|Reviews for Hard Night|
| Out of the Shadows chapter 1 . 9/15/2005
First off, I really don't care much for your mixing the X-Men into Love Hina. But thats just because I'm against mixing any of the different story lines together. However, I do like your story, nuff said.
Oh, BTW, I had an idea you could use. I was going to do this myself, and I still might, but it could still be interesting to see how others did it. Self-insert your residual self image(how you see your self in Love Hina situations) but don't let it on that that is your plan. Just create a character and introduce him/her into the fic, thus causing a balance of romance and humor.
I will leave how you do this up to you. Good luck!
| Taiyou no Senshi chapter 1 . 7/15/2003
Very nice. I like the concept. Oh, and I ran out of Talking Hamsters about an hour ago. Mah bad!
| TheZeusJuice chapter 1 . 7/15/2003
A very interesting train of thought. I hope you'll continue it! _
| Tuxedo Jack chapter 1 . 7/10/2003
Waiwaiwai! You're finally back!
A Keitaro with split personalities? Could he be phyisically duplicating himself? Oh, my, Su's machines could be of use here.
All in all, I rather like this, and I do expect you to continue it.
| Baka-Alaskan chapter 1 . 7/9/2003
That was great! I think a three-part if a great idea. Keep ti up talon. It was a great look into Mutsumi's heart and a small small look into the others hearts. Very good.
Long Live Shinobu and the SFFAL
| Kettu chapter 1 . 7/8/2003
Damm, And I mean Damm
That was suprisingly, uhh, Dark, no, umm whats the word, Starts with A, used when brooding.
Uhh, Angst, I think.
Any who, that was one dramatic turn considering your usual stuff.
From 's local arcane monstrostity, Soul.
| NachoManLance chapter 1 . 7/8/2003
I wish I had a talking hamster...
A nice sequal from Peace of Mind, I can see it fit in. Well done, my friend. The three-part sounds pretty good to me, so keep going. I, meanwhile, need to work on my current fic, which has just been omenned (that a word?) by Kana himself,...d'oh
| jennyjennai chapter 1 . 7/8/2003
I want you to continue this. I am in the minority, but I felt that Keitaro and Mutsumi had a kind of "soul connection" to each other and that a promise that was really made to two people instead of one. When he went out on the date with Mutsumi in the manga, it seemed as if he was mezmerized by her and that something serious would have developed if Naru had not interrupted them. I am truly a Mutsumi/Keitaro fan. It's not that I don't like Naru, but she was extremely abusive to him. I don't believe that she loved him at all because she wouldn't admit it. A neat idea would be to write a fic 3 years after "the wedding" to see just what happened.
To get back to the subject... I liked the fic very much - it seems as if the characters will begin to move from their anime-manga stereotypes into more realistic human behavior.
How about a Love Hina Again-Again? Heh, just keep up the good work I say!