I liked this story when it was a one shot and the longer one is even better. Yes everything is really going there way which other people often complain about but I like that bribery and calmly talking to other people and explaining what the problem as they know it is and asking for help is how everything is being solved.

Perfect revenge would be to get Snape on their side - after all "Murder attempt by werewolf" is quite nasty...and the Marauders have a lot to apologise...

If necessary use this life debt to get the Professor on your side...he can be a very valuable ally, and it would be also a way to show that the Marauders have learned from their past mistakes...which I doubt...maybe Dan Granger can talk some sense into them...

It's good to see them freeing himself from bad influence...

Oh boy. Albus is going to be roommates with mundungus (his parents must have hated him at birth) with the mistakes he’s made being caught. I hope snape is right there with him if he’s not playing tonsil hockey with the dementors. Maybe they’ll be generous and he can share a cell with Umbridge and cuddle for warmth.

That's going to put a cave lion amongst a group of hippogryphs!
That's going to be hilarious!

Delicious

Thanks for the update. Thay make my day.

O-C

} "Mr Black, I am sorry [Hermione] is such a little fool as to trust that twinkly-eyed old bastard," said Dan.

I love this line, because it's Dan showing tough love, not Molly-type coddling of his misbehaving child.

"Wow" that Hermione made an actual oath on her magic to put Harry above Dumbledore. Eat offal, Albus!

I like your explanation of how Lily's anti-AK spell worked: Because Voldy was unknowingly or uncaringly trying to kill his own heir.

The scene of Sirius telling Dumbledore to pack sand, whilst Dumbledore again acts all "disappointed grandfather"—love it.

Hermione is named Black heiress secondary. She has a greater chance of one day becoming Black Head of House than Draco has—I love it!

Great story. The memory of Dumbledore trying to strip Sirius' magic needs to be played for everyone on the Order. They should know, if they don't already suspect, that Dumbledore would go that far to get his own way.
LOL on the omake. I am picturing him regenerating: First thought David Tennant. Second thought Christopher Eccleston. Harry is young enough that John Hurt's Doctor is too old.

Love this fic! The little bit at the end of chapter 2 was just so funny lol! Can't wait for more.

loved it so far keep up the great work thank you

I get rather tired of the Grangers taking over so many stories, but I really like your take-charge Dan. Often he's such a wimp. So did Dumbledore know Lily was descended from Slytherin and lie to Harry, or did he not know because they kept it secret?

...so is Harry The Doctor now? Will he get to use his Sonic Screwdriver on Dumbledore and Voldemort? Maybe get a time-turner so he can indulge in some wibbly-wobbly timey-wimey shenanigans? lol.

Interesting

Glad to see Dan stand up to his daughter.

2nd chapter same as the first. LOL good. Little snit indeed. That comment and Dumble's attitude cost him that wig & beard, please? (Burnt off). If possible, do something similar to Molly, anything nasty really. Finally, someone able to get through Hermione's thick skull that AD isn't God. Dan Granger makes a formidable adversary. His logic teamed with Sirius' mischievousness could light a fire under ADs' ridiculous order. (Was listening to some old rock for that first line). More fun, please. Thank you.

I love the story, but that omake made me snort coffee from my nose. Funny, but painful!

Kudos : )