OMAKE:

"You know, Mr. Weasley, you're worse than death eaters. They never pretend to be anything but monsters. You see them, you know you'll suffer.

"You, however, wrote and had made into law special muggle protection. And yet, as soon as those muggle protection laws are inconveniencing your dark lord, he orders you to ignore and break them, and like a good little slave, you turn off brain and conscience and do his bidding. You just enter a muggle dwelling without being invited and kidnap their muggleborn teenage daughter. When they object you play the 'I'm a mighty wizard, you're nothing but useless muggles and I'll do with your teenaged daughter whatever I want!' card.

"Perhaps I should have Hermione checked for sexual activity and obliviations. Who knows what you really did to her. Or I would check if the Granger parents are still alive and that you did not force Mr. Granger to disembowel his wife under the Imperius and torture him to death with the Cruciatus afterwards, because it's so funny when they scream. Or perhaps check muggle files if Hermione had a younger sister that conveniently no one remembers after you have raped her to death in front of her family. You obliviating them with the same disregard for their rights as you kidnapped their child wouldn't surprise me. At all.

"You are nothing but a power hungry, lying hypocrite. Just like your dark lord Dumbledore."

Great story! I very much enjoyed reading this. Thank you for writing it.

I love yor story. Thank you. The only thing that i hate is the OMAKE with Ginny. It triggert the following rant: Why are nearly always the girl demonised for sleeping with boys? She slept with 20 boys, so what? Girls are not used tissues, boys can use for their enjoyment and than discard. Women have the same right to enjoy their sexuality as man. I wish socyeties would stop asking girls to keep themself pure and encourage boys to seed their seeds. We are equal..or we should be. It really makes me angry. Sex is natur and should not be used to repress people. And we need to educate people on pregnancy and sexual deseises. Unfortunately fanfiction writer, in order to bash Ginny or other girls, often use this road, it is the same in real live. Still i had a lot of fun reading your story, very creative!

Good read!

Loving all the bits of lore and history - thanks!

sharing !

Haha! Love your roasting of the obnoxious, pearl clutching Pepperonyfan! My God, I’m nearly sixty and back in the Eighties, ‘retarded’ was just a common word to describe someone who was a bit backwards, just as ‘moronic’, and ‘imbecile’. Then, in the Nineties, we all laughed with George Carlin about Politically Correct people using ‘soft Words’ and now softskulled Karens like Pepperonyfan troll the internet in order to out-Granger Hermione Granger in their zeal to Correct Speech.

Brilliant story it was breathtaking!

heheh, funny and dramatic. still like the monty python feel to the whole story. :)

heheh, broke out the thesaurus on that rant. Good on ya! :) It almost sounded quite monty python-esk. :)

Great response, loved it

Excellent. Creative writing teachers say that new writers should show, not tell, but IMHO you tell one heck of a story. Thank you!

Extra Kudos for the OMAKE with Molly and the lion.

Standing obvation

I love the phrase "superfluous to requirement."

Dropping by for a reread and discovered your author's note. I had a good laugh at that, so thank you. I'm sorry you had to read such an inflammatory comment, but unfortunately some people are just like that. I don't really understand taking offense to a writer using period appropriate dialogue. I was a preteen and teenager in the 90s and can confirm that the dreaded "R" word was a commonly used epithet back then. I don't have to like it, but it was a thing and I'm not going to pretend otherwise.

Of course, I am firmly against the expurgation of books to "edit out" the offensive bits, so I may be a tad biased. Censorship doesn't mean something didn't happen. Equally, leaving in the offensive bits doesn't mean that the author personally subscribes to or wishes to promote those words, beliefs, etc., that people are pitching tantrums about. However, I have noticed a growing lack of understanding regarding this point, and I don't know whether I find the genuine or the wilful ignorance to be more disheartening.

Meanwhile, I enjoy your writing and only wish that you had the time/desire to flesh out your fan stories a bit more. I understand why you do not, but I still wish.