already got out." hmm is she about to sack herself? cos thats what it feels like
- "Vito can't help but be unsettled by the emptiness in her voice." inch resting,,,
- "No sooner have the words left his lips than does Vito feel a sharp shove that sends him stumbling backwards." oop
- WJAS HAPPENING
- "I won't take you down with me." oh wow she really is sacking herself

rory:
- "She can't remember the last time she ate more than a few bites of a stale protein bar." oh um delicious
- "She doesn't want to believe Val really wanted to leave her. It's the only thing keeping her going. Yet, when she wants to scream their name the only thing that escapes is a whimper." ::((( meow...
- "The voice isn't them, but Rory wants it to be so badly that she can almost convince herself that it is." wahhh shes making me emo...
- "I can't lose her too." i got chills this is making me upset
- "Canada, I'm asking you to give me your attention. My name is Zoe Sanford. I'm alive, but that might not last too much longer. I'm going to tell you what really happened to us. I'm going to tell you the truth about The Cut." YOO HOLY SHIT
- WHATS HAPPENING FR,,,

mina:
- shes inconsolable ::(((
- "They didn't know what I was doing. I acted alone and trapped them here."

"No!" Mina shrieks" my god zoe is brave
- "Even if it means leaving Zoe behind.

Even if it means Mina will never forgive herself." this is awful
- this is awful im having a terrible time :::((((
- the feeling of losing something and Knowing youre losing them forever in the same moment? that is Awful
- "Put your hands up! All of you!" oh god

zoe:
- "She doesn't trust the Protestors, not fully, but she trusts Mina." wahhh...
- "If this doesn't work, if the network does find them, they'll be safe. Everyone will believe that this was all her fault." thats some crazy trust
- "Zoe's never believed in heaven or any of that, but her next breath is spent staring at the ceiling. It's as dusty and stained as the rest of the building, but she smiles up at it anyways. I miss you, El." ive gotten a lot of random chills this entire chapter idk man idk whats happening or why its happening but it does definitely feel significant
- "I might see you soon." STOPPP :( DONT SAY STUFF LIKE THAT
- "They lied not just to us but about us, to make us into the villains that deserved to die," the following examples suck so bad wow
- especially the moe one. awful
- "Their graves are empty." haunting.
- wow this verse's lore is EXTENSIVE
- "Aviv Vasilevsky was arrested for stealing a birthday cake for his mother. There were no other incidents on his record, and he was killed for it. Tell me that's justice." fucking awful
- "They made mistakes, they were kids." this sentiment is always echoed in this verse and it makes me miserable
- "These kids aren't expendable, they never were. Please." my eyes are warm wow stop

guiliana:
- "She tells herself she imagined the knock at the door, if for no other reason than to save the heartbreak. She peers up at it, but after several seconds it feels like she really must have dreamed it." wow the self gaslighting goes crazy
- "The slight unevenness of his smile, however, gives him away." HAHAH
- "We found them." flushed
- "They're going through a quick assessment before they'll be brought here for a more thorough one. Reports say that they're all doing well." omg wow! i think this is a w!
- "More often than not, he's brought her books to keep her occupied and they talked about the last ones he brought by." wow that is so real of him...

matt:
- "It feels like he's always been here, even if memory tells an opposite story. The thin clothes he was made to change into feel like they've become a permanent part of his skin." damn its been ages...
- "None of them will ever get out." ouhh the survivors that were kidnapped
- "The memory of Dr. Liu shouting for the nurses to get him under control could easily be false. It's not." okay maybe dr. liu is not much of a g as last pov made it seem
- i have no idea man...
- "Matt had nothing but his bare hands with which to try, but he did it anyway." dedication? desperation? both?
- "He knows they won't be released. He knows they can't be, the entire nation believes that they're all dead." oihhhhgh...
- "Afterall, no matter how hard he's tried, Matt's never been able to change anything." ending the chapter on a really optimistic note i see

wow i hope zoe is okay (shes probably not)
whats gonna happen ::(((
happy 200k em! see u next year! :D

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darthnell chapter 33 . 12/26/2023
Em this interlude wtf … ;—-; theyve been FOUND OUT…. God. I cant believe they had to leave Zoe this is miserable ;-; but im also glad she did the broadcast bc holy fuck? It Happened. It actually happened. And the scene where the soldiers were breaking into it on god. Fucking terrifying. She was so convinced they were gonna kill her i was half expecting them to shoot her point blank in the middle of the broadcast hhh..

Val and rory aughh.. the part where rory was realizing that levi forgot about her :withered: he Forgor.

Seeing Mina break down like this was fucking Awful btw. I hated that ;-; pls let her keep her friends ..

This is terrifying though like Zoe got the broadcast out but. FFN still found them in the end :withered: god what the Fuck is gonna happen to them now. Im so glad they got the broadcast out bc maybe, just maybe, that might be what saves them all ;-; please ;—;
Team Shadow chapter 33 . 12/26/2023
“The others don’t know that she’s been asked to stay and join it.” Oh mina what have you gotten yourself into

Vito and Zoe paired up feels like it will end very poorly for at least one of them, and I think it’s going to be Vito.

Gahhh Zoe is ballsy and has sentenced them all to death hasn’t she

Sob Aviv….he just wanted a fucking birthday cake…I’m mad about it all over again.

Holy shit that was intense. Rest in peace Zoe. You were strong and brave and that was fucking ballsy of you and honestly slay queen.

Oh fckng Dr. Liu is a liar and Guiliana fell for it. Matt didn’t.

Wow that was fckng intense Em.

I’m afraid. And I see why this chapter would scare the creators of these kiddos :)
ladyqueerfoot chapter 33 . 12/22/2023
WHAT THE FUCK? IS THIS? U CANNOT BE SERIOUS CAN NOT BE SERIOUS I JUST…. JESUS FUCKING CHRIST? WHY IS IT HERE? WHY THE FUCK IS IT HERE?

UGHJHHHHHH

WAT THE FUCK? IS THIS?

- WHERE IS MINA WTF
- HELLO ALARM?
- ITS 2023 BITCH!
- WHERE ARE MY FRIENDS?
- WHAT IS GOING ON!
- why is the door locked?
- WHY IS THERE CRASHING?
- FIND VITO?
- NO?
- WHY
- VITO MENTION NO!
- NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO
- ofc he gets his room loser has no friends rofl
- WHERE IS LEVI
- ALARM BAD
- EVACUATION BAD
- i miss calvin’s farm this is terrible terrible content
- why did i realize just now that calvin has a farm bc corey works at pet store
- im slow
- BROADCAST? what is being broadcast? my death? true
- ohh okay that broadcast
- eliminate toxic canadian media TRUE
- WILL IT MAKE A DIFFERENCE?
- WILL IT REALLY?
- okayyyy hi levi heart heart
- A BREACH?
- NO NO NOPE
- PERSISTENT NOO
- WHO TF IS IT?
- DR LIU ON CRACK?
- NO
- WE DO NEED TO GET OUT YEAH
- THIS ALARM LOUD ASF
- right yeah there is a government in canada its not just ffn and the protestors
- IT COULD’VE WORKED YEAH
- YES! THIRTEEN
- MINA CMON LET HER COOK
- they DO need to survive
- tbh i would not put it behind u to kill levi again
- but DONT
- SO MANY KIDS DID DIE LETS SAVE THEM BITCHESS
- GET OUT
- WHERE IS ZOE?
- WHERE IS SHE

- NO NO NO
- OH GOD NO
- EM NO
- WHAT THE FUCK EM?
- WHY IS HE HERE
- JULES KILLED HIM JULES WON REMEMEBRF
- WHO THE FUCK IS VITO WHY IS HE HERE
- WHYYYYYYYYY
- NOO
- HE IS MAKING A MAD DASH
- HE IS BLEEDING…
- NO THOUGHTS JUST VITO ALARM
- god he is so cool tbh
- rugged baddie if im being real
- VITOOOOO
- OH HI ZOE!
- VITO ZOE COLLAB TRUE
- yeah mina did tell her abt you vito
- go vito go
- VITOOOO
- NO SHE DIDNT LEAVE U BEHIND VITOOOO
- NO BABYGIRL ITS OKAY
- its okay i cant think with noise either
- vito so relatable so true so vito
- WHAT IS ZOE DOING
- she is CRYING?
- vito know ur history shes zoe
- NO
- DEWEI MENTION YEOUCH
- VITO FLASHBACK ADJACTENT YEOWCH
- regret… but not fear
- COME WITH HER OH NO
- RUN BOY RUN
- UNDERGROUND VITO?
- tbt to vito underground arena
- OH we’re at the commanders door
- god VITO what are you doing here
- ur gonna get urself killed
- except u won’t because em won’t even kill u
- so i just have to suffer
- i lowkey missed u vito
- but not THIS MUCH
- UGH vito do u need to pee
- peeto?
- WHERE ARE WE TRUE
- OH good! yeah he knows her name
- good question where IS mina
- also hi levi i am assuming u are levi
- ugh vito crying WHY
- EM U ARE RUINING MY LIFE RN
- WHY ARE WE WIPING A SYSTEM WHAT IS THIS
- vito ur hearing amazes me
- this reminds me of vito and lev watching the tapes
- ugh vito moment fr
- GO CHECK!
- DO IT SHE SAID PLEASE
- CMON FEET GO WORK
- YEAH BEAT HIS ASS THANK GOD
- OH GAWD WHAT WAS THIS
- WHATTTT
- Zoe u are so cool but what is happening

- UMMM HI RORY
- I HATE THUIS ALREADY
- SHE IS SO… meow
- rorentine separation makes me want to gouge my eyes out btw
- IM SO NERVOUS!
- istg if val dies
- i’ll act violently
- they didnt wanna leave u i promise
- this is TERRIBLE
- oh shit who is it?
- is it ZOE?
- zoe’s big chapter TRUE
- oh jk its MINA!
- ughhh poor rory doesnt know levi is trying
- IDK WHERE ZOE IS EITHER GIRL
- WHERE IS VAL
- WHERE ARE THEY?
- WHERE IS ZOE AND VAL
- WHAT IS SHE FINISHING
- OH SHIT
- ZOE U ARE A BAD BITCH
- OH MY GOD

- WHATS HAPPENING
- MINA ZOE HELP
- UGH ZOE IS SUCH A BAD BITCH
- ZOE FOR PRESIDENT TRUE
- zoe a better politician then noam’s dad fr fr
- om CALVIN
- okay yes levi find val
- we need to get zoe
- what the fuck is this
- WHAT IS THIS POOJA?
- i love u zoe
- i love u so much zoe
- DONT LEAVE HER BEHIND OH NO
- OH NO NO NO
- ugHHH
- OH NO
- ARREST? JAIL ARC 2

- UGH ZOE U ARE SO COOL AND SO BRAVE I LOVE U
- UGH I MISS EL TOO YES I MEAN UR EL
- UGhhhhh RIP elise
- i hate thisss
- zoe please dont die i will be devastated
- YES HACKER ERA CUNTY SLAY
- NO DONT SEE HER PLS DONT DIE
- EXPOSE THEIR ASSES YES BITCH
- she is so cool i love her
- yeahhhh poor aviv’s waiver
- and then the replacement shit after bear’s misstep
- YEAH GO AND SPILL THE TEA
- YEAHHH
- EDEN IS STILL ALIVE UIGH WHY REMIND ME
- YES I LOVE HER SO MUCH THO ZOE IS SO EPIC
- YEAH AVIV THAT IS SO SAD THAT IS NOT JUSTICE
- YEAHHHH THEY WERE SENT TO DIE ITS SO FUCKED UPP THEYRE FUCKED
- i miss jesse
- THEY WERE KIDS
- i have such a huge crush on her
- she is so cool
- THEY NEVER WERE TRUE
- YES UR THERE ONLY CHANCE
- tbh i have never really settled on a fave character in the verse but like ive considered it a bunch and yeah its zoe mf standford

- HI GIGI! oh noooo….
- WHY IS SHE IN TORONTO GENERAL
- GRAHHHHHHH I HATE SO MUCH
- WHY IS DR LIU
- NO NO NO NO NO
- I HATE HIMM
- GETFUKCOUT OF HERE
- WHO DID WE FIND
- oh the other winners
- right
- theyre not alright or okay LOL poor gigi
- UGHHHHH HATE THIS GUY

- GET MATT OUT OF HERE
- BULLY VITO ALL U WANT BUT MATT IS UNACCEPTABLE
- EDEN MENTION WTF
- TWO IN ONE CHAPTER
- NONE OF THEM WILL EVER GET OUT fuckkkk
- matt should’ve killed him tbh
- but he is a nice boy
- HOW DARE HE
- YEAH HOW DARE HE
- tbh u can kill eden i would be pleased w that
- but also WTF
- NOOOOOO NO NO NO

ughhh

happy holidays
darthnell chapter 32 . 12/15/2023
Oh this one was rly so neat ;—; cant say im too shocked abt shane there.. i was wondering what was gonna happen if someone never made it to the common area. Poor guy though that sucks ;-;

The trials themselves were a lot of fun :0 i thought for sure someone was gonna end up dying there :sob: especially w dom and bridget’s.. (also casi and amadis, once amadis figured out there was a bomb i fr thought it was gonna take them both out. Glad it didnt though, that wouldve made me sad ;-; ) bridget was fun here, now that she no linger has shane, i feel like shes gonna get real vicious.. burn bright and then die out kind of vibe..

Speaking of burning, i rly loved that whole sort of imagery thing you did with marcy when she was spiraling about being compared to laurie, that was so neat :0

Myra and Ram for sure stole the show here ;—; myra… bby…. Her sheer willpower not to hurt ram was insane, like the degree you took that to was rly good. I wasn’t expecting Ram’s whole attempt at feigning the fight but that went so hard, and now its gonna change how they see each other ohhh man ;—; no idea if shell want to stick around them again or if theyll be able to explain.. aghh ;_; if myra ends up on her own though pls dont let her NEAR omar id throw up :sob:

Currently i think Myra and Amadis are my picks for victor.. i love them muchly ;-;
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