|Reviews for Sins Of The Children|
| AstraInclinant010 chapter 1 . 1/28
This was heart wrenching. A beautiful read and the horror of the situation for everyone involved was incredibly well conveyed.
| Garota Nerd chapter 1 . 4/16/2019
I really liked the opinion you've transmitted throught your story, people need to stop bullying and this is a good way to send the message. I only have one question though, What would happen if Severus woke up?
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/13/2018
What about Lily's reaction?!
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/10/2018
Damn. I almost teared up..
| TwistingHope chapter 1 . 7/14/2018
This was the story I never knew I needed to read. Thanks for writing it.
| tigerlily124 chapter 1 . 5/28/2018
Yes, an important look at the possible results of bullying. Good job!
| Bamafan101 chapter 1 . 5/19/2018
Like this very much! I HATE the Marauders! Couldn’t stand the bullies as soon as I learned everything about them in the books! Especially Potter and Black...loath them!
| FlowerChild23 chapter 1 . 2/4/2018
Wow! This is really good but sad. Always hated Dumbledore for allowing bullies into the school
| DeidreCypress chapter 1 . 12/4/2017
I'm literally sobbing. This was a very well written story. It portrayed the marauders perfectly even though it lacked certain details. I'm also glad that you addressed this common worldwide problem at the note you wrote at the end. Thank you.
| KarisTasogare chapter 1 . 11/28/2017
a sad tale, but one I can see as far more likely than what JKR gave us. the French have an expression for Evil: "fleur du Mal", which this story illustrates th correctness of.
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/20/2017
I'm glad that you decided to write this. It really sends out a message. I think Severus was a really misunderstood chraracter, I mean sure he was harsh but there was a reason for that. And also , yes, Sirius came from a dark home aswell which explains his bullying behaviour.
I feel like people just don't take suicide and self harm seriously enough. I mean, I've had suicidal thoughts and I have self harmed but like, well, people just look at something like this on the news and think "whatever".
So yeah I'm really glad you wrote this. It's really good aswell.
- a random guest called holly
| Jessicamathews65 chapter 1 . 8/20/2017
So sad. The image of Severus in that hospital never growing completely is so haunting I cried as in ugly crying with snot all over. But I love what you addressed and how you addressed it.
| ArcturusBlack chapter 1 . 7/31/2017
I'm going to be a horrible person right now. I rarely get mad at writers, but I'm afraid I lost hope when I read the first paragraph. And there is no WAY that Neville can be the chosen one or the boy who lived. This really was, and I'm so sorry for saying this, one of the worst fan fictions I've ever read. I am so sorry. So so sorry.
| minato chapter 1 . 6/25/2017
While this is a great fic i just wish that lily had more involment.
| Lumiellie chapter 1 . 5/13/2017
This is haunting. Despite some of the details not being accurate, this really chilled me down to the bone.