Reviews for Extinguished: The 110th Hunger Games (SYOT) |
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FlawlessCatastrophe chapter 42 . 6h roman: - "Roman had hoped the world would have stopped spinning by now." NOOO BROS HEADACHE IS KILLERRRR - "Every time that happens, Ozzy asks him if he’s okay." mf do i LOOK okay - getting ur head hit in the pit is apart of the game i fear - "Another fucking rock." SO MANY ROCKS OP... - “Well. You’re not trying to kill me now!” Ozzy laughs weakly" that can change like. immediately. - "Part of Roman doesn’t blame him. Part of Roman wants to strangle him." gulps loudly - "His instinct is to hit it away, but he doesn’t. He lets his ally touch him. He lets him try to comfort him." this is... - "Ozzy is the first. And Roman still tried to kill him.)" watch me try to kill you next - “You’re a brave man, Ozzy,” Roman responds. “I think you mean stupid.” “I don’t.” puts my head through a wall to be honest - wow roman is trying to actively surpress MURDEROUS IMPULSES - "If he dies, at least he’ll hopefully die as someone Ermias, and the rest of his siblings, will still be proud to call brother. That’s all he has left. He’s not losing that. Not now, not ever." IM GOING TO KILL MYSELF NOOOOOOOOOOO - OOOUHHH OOHOHGHHGHGH choux: - "He’s dead, and she’s alive." only sexy girls on top! - "Of her cashing out on her grandfather’s deal." SWEET SWEET INHERITANCE ALL FOR CHOUX - "She won’t care about any of it. She’ll be home. She’ll be rich." I LITERALLY SUPPORT EHR SOOOO HARD FROM THE START SHE ALWAYS KNEW WHAT SHE WANTED FROM THIS PLACE - "She knows all the Careers are dead, at least." actual last man standing. god shes such a fucking icon - "She can’t underestimate them. Whoever is left, they’re fighting as hard as she is." she's also so smart too UGHHHH - "(Knowing how angry her siblings would be helps motivate her." YESSSSS SPITE :fire: :fire: :fire: :fire: - "It surprises her to see an alliance this far into the Games, but the two boys stand side by side" head in my mfin hands - "(Luck has always been kind to Choux Macbeth, and now is no different.)" i want choux to get everything she wants bruh - "And when she sees the fourth and final tribute take a stance on the beach, she knows she has time to wait the fire out." GHGKKK... - "And then, the silence will come." SO OMINOUS. I START SOBBING vet: - OH GOD GUYS... OHHHHHHH - "But nothing hurts as much as hearing the birds sing above him." YOUWANT TO HGET YOUR ASS BEAT HUH YOU WANT TO GET BEAT UP - "(He doesn’t think Chaffinch would want that." NO HE WOULDNT BRUH ::::(((( - "He took away someone’s son. The worst part is the lack of guilt.)" its AMATUS dude... i wish i could give him the perspective that that was actually completely ok - "If he dies…who will remember his friends?)" YOU HAVE TO LIVE MF! - oh i feel so emotional rn i feel like i want to die - "He imagines seeing his pups and hawks again. Those thoughts alone bring him a semblance of joy, not big enough to replace the void in his heart, but enough." WEEPS SO BITTERLY - "He briefly wonders if they would be friends." oh don't do this to me - "It’s not loud and it’s likely the cameras don’t even pick it up. That’s fine with him. He’s not apologizing to the Capitol." period i say, but the sound is muffled by my much louder sobbing - "One last fight." actual dry heaving cassius: - THE FUUCKKK A HG POV - "Things change fast in Cassius’ Games. Every moment is a highlight." BAHHAH THIS MF... - "Even though Cassius can see the hesitation in each of the boys, he knows it will be a good show." [kills myself] - the mess in the capitol you say... lear: - OHHHH WE GOING HOME AND SHIT OHHHH - "It’ll pale in comparison to Choux’s victory, at this rate. When was the last time a One girl put on a real show?" BAHHAHAHA - "He’d rather people come to him and apologize for ever doubting his granddaughter. He wants people to beg and plead to get the honor of even speaking to him." JESUS BAHAHHAHA OMLLL this old man - "He has faith." they have such a fascinating dynamic. grandfather and granddaughter mr moquette: - fuck this guy - "He knew putting a hit out on his own son was a risk." really insane unhinged thing to do yeah - "He considers bringing the television up to Scarlet and letting her watch her brother rise or fall," bruh - "He’s almost gotten through to her, and seeing Oswaldo again might set her back." my eye starts twitching violently - "Scarlet is anything but content." OHHH SCARLET IN THE HOUSE SCARLTE IN THE HOUSE - "She’s fortunate her father got complacent. One loose binding and she’s free from the hell that is her father." PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE - "With the quiet opening of a window and some careful maneuvering down a brick wall, Scarlet Moquette is free. All she can hope now is Ozzy is on his way to join her in freedom." THROWS UP IM SO GLAD SHE GOT AWAY KGOUGGHHHHH ermias: - ;;;;;;;;; im gonna die - "He hopes when Roman makes it home, he can still do those things. Ermias may not understand a lot, especially not what Roman’s going through, but he knows his brother." ohhhhhhhh - parents doing parent cosplay LMFAO - “Roman needs our support. We need each...each other.” Now it’s Ermias’ turn to struggle to find the words." HES BEING SO BRAVE... HES CHANNELING ROMAN... - i hate you so bad moose jon: - "The same cannot be said about Jon. Every step away from the TV the Games have been playing on is another step away from his son." head in my hands - "He realizes how little time he actually spent with his son, and how few meaningful conversations they shared." sobs... vet was content with the cofmortable silence sobs - "He realizes later, how insane it is for him not to recognize his own sister." DAMN MF - "He doesn’t…he can’t be someone Vetiver is disappointed in.)" CLUTCHES MY FUCKING HEADDD - “Do you want to be with family? They’re…near the end.” you FUCKING BTICH ILL RIP THE HEAD OFF YOUR FUCKING NECK MOOSE! - FJHKDSGUILVSFJHBM HUILFJIHWO*(TUHUJRVYUIHOU IM TWEAKING oz: - OHHH GOD OH GOD - "Blood stains his clothes and Ozzy can’t imagine how many kills he’s had." witewwy one... - “Stay behind me,” he mutters to Roman." wow BAHHAH - so chivalrous.. - “Roman!” Ozzy sees his ally barreling towards the duo, rock in hand." THE FUCKING ROCKKKK - "(He apologizes to himself, too, for he failed himself the most.)" BROOOOOO - "When the sword is pulled out of his body, Roman collapses beside Ozzy." YOU MOTHERFUCKER. NOOOOOO - “Thank you,” he mutters through coughs of blood and tears. “Thank you for staying.” IM GIAUYHGBNG GTO EJKILL SNEYSFKFFF - "He’s lost everything." MOOOOOSE EEI STARTS OBBINGGGG - ROMAN... OHBFGOD OH FUCK choux: - choux gon get the drop on ozzy and THEN ITS. VET V CHOUX FINAL TWO OOIHHHHHH - "(Unfortunately for Choux, it seems this is her only option. And she’s never been a quitter.)" BAD BITCH BAD BITCH OOOOOHHH - "She doesn’t peek to see which boy it is. It doesn’t matter in the end. Both will die." SHES SUCH A BADASS BUT IM ALSO SO SCARED GOD I HATE LIKE EVERY OUTCOME OF THIS KLHGSKGNGJG - "Choux needs that knife. The Ten boy is closing in. She needs that knife." I CANT EXPALIN TO YOU HOW TENSE THIS IS RIGHT NOW - "One more. One more person to outsmart. No more mistakes." VET V CHOUX I FEEL SICK HOW THE FUCK COULD YOU MAKE ME CHOOSE BETWEEN TWO FAVES YOU ASSHOLE vet: - "The Eight boy’s body is fully burnt by the time Vetiver turns away from him." JESUS CHRIST... - "Chaffinch and Exa, dead because of him.)" NONOONONON - “Amatus was standing over your dead body,” she finally asks after neither of them moves." damn that really is her memory of him huh LMFAOOO - HEAD IN MY HANDS - "The other one. That’s all they are to these trained monsters." HOLDING MY HEAD OHOOOHHH THE VOICE SOOOHHHH I CANT COPE - hello grandfather again... - SCARLET HELLO... - "When she finally finds him, her heart shatters." FUFUCKKKK... - "He can’t sit on the couch in the spot he watched…" I CANNNTTTT - OP I CANT COPE - "It will be bloody. It will be gruesome. But he has to watch." LITERALLY CANT DO ANYTHING ELSE. - OHHH MOOSE INCLUDING THE FAMILIES IS SOS CRUEL AND UNUSUAL ITS SO SMART AND SO DEVASTATING BUT FUCKK I HATE YOU RIGHT NOW! - "After some time, she realizes he’s baiting her. He’s not moving from where he is." hes not playing these games! - "He falls in the water, pain shooting up his tailbone." THE WATER... OCEAN FIGHT - OHHH ITS SO CINEMATIC - “You’re naive if you think that,” Vetiver says through a pained gasp. “We were destined to pain the moment we took the reaping stage.” clapped her i fear - “Maybe you were.” She grips her single knife tighter. “I was destined for glory.” WHAT A FUCKING BANEGR LINE SHE CLAPPED HIM RIGHT BACK OHHHHH - "She can’t see him. … He can’t see her." GULPS SO FUKING LOUD I BLOW UP THE EARTH - "He thrusts his sword down. It finds her chest." OHHHHH FUCKKKK... - OH FUCK OH FUCK - "Quiet comes for Choux Macbeth, but not the quiet she hoped for. Not the quiet she was promised. No, this quiet is much darker. Bleaker. It’s final." STOP - I FUCKING KNEW ... I FUCKING KNEW! - “Congratulations to the Victor of the 110th Hunger Games, Vetiver Brune from District Ten!” ACTUALL FEELS SICK - "I’m sorry Finch." THESE WERE HIS LAST ""DYING"" THOUGHTS? YOU SICK AND TWISTED MOTHERFUCKER - "How did a boy from Ten usurp a Macbeth?" OHHHHHHHUHHHHHUHHH - "Vetiver’s coming home. He gets his son back." GOOD LORD. WHAT AN INCREDIBLE PAIR OF LINES TO END IT ON ohhhh god... final eulogies im gonna frow up roman: he routinely hit me in the feels bruh. bro did EVERYTHING for his siblings. those characters always gut punch me like crazy. starts sobbing thinking about how he wanted to die as someone his siblings could still recognize... youre fucking joking. im tearing up again just thinking about it. he had such a nice bro alliance until uuuhhh until they all started dying off. really awkward. but he made a lot of really meaningful connections and shockingly stuck it through with ozzy bro until the very end, even taking a hit for him... what a guy. rest in peace roman i hope heaven gives you back your brain cells ozzy: a really wild but consistently entertaining character. one of the most messed up backstories ive had to sit with for a while but im glad his sister could escape. it actually broke my heart though watching her find out where he was tho SOOOOBS. good friend even though i was wildly flopping back on forth on his and romans intentions with each other for a while. crazy hallucination delusion gas will do that to you! gg ozzy you played brilliantly choux: GOD... GOD WHAT CAN I SAAAAYYY... she was the boss bitch of this syot. genuinely playing on a level UNPARALLELED. words cannot express how much i adore choux and that held up all the way to the end and forevermore. she was so evil but soooo determined you just have to respect it. its nothing personal, she just had things she wanted! i could never fault her for that. she was so effortlessly badass and cool and yeah its 1000% on brand that she repeatedly evaded death until THE MF FINAL 2 HAHAHAH. her power her mind. wow rip to a total powerhouse. my 2nd favorite character in this syot, of course after... VET: HRJHAJKRJRBFMAJNF DNAGJAJRIWN ANJGOES FKUCKIGN FERAL! MY BOY BROUGHT IT HOME LET SFUCKING GOOOOOOO! oh god him going sicko mode scared the shit out of me and man alLL OF THOSE FLASHBACAKS TO FINCH WERE SOOOO... SOOO OUT OF POCKET... BRUSTS INTO TEARS BUT OH MY GOD HE REALLY DID IT. what a horrific final day for him. everything just changed for good. poor baby ;;;;; but im so glad his dad can see his son again. and the dogs Ohhhhhhhh... ohhhhhhh... THATS MY VICTOR DUDE... DONT UNDERESTIMATE THE STRENGTH OF A DESPERATE GRIEVING OUTER DISTRICT TRIBUTE... im so scared to see the repercussions of this Moose you have to treat him well Please Please Please i cant believe extinguished is coming to a close. this syot has been an absolute joy to read ;;;; youve seriously grown so much since intros alone, its frightening how attached i got to so many of the characters. witnessing the evil things u did to them... shakes head. (whispers) im proud of you... Whoa who said that. Raises fist at you Grrrr moose im going to enact horrible acts of violence for what you did to these little guys...! anyway im 1000% strapped in for myot2 YAYAYYA TIME TO PUT MYSELF THROUGH MOOSE TRAUMA AGAIN YAYYYY looking disrespectfully at this epilogue. you better act right LOVE, BROOKE :heart: BLOWS U A KISS |
Nautics chapter 42 . 11/19 Hi Moose. This is more just a random assortment of thoughts from me. I just had to say well done for finishing this fic! Seeing you grow as a writer over the last 3 years since we started writing together has been insane. It seems like only yesterday that we all sent our kids in for this fic and now it's over. What a great finale too, I loved the constant action and transitioning to the families of the tributes (Scarlet escaped! What?!) I loved what you did with Ozzy and the arc you gave him and congrats to Vet! I've gotta send you another kid for your next syot. But yeah I'm proud of you! |
Nemris chapter 42 . 11/19 In moments like this, I like to bastardize one of the favorite quotes from Genghis-Khan-in-Space: "There is only one unforgivable lie. That is the lie that says: this is the end, you have triumphed. You have achieved it, and now all that remains is to build that victory into a shelter and hide behind it. Now the lie says Vetiver is safe." Whoah. That a great ending that was to the Games. Wonderfully written and satisfying. It really felt like a nice arc, like the final two standing had not just randomly stumbled there without a proper narrative to move them into position. So many neat details, like for example the spear that was a remembered part of the battlefield and was used by multiple people when they needed a weapon. Sand and rocks as a weapon, and making sharpened sticks when nothing else was left. It is little things like that that make the story about a fight to the death come alive interestingly. Roman was the least likely to win, ever since his head injury. Ozzy had good chances, but was poorly armed. Roman's and Ozzy's chances relied on them being able to over power their opponents thanks to having made it as an alliance into the finale, but their lack of proper weapons and his injured state just did not allow them to push trough. This really reminds how important weapons are, as that single sword that Vetiver got from Amatus (one that Choux failed to hide after taking him down btw, BIG mistake) really was the decisive factor in this ending. A proper weapon is such a huge factor in human melee combat that it cannot be underestimated, with not even possible martial arts being able to help closing that gab well enough. Choux, she made a wonderful finale opponent, who could also have worked as a victor, even fi a clear villain victor. She was a bit too clever for her own good, and not good enough in a melee fight. If you look at these games, Choux is a huge part why a career victory became so unlikely and the chances of outliers skyrocketed (3 outliers vs 1 career, the odds were not in her favor had the boys been more informed/smarter about taking her out). The career pack strategy relied on alliance for a reason, and anytime the pack falls apart early, the outliers become hugely more likely to win. Choux was a dangerous tribute, but mostly to her allies, who are of course her most dangerous competition, but far from only real threat in Hunger Games. You know, In-universe, I can almost imagine that when careers win a few years in a row, they become more oriented against each other and prone to just this type of internal collapse. Then when they see a game like this, they remember why the pack strategy is so effective even to the late game. Vetiver. Oh Vetiver. He was not on my radar as possible victor at the times of the bloodbath and not even in the mid game. I can't recall but he could have even been a possible bloodbath guess for me. He did not have a lot that endeared me to him, other than his alliance relations and his memorable dog backstory, but in these couple final chapters he really solidified into someone I noticed I rooted for against Choux while they brawled in the shallow waters. That moment when he picked up the sword even when injured and went forward with the intention of fighting to go home was marvelous. There are many outliers in these games that I cannot imagine being capable of killing and thus not winning other than by accident, and for a long time I felt Vetiver was such a gentle soul. But no, he proved himself a fighter who did what needed to be done even when people like Roman and Ozzy stood in his way, it was them or him. It was such a great moment. Some SYOT stories fail to capture the change that the Games can cause in individuals towards self preservation and survival, but this one was super solid stuff. It reminds us that humans are not good and humans are not evil, and that many ordinary people can do horrid things in the right circumstances; good people have gone to war for all of human history. The Hunger Games are a wicked invention that preys upon the dark side of humanity for our (us readers as well) entertainment. It is great to see this very true Hunger Games finale play out, knowing that these people have a metaphorical gun to their head, a force that has ushered them into this scenario, this game board, and how they react in a way that is so dark but perfectly understandably and unapologizingly human. Huh. What a ride it has been. Still the final chapters to go two wrap up the narrative in a proper way. Congratulations to Nell. And let us hope the future story in this universe manages to live up to these games. Keep up the GREAT work. |
darthnell chapter 42 . 11/18 oh my god moose.. im still reeling from this but oh my god. my boy ! my boy lives ! ;-; :heart: i truly did not think it would be him u had me so absolutely stressed during this whole finale :sob: the whole thing moose... everything was so so well done like god damn. first off, roman - i love what you did with his arc so much. the struggle between his head injury and how it was making him act out of character vs what he actually wanted to do.. it was so visceral and even though he died in the end, im glad he died in the right state of mind. he vowed not to kill ozzy, and he didnt ;-; it will probably take his family - especially ermias. god poor ermias - a while to come to terms with roman's death, but ermias had been the one to point out how he didnt recognize his brother during f8 povs. maybe eventually he will realize that at the end, he did ;_; but Man. those family povs. that shit was absolutely brutal. and then u added them after the kids fucking died :stress: that was truly so cruel (but also a great move from a writing standpoint). but. christ. cant wait for vet to see the eurokas on his victory tour [insert unhinged emoji here] ...! as for ozzy. i had a feeling he wouldn't win, but hot damn what a brutal fucking way for him to go out :sob: bro got choux'd... cooked. baked. ...lowkey if roman had let vet kill him, it wouldve been kinder. ...im glad roman's dead so he doesnt have to know that bc i think that would break him ;-; aughh that hurts ;-; like ozzy and roman were the ones to attack vet first.. but yeah. classic choux to strike by surprise. he almost got the upper hand on her but. her trickery is unmatched. really brutal for poor scarlet too.. shitass father wouldnt let her watch and by the time she escaped he's fucking dead and burnt to a crisp :withered: i hope she kills their dad for that. thats horrifying. ;-; chouxxx oh my god choux... truly one of the most iconic characters from this fic. i love that she stole the show and ended up as the last career standing. i love how far she got bc i feel like in another story, we wouldn't have gotten to see her shine as much as she did. right from the start she was causing trouble, and right up to the end she was as well. truly nobody will be doing it like her ever again. if she couldnt win, 2nd place is definitely the next best thing (even though shes still dead but. shh.). grandpa macbeth was lowkey acting like a real prick in these povs so at least hes not getting what he wants.. unfortunately its at the cost of choux's life ;-; im gonna miss her whacky ass so much. what an awesome character, what an awesome arc, and what an awesome final opponent for my boy :gently holds: and vetiver... god. im gently holding him so so hard ;-; i thought he was fucked for real when ozzy and roman attacked . man. his kills being three of the most iconic tributes in the arena is also deranged of you. his numbness at this point was honestly so terrifying and painful to read, like. the other tributes being scared of him when he first appeared . vet walking straight into the finale without a single care for whether or not he alerted someone (which he Did). and that fight with choux.. like. the way he just Stopped to wait her out. bro knew better than to get into her territory. (gets really close to the camera) he has all the time in the world...! persistence hunter . head in hands. and jons povs too.. love the way u incorporated these ;-; also how the rest of his family came to support.. gently holds.. the way u went back and forth with vet and choux's povs at the end was also really fucking neat too (and very stressful BHJVHBF).. the end of choux's final pov is so good like i got fucking Chills man . and vet's.. the way he doesnt believe its not a trick and that he won.. they had to tranq him head in hands.. my poor boy.. hes alive though and thats more than i could ask for :gently holds: ohh im getting teary eyes again waaaugh ;-; :heart: jon gets his son back ! they wont have to keep hunting anymore ! brings all the pups into the big victor house.. its gonna be so nice for them ;-; hopefully ;-; aggressvely not thinking abt victory tours and mentoring and torture dungeons :heart: i hope vet makes some good victor friends in the very least ;-; WAAUGH thank you again mooseeeee :heart: and like congrats on you having ur victor also ! :D OUR victor... next time we hang out well have to go climbing in vets honor BVHJDVBHF |
SYOT Verses Discord chapter 1 . 11/8 The below comments were shared during the SYOT Verses Reading Bonanza Event in October, where readers were asked to comment on their favorite parts of the chapter(s) they read. We hope you enjoy your readers’ thoughts! If you would like to check out the server, feel free to PM this account for a link. Extinguished: Chapter 39: my favorite part was meeting vet's dad finding out he was alive and also DOGGO MOTHER.. LITTLE PUPPIES... IT WAS SJUST SO WHOLESOME IT FILLED ME WITH SO MUCH RAGE - brooke CHOUX'S GRANDFATHER IS A BOSS - goldie The part where I get moose for her crimes! - Jay Chapter 40: Choux is absolutely focused and ruthless now. It's probably her final form now, with the finale soming up - dd this whole chapter made me so stressed made me bawl my eyes out but im so touched by vet finch reunion ouuhghjhhg - brooke VET AND HIS LITTLE GUYS WAAUGH ;—; - nell finch and vet ;-; theyre so cute - goldie |
FlawlessCatastrophe chapter 41 . 11/3 Finch - Ur joking - “And he knew Vetiver would protect him.” If I killed myself what then? - “He can tell she's in pain, he tries to ease it with gifts. It never works. Why can't he cheer her up?” I will kill you with a rock - “She's small like him, and small creatures aren't supposed to die. They're supposed to grow and get big.” YOURE DEAD YOURE SO FUCKING DEAD I SWEAR TO GOD MOOSE - “He just knows…he could be happy living here with his two friends and the birds in the sky.” Head in. My goddamn hands - “He thinks he knows where to go.” DOG STAY YOUR ASSS HEREEEEE - “He thinks he hears Vetiver yelling out for him, but he doesn't stop.” Im finna beat your ass moose - “he hears an animal breaking a branch. It must be a large animal” be so fucking fr rn - You want me to show up to your house - “Vetiver, whose concerned face drops with relief once he sees him.” Godgodgodgodgod - “She smiles at him as he hands her the rest of the bouquet. She thanks him, rubbing her hand across the petals.” Im gonna be actual sick - “every few weeks we would pick another flower out of her garden. Not enough to damage anything, just to drive her crazy." Exa laughs, which devolves into a cough. "She thought she had a raccoon problem.” BURSTS INTO TEARS THATS SO FUNNY AND CUTE - WAILSSSS - “He wants to climb with them all.” Me when I want to rock climb with my friend moose - “Chaffinch doesn't feel panic until Vetiver grabs his knife and pushes Chaffinch behind his back.” Ohhh fuuuuckkk nononononono - AMATUS? YOU BETTER BACK THE FUCK UP - “Chaffinch doesn't think he's a friend.” HELL NO DOG - VET PELASE - “He looks at Vetiver for an answer. He doesn't want to make the wrong decision. He doesn't want to leave her.” IM GONNA FUCKING PUKE - “Everything in his heart is telling him to stay and everything in his brain is telling him to run.” IM GONNA FUCKING KILL MYSELF - “He can hear Vetiver's screams” i wish I were dead so bad its not even funny - “But all he can do is run. It's all he knows.” All right moose. Bend over Cali - “(Whoever it is, she has to kill. It doesn't matter who.)” starts shaking shuddering trembling - “She recognizes Amatus immediately, his sword raised above another boy lying on the ground. Blood runs down the boy's fingers” ohhh I throwing up im throw sup - “She must know this, and so must her ally, because she shoves him away from her.” Exa SOBSSSS - “Amatus takes one look at the girl before sending his blade into her stomach.” Okay I’ve signed a warrant for amatus’s death. Its over I can’t support you anymore - "I'll kill him. Don't worry." Pinky promise cali? - “She knows immediately it's not Amatus. Amatus doesn't have blonde hair.” Wym he’s a natural blond - “Cali starts to reload, but she's not fast enough to duck into cover before a knife whizzes at her. It lands in her thigh” THE GIRLS ARE FIGHTINGGGG - “(It's only now that Cali sees purple liquid stained on the knife blade.” OH FUCK OH FUCK OH FUCK - "Just as it started. You poisoning us from inside." GODDAMN YEAH… OUHHGHHHH… - "I took this from Dahlia. After I killed her. She would be proud that her weapon killed you, I think." Choux just always says the most badass things bruh - "She didn't see it coming either. Don't feel bad. Amatus will meet the same fate." YEAHHHH IKTRRRR - "I don't think either of you deserves the win," Cali growls. Choux tilts her head to the side. "Probably not. The least I can do is make sure it's not him." SHES SUCH A BADDIE GODD IM STILL A CHOUX STAN I FEAR OH MY GOOODNESSSSSS SHES GOBBLINGGGG - “She may not be ready to die, but she is ready to be with him.)” I felt chills oh my goodness ohhhhhhhh ;;;;;; FFFUCKKKK - DAMN… THIS IS CRAZY I THOUGHT SHE WAS THE VICTOR BRUHHH RBUHHH BWHAHJJN EMHGJLDVBDG WHAAT SHAPPENINGGGG amatus: - “The two boys may be fast, but Amatus Zanetti is faster.” YOU BETTER FUCKING STOP! - “They're not his real target, but they're good for a warm-up.” Im gonna give him a hardcore wedgie - “Until something falls on top of him and sends him flying.” GRAAHAHHH - “A fucking child jumped on him from a tree!” HJRHAGFJHKDVFJK MONKEY BOY - “Amatus doesn't hesitate to swing.” NONONONONO - “It's a mistake for him to raise his hands to block the blade. It's a clean cut through at least three of his fingers.” DDE FUCKIINNNJOOOOOOOO - “something bites his leg. "You're fucking insane!" Amatus yanks the back of the kid's shirt” I FCKING WEEPING THATS MY BOY THATS MY WILD CHILDDD - “pulling him far enough away to send his blade into his stomach.” . - . - . - . - Gg guys - “Amatus looks at the smaller boy whose shallow breaths are barely keeping him alive.” Killing myself killing myself - “He doesn't think about the two boys behind him anymore. They're as good as dead.” Vets gonna come back to bite you in the ass bruh - “(He doesn't even care about the lack of cannons from his last victims.” IDIOT ALERT ON AMATUS - “He doesn't care that his vision is starting to blur, ever so slightly.” PHJHH SHE GOT THAT POISON ON LAWKKK - Coughs so fucking wetly oooooohhhhh Ozzy - “Yet when he looks at Roman, he doesn't know which would be worse: killing him or being killed by him.” The way my face dropped - “Roman continues to close that distance.” Umm… guys… - "Who are you? What-where am I? What did you do to me?” GUYS? - Is he having a mfin amnesia moment or smth? - “He tries to lower his hands, tries to do anything to show Roman he's not a threat. (He'd be lying to them both.)” YO? - Bruh they’re going crazy - “He doesn't think when he picks up the rock. He doesn't think as he swings it into the other boy's head.” ITS SO JOEVER ITS SO JOEVER - “(The biggest problem with Oswaldo Moquette is how little he thinks.)” head in my mfin hands - "We should clean your wound," Ozzy says” y’all… what the fuck was that shit Choux - “She'll simply have to improvise.” I believe In her - “(Choux Macbeth is used to confidence. For now, she'll have to be content to settle with reluctance.)” HAHHA she’s still that bitch though! - “her nose is certainly bleeding if not at least a little broken.” Ouhhh... - "Bitch!" HE SAID THAT IN SUCH A CAPITAL B BITCH WAY BAHAHAH - OUHHH NO HE GOT A HIT IN MUY GIRL GRAHHHH - (Failure.) NOOOO BABY NEVER NEVER TO ME - “(Survival isn't enough anymore. It's victory.)” VICTORY ALL FOR CHOUX MACBETH - NOTHING LESS BABY - "Good luck," Choux says, sheathing the knife in her belt.” GRAHAHHHHH - “It doesn't matter. He'll be dead before the finale.” ….ARE YOU SURE - GIRL U NEED TO WATCH HIM DIEEEEE - “Choux has more important priorities. Herself.” Always bb 3 Vet - Starts crying - Do I have to - “Nothing hurts as much as seeing Chaffinch curled up in a ball of blood.” Im gonna hurt you even more than that moose - “Chaffinch isn't a badger. He's a boy.” TJRWSO UP IN MY FUCKING MOUTH - “Through the tears, he can see that Chaffinch's eyes have locked in on something above them. Despite the pain, his lips form a smile.” Bangs the floor weakly - “the flash of orange flying off the branches, leaving behind the softest chirps. The boy in his lap chirps in response.” Im gonna fcking kill. Myself - “Even with the noise of the cannon, the birds keep singing.” Rocks back and forth Ohhhhhhhh ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh - Im fuckingmiserable - “(It's not the end of Chaffinch Canasto. That's what the birds are saying.)” blinks back tears - Im so deeply upset but ohhhhhh - Im so glad vet was there - He wasn’t alone;;;;;; - VET RAGE… - Ohhhh fuckkkk walking on amatus in the clearing - “Vetiver isn't a stranger to death.” THIS SENTIMENT ECHOED FROM FINCH’S POV AT THE BEGINNING IM SICKKKK - “He's seen these same movements when his dogs catch a badger but don't finish it off. The wreathing on the floor, the bloodstained fur, it's all too familiar to Vetiver.” GODDAMN AMATUS IS NOTHING BUT A BADGER TO VET HJAKFHDKF - “Again…and again…and again. Even after the cannon fires, Vetiver fills the boy's body with holes.” Good fucking god - “How will he go on knowing it's his fault Chaffinch died?” Nonono never blame urself king ;;;; - Curls up into a ball rocks back and forth - HASTAG #VETWINS IM A BELIEVER NOW IM A TRUTHER CMONNNN VET PACK IT U{PPPPPP Exa: im going to miss you so dearly you were such a sweet girl thank you for being so kind to my son thank you for trying so hard for owain and moriko and aizen. in a lot of ways you were the heart of the story I fear. Rest easy baby girl cali: im so shocked by moose’s audacity actually im so shocked you are gone. I hope your reunion with Ronan is sweet and this way you won’t have to live with the guilt of being the one who killed him. hope heaven treats you kinder than home chaffinch: ;;;;;;;;;; im so deeply touched by ur love for him I think that was so abundantly through every pov. Despite the hundreds of threats I made I think sending him to you was absolutely the correct and also the only choice, you wrote him brilliantly and hurt me so good with his story and his relationship with vet and exa. Im going to think about him until I die amatus: hmmm nah I don’t think bros dead. #AMATUSSURVIVOR /jjjj god he was so entertaining and such a fantastic villain to root for/against. I loved watching him mald and be a total insane freak and it was beautiful to watch him get what was coming by cali and choux and vet. Like they chowed DOWNNNN on him (cali CHOW like clam chowder, choux CHOW like incorrect way to pronounce choux, vet CHOW like what his dogs b doing to those badgers ayyy) Incredible chapter moose, this close to the end I wanted to say it’s been so deeply amazing and inspiring to see the way your writing has evolved. This pulled on the heartstrings like crazy! Actually they violently snapped them like several different times but you know what I mean. I can’t believe extinguished era is almost over it feels unreal. Ill see u in two weeks… Oh this final four is deranged. Ohhh im sick. I fear its a vet v choux final 2. Wwoooowwie. mine: chaffinch love: vetiver, choux hell yeah: ozzy, roman bwookie... |
darthnell chapter 41 . 11/3 Still trying to come to terms with all of This . its so. head in hands. i dont even know where to start mannn.. i still cant believe u killed finch and cali. i cannot believe vet killed amatus. exa unfortunately makes sense but it Does make me real fucking sad ;-; finch cant have his little family forever and i hate that so muchhh ;-; like him thinking abt how its Wrong for exa to be so close to death bc shes small and shes supposed to grow big and fly . like. hes right ! hes so right! also i was not expecting amatus of all people to be the one to jump out of the trees and start chasing vet and finch and exa ;-; i fully thought it would be choux.. but of course she wouldn't attack like that :withered: amatus picking off exa without a thought and then chasing after vet and finch like. hhhh im glad cali stole that kill from him though. but also cali promising to exa to kill amatus and then getting got herself . aughh. ..though i do believe she would have totally killed vet and finch too. she is a career after all. but alas she ended up taking the brunt of choux knives... the poisoned knives is such a fascinating weapon i love how effective its been. cali taking ronans hand at the end of this pov though is sooo ;-; that hurtss. truly this left me stunned bc i thought for sure she was gonna kill amatus, and u had me panicking here that that wouldnt be possible anymore. amatus chasing after vet and finch was absolutely terrifying also. like him thinking of them as warm up kills and wastes of his time :withered: i guess that was his undoing in the end. finch airdropping onto him from above was absolutely iconic though. we all cheered, 10/10 :D and then felt immediate terror at the fact that this put finch into close range with amatus and :withered: him just picking them off and tossing them aside because theyre not as important to him as choux.. mann. cant say im disappointed that he ignored them though...! ;-; this fight with roman and ozzy though damnnnn. this concussion is Really fucking roman up. his sense of judgement is just. so off the rails. such a fascinating descent though. im glad these two were eventually able to snap out of the fight but whoogh that was Tense i thought for sure one of them wouldnt make it out of that. and hey now they both have a chance ! just. imagining romans siblings (esp ermias) watching this whole fight go down... withered. hoough i loved this scene with choux and amatus so much. another really fucking tense fight.. love seeing choux begin to unravel in the face of amatus's brute strength, like her inner monologue here was so so fascinating. and he really almost fucking got her too ! like damn ! literally on the edge of my seat. its so neat that he didnt though,, choux rises on top yet again :D for now... waiting out the poison was such a gamble but it turned out to be a good one. not ensuring that he was dead was also such a gamble but also like hot damn. badass as fuck BJVFDVHFHB. love seeing a girlboss win also left an opportunity for. gestures. god. i do not know how to handle this. at first i thought for a sec that vet was gonna put finch out of his misery but hhhh im glad he didnt but god this was almost worse. the birds coming down to sing for finch is. ohh my god like. dude. dont even talk to me about thisss ;-; i cant handle this im too weak. there go my hopes and dreams of finch somehow sneaking out of the arena and surviving on his own in the wild :stress: i cant believe u actually killed him still, i dont know why i just. ohhh it hurts. and this next fucking part. vet just feeling nothing but Pure Rage and putting amatus down like a sick animal. :withered: "Vetiver isn't an angry person, but he's also never held his friend in his arms as he takes his last breath." GOD. vet being lowkey unphased by killing amatus is so. like im terrified. my sweet boy... ;-; i just feel so cold now ;_; umm good job though? like very good writing wise. so much suspense and action and development here. this was truly Huge and i dont know if im gonig to be the same anymore.. its not the same without finch ;-; im so scared for vet hes just a lad.. ;-; and roman and choux and ozzy.. man this is such a final four. terrified of what u have in store for everyone im sure its going to be just as miserable and tense and well done :heart: |
Nemris chapter 41 . 11/3 Well damn. I think this is the best chapter of the story, at least the best arena chapter. It ha so much action and so much of that action is so well depicted. Where do I begin. Choux vs Cali. Very good fight, and I think "This is how it ends then. Just as it started. You poisoning us from within" is the absolutely best quote from this story. Cali got a very solid end, one that caps off her story very well and elevates it in my eyes. Ozzy and Ronan fight was perhaps the only kinda weird part of this chapter. It kinda came out of nowhere and in a bit forced way, but then it did not even really result in anything. Unless Ronan dies of his wounds. Exa seemed like such a victor material, but when she was wounded, I started to think that perhaps not. She has some of that star power that shone the brighter the further she got, but did not get her across the finish line. This means that both of my predicted victors are dead this chapter. Great, job, I really like when things are unpredictable and thing have tension till the end. Looks like Chaffinch has finched his last flinch. I was suprised how far he got, but I guess someone among the unlikely ones had to go furthest. I had a strange view on him, as I did not really connect to him as a character, but he was great meme material every now and then, and that is what life is really about is it not? Amataus was the star of this chapter. Finally we has totally awesome, gritty and intense depiction of how a top tier brawler career like him fights. Small wounds mean little to a hulking boy like that, he can take more punishment than pretty much anyone in the arena. In the end he just could not quite finish off Choux, though he was probably dead even if he had taken her with him based on the condition Vetiver found him in. And damn, Vetiver actually got a kill. The power of anger. Choux indeed managed to pull trough. She took out both of her fiercest rivals, though we will se if it was a pyrhic victory, as her wounding and depletion of resources really renders her easier prey to the outliers. in fact, the flow of the story would hint in the direction that since she was wounded so badly here, she is very much on her way to her grave as well. So, here we are. 4 tributes standing. Or 3, if Ronan does not count as quite standing. Ozzy is probably my new favorite to win and my prediction, as he is in the best condition and position. Even if he did nothing (provided gamemakers leave the tributes be) everyone else more likely to die of their wounds, infection or exposure before him. Well then, finale, here we come. The end is near. Keep up the GREAT work |
darthnell chapter 40 . 10/21 Ohhh my goodness moose. Sick with fear reading this whole thing. Insane of u to have a no death chap but its true you Have been known to kill four kids in one fell swoop more than once in here . Im on to u… Exa being so delirious she thinks chaffinch is her dead little brother… :withered: mannn. What da hell :sob: that Does in fact Hurt ! Hhh she knows she needs to cut the hand off.. i dunno if she will though ;-; if she doesnt i dont think shell win. Such a terrible decision for a kid to have to make ;-; they found vet though ! Yayy! Alive dog boy ! :D this little grouping is everything to me actually waaugh ;-; Cali is still going Thru it aughh ;-; shes in Career Mode TM though.. good for her! ..probably bad for everyone else though haha . Umm lets channel that towards Amatus perhaps :D new fire phobia unlocked… rip. The way shes talking out loud to dead Ronan is. Woof. ;-; Ohh my god Roman is so concussed :sob: this is such a miserable pov too /pos, like its all finally Getting to him and hes. Lowkey breaking down a bit ;-; also concussion.. he is just a kid man… ;_; i dunno how much being a victor would help him but. It certainly wouldnt do Nothing… i can see it…. Ozzy is such a sweetie here also.. gently holds.. the Boys ..! Omgg choux yesss.. getting her poisons all set up… though please dont poison exa, she already has enough of that, i dont think it would even be effective at this point :withered: heeelp thats wild that she feels more confident against amatus…. Thats a choice ! Good luck bbygrill.. shes got new poison berries from a very suspicious looking bush, okay.. vibes. Just.. use them all against amatus :D Waaugh Vet ;—; gently holds him and the younguns so tightly… literally these three together is so good.. also helps bridge the language barrier w exa and chaffinch fjfjfkf.. sometimes u need words but not all the time fr.. love them all vibing and not speaking too. The little flower finch gives exa when the portraits come on aughh ;—; the berries though . Thats the same bush choux got berries from isnt it . :V pppppleeasee tell me she is not near them hhhhh ;—; shes gonna kill them all in their sleep and vet is too busy blaming himself for exa getting injured :withered: this is so terrible moose ;_; great chap though im glad they all get to live for a little while longer ;-; it wont last but..! It matters ! ;—; fully expecting choux to wipe out the entire vet-and-little-guy alliance next chap, pain and death |
Nemris chapter 40 . 10/20 Last chapter before a finale? Feel fitting for all the high tension build up. I know nothing really happened, but for some reason I really liked this chapter, I got into a nice flow reading it. It made me think about HG fan writing, what kind of things I would write about if I wrote a story, and I think I got at least one neat tribute idea. Now then. Finale is on the horizon. Time to make the final prediction. My previous thoughts still hold somewhat strong, those being Exa or Cali winning. Now, Exa is in a really bad shape, and the only way she probably wins is if everyone kills each other, as I think she would lose the battle of endurance even against Chaffinch of they were the last ones standing, she is that bad. Then again, Chaffinch surviving also depends of others killing them selves. You have kinda set up the Choux poison in a way that she can kill someone even beyond the grave if she hits them first, but not sure of you are going for that. In a big fight, Amateus stands the strongest: his two main rivals have ranged weapons that have massive drawbacks, what with limited poison and crossbow being a very slow reloading weapon if Cali misses a critical shot. If Cali shoots trough she probably wins. Choux really needs Amateus or Cali to kill the other first, she is unlikely to be able to take out both du to her limitations, though knife is still a knife. Roman and Ozzy would have decent chances since they are still allied, but I don't know how bad the concussion is. If they were both at their best, I would even predict one fo them to win. I don't really have a good guess after this latest chapter and its developments, so I am still gonna say Exa or Cali, leaning on Cali if I had to say only one name. She seems somewhat obvious though, which makes me well think someone else can win, but I don't have a better case to make. Well, unto the last arena chapter. Keep up the good work. |
FlawlessCatastrophe chapter 40 . 10/20 exa: - SCREAMS SCREAMS SCREAMS FOREVERRRRR - "If the quiet boy hasn't abandoned her yet, she doesn't think he'll abandon her now." literally starts shaking - "(She tries to forget that he already abandoned her once." he was scared... but he came back ;;; - so brave ooohghgjg - "The boy places a berry in her mouth and she chews it carefully." THEIR SYNERGY - HES SO KIND AND SWEET OOHHHHHH - "She thanks him. He doesn't respond. That's okay with her." HE WILL NEVER TALK HEART EMOJI - god her hand is so fucked SOB - "(When she sees he's still there, relief hits her each time.)" BANGS MY HEAD AGAINST THE WALL REPEATEDLY - "Lie here and die, or lose the hand." NOOOO NOT ANOTHER FUCKING AMPUTATION MOMENT - "The least she can do is keep the boy alive for as long as she can." holy FUCK dude im actually gonna puke so hard - EXA DONT GIVE UP ON YOURSELF BABY PLEASEEE - "Her death isn't necessary now. But at least she can be at peace with him." NO... DUDE... - IS IT VET? - "The boy, now kneeled to be closer to the ground, smiling at the smaller boy." GUGUHKKKK. I FELT IT IN MY FUCKING CHEST. OHHHH IM GONNA BE SO DEEPLY SICK - "The boy pulls a small, nearly empty water bottle out of his bag. He gently pours it over her wound" OHHH VET IS SO KIND. OHHHHHH - "Have you seen either of the Twelves?" GOD I FORGET THAT ALL OF HER ALLIES PRETTY MUCH DIED AT ONCE. DEEEEPLYYY FUCKED. - "For the first time in days, she can sleep." shrivels up and dies - im feleing so nauseous ohhh god cali - "She had Ronan to hold her up. They held each other up." ... - "She looks up into the sky. "If you were here, you'd tell me it's going to be okay," she whispers, hoping he can hear her. "You were always good at that…" moose this is a SICK thing to write. - "Because she's no longer winning for herself. She's winning for Ronan, too. And he's worth all she has to give.)" op wjat if i jumped off a cliff what then - "Choux, though… She's underestimated the girl from One for too long." they hate to see a baddie coming - "How many fires has this island seen?" we dont have to talk about it... - "After barely surviving the inferno that took Valerian's life, she's not keen to go through that again." sighing all over again about hwo deeply fucked it is you killed both brothers in a fire - "When you can't go back, just push ahead. Even if it's scary." my eyes drip w tears - "He gave her everything he had, and she'll be damned if anything will stand in between her and her victory." she has all the victor flags op but she also has all the death flags and i dont know if i want her to reunite w her brothers or with ronan... GOD roman: - fffufucukkkk... - "(Questions upon questions have always been left unanswered in the Euroka boy's life. It's just something he's familiar with.)" head in hands - "(He never once questioned the things he did for them. He never hesitated when he took Ermias' place on that stage. So why is everything falling apart around him?)" i gonna be sick - "Roman doesn't give him the chance. The grogginess works in his favor because by the time Ozzy is on his feet, Roman disappears." roman this is a Terrible idea. one of you is so gonna die here - LIKE CMONE ON... NOW YALL ARE BOTH INFINITELY MORE KILLABLE - "His fist meets the trunk of a tree and pain in his fingers is nothing compared to the ache in his heart." HE PUNCH DA TREE SOB - "I'm sorry…" he mutters. (To who? Roman isn't fucking sure.) His brother? (He's sorry for failing him.) His parents? Davidson? (He's sorry for killing him.) Ozzy? (Maybe, for the first time in Roman's life, he can be a little sorry for himself.)" THiS IS A DEEPLY DEEPLUY GOOD SEQUENCE. FUCK YOU! - "(But maybe, with the kids taken care of, he…he could breathe. He could be a fucking kid himself.)" DUDE SOMEONE SAVE THIS GUY FROM THE PARENTIFICATION - "I guess we're both a little fucked up?" Ozzy says. It might just be the most honest thing Roman's ever been told." waahhhh ;;; - "The black spots grow and the next thing Roman knows he's leaning over, decorating the ground with vomit." OH NO... DUDE WADA HELL... - "You need more rest, my fucked up friend." me talking to my fucked up friend that needs more rest - "In his dreams, he's back at home. He's with his brothers and sisters. It could be the day before the reaping for all he knows. They all run around. He feels…joy. Like nothing matters more in the world than this moment. For the first time in a long time, Roman feels uninterrupted joy." Ok this is crazy insane death flags roman is never going home #confirmed - god... god... head in hands choux: - CHOUX! - CHOUXLY SHIT - "Still, more of the Careers are dead while she's still living. She's doing something right, conventionality aside." PERIODDDD - "A shame, the bush she found also found the flames. Had it not, well, the crown would already be hers." gosh dang it... - "Three smaller tributes" ok if she kills chjaffinch i will take it so personally actually. pleas stay away from my son. ive always supported you but that will change if you touch my son or his friends. - "She'll know he's coming while he'll exist in ignorance at his impending death." shes so right. COOK HIS ASS! - so many berries this chapter... - as an empath i sense these will be important - "The crown is hers. She just needs to finish the job." shes always been such a girlboss go-getter - ugh... choux continues to outsell... heart emoji vet: - oiuhhhhhghhhhhh - "As long as Vetiver has been breathing air, it's been him, his dad, and his dogs in his sphere." cries so gently - NOT MUTT JUICES OR WHATEVER KEGHKJSBD - "(She saved Chaffinch and it may have cost her her life and they might not be able to save her.)" BANGS MY FIST AND STARTS CRYINGGG - "They were the ones with the blood on their hands…or rather their paws. They were the ones that killed. Vetiver just got paid.)" ouhhh i never thought of it like that - this is so fucked op - "And yet, he has to fight. For his dad, he misses his dad so much. For his dogs, who don't understand where he's gone. For Chaffinch, who has no one rooting for him back at home." im gonna be sick - "He doesn't recognize either of the Twelves, but the small sob that escapes Exa still breaks his heart." HEAD IN HANDS FUUUUCKKKKK - "Chaffinch crawls down from the tree and stands beside Exa. He looks at Vet, then back at Exa. He kneels down and offers her a flower. She takes it, but it only makes her cry harder." HOLY FUCK OP IM GOIG TO KILL YOU IM GOING TO KILL YOU SO HARD AND SO VIOLENTLY IM GOING TOT EAR YOU TO SHREDS POV IM VETS DOGGIES AND YOURE A FUCKING BEAHVER! - "(Maybe words aren't necessary. Maybe they never have been.)" starts dry heaving starts coughing blood - "The boy smiles a toothy smile. Vetiver can't imagine how he's coping so well with this." NO THOUGHTS IN HIS HEAD HIS MIND PALACE IS SO FREE LIKE A BIRD - "He wonders what animals have been around, based on the missing patches he takes note of. Unless Chaffinch and Exa found this patch before he found them." thats possible. but i fear it may also have been interrupted by choux. - "Regardless, Vetiver is relieved the small boy is able to get some rest." starts hacking up a hairball - "I think it's too damaged," she says." head in hands - "What Exa needs is a full Capitol team of doctors working to save her hand." shaking convlusing - "Vetiver looks up into the sky, allowing his mind to take him away from here, to a peaceful world where none of them are injured and none of their lives are on the line. Where Exa and Chaffinch can run around and be kids." STOP DANGLING THIS IN FRONT OF MY FACE OP IMS ICK - "(If the best Vetiver Brune can do is dream, well, maybe they're all doomed.)" NOOOO NOOOOOO SAY IT AINT SOO SOBSSSSS - so cali and amatus are on another island? op you only put island B in the a/n... OP please... mine: chaffinch love: vetiver, choux, amatus hell yeah: ozzy, cali, roman, exa - everything is so not okay dude ONLY PEOPLE I LOVE AND FW HEAVY ARE LEFT. THIS IS SO UNIQUELY CRUEL AND MISERABLE - im so glad vet and finch are together again bbut oohhb nmyy god i. cant. cope about exa and about TWO CHAPTERS LFET WHAT ARE YOY SAYINGGGGGGGG bwookie ;;;;;;;; |
ladyqueerfoot chapter 39 . 10/12 choux: SHE IS DOING EXACTLY WHAT SHE SHOULD BE DOING TRUE ! lmao everything getting exposed i cackled. idc free my girl cabbage she did all of it but it was hot amatus: yeah how do u give a positive interview abt ur child when he's Like That cali: HER PARENTS ARE FUCKED UP EWWWW... lian is the only real one. exa: this is SO awkward i feel so bad for her family... bad bounce ozzy: bro is acting real cocky for a guy with no first name. i hope ozzy beats his ass if he wins. roman: baby is full of so much guilt this is so upsetting... this is way too much for a 13 year old to think about vet: i mean congrats on not being stuck in prison forever dad, but thats awkward he didnt know abt vet being reaped. best part was the dog's cameo 10/10 i'm concerned with how vet will handle the rest of the games finch: THIS WAS JUST CRUEL AND UNUSUAL PUNISHMENT! i knew chaffinch didnt have anyone at home, but that random ass kid somehow knowing him... wtf. ur cruel. or he's an academy award winner LOl.. this whole thing was devastating more murder next chappy? omg u prommy? |
FlawlessCatastrophe chapter 39 . 10/11 hahaaaa im about to be sooo uniquely miserable lear: - fucking incredible name btw. lear macbeth. wow. i did laugh - "Her siblings' deaths were mere accidents as far as the public is concerned. It'll stay like that if Lear has anything to say about it." this man is so crazy. orchestrating familicide just for shits - "When we look at Academy records…she doesn't seem to have much of one?" shes like lasagna. real gs make moves in silence - "Not like you need it. Has she not proven her worth by making it this far? Farther than her District partner, certainly." FJKHJVBSHHKJ FUCK THE VAL SHADE AKHFVBHFBKBSKF - "They say she electrocuted one…and…poisoned the other….y'know…like she did…in the…." preposterous! choux has never done and will continue to do no wrong - "Do not spread those falsities about her." period. hes as much of a gaslighting icon as his granddaughter - "Now, it's time for Choux to do the rest." honestly theyre a dynamic duo. god i actually seriously love choux so bad she deserves this W bruh adeodatus: - this name is CRAZY - "They've already allowed time for shots of Amatus' room," dude im tryna know what kind of posters bro has - "…Adeodatus wouldn't admit it, but he could say the same in regards to his son. His son is…)" CRYING. EVEN HE KNOWS JUST HOW ABNORMAL HE IS. - "I'd say those people are idiots," Adeodatus says, irritated at the accusation." wow i wonder who he inherited the short fuse from - "Keep your head clear," Adeodatus says a little too quickly." CRYINGGG - the other "son"... - "Amatus told them over and over again how grateful they should be he rooted out the traitor before it was too late." christ, - "When Amatus comes home, no one will be allowed in. That's something the entire family can agree upon." DIRTY MF LAUNDRYYYYY lian: - "the fear of waking up to his sister dead is too scary to get any meaningful rest." ;;;; - "Lian refused to have their parents speak on her behalf." probably wise - "He turns to look at the Capitol crew, who he assumes are recording the entire thing." oh god... - "He's so lost in his own head that he almost walks straight into his own brother." girl bye HAHAHAH - "Maybe if he faced it instead of avoiding it, he could've stopped the cycle. Maybe Jordan and Cali wouldn't have suffered like he did if he was just better.)" :::(((( - "The time for the Karpathos to stand together, stronger, has passed, and now they're left digging out of the fallout. All Lian can do now is hope it's not too late for Caliadne." this is so devastating their family is so broken - i would also really like it if caliadne got to go home and repair her relationship with her brothers. sob emmett: - "any mention of his little girl further breaks his already shattered heart." awhhhhh;;;;; BITCH IM SO UPSET ALREADY - "(He sees the spider bite on her arm and he sees her skin growing more and more pale and if he stares too long it's no longer Exa on the screen but it's Anton. Emmett isn't coping well with that.)" SCREAMSSSS SO FUCKED - "She's just trying to do what she thinks is right," Emmett says. It's what he's always said in defense of Exa." waaahhhh ;;; and shes doing so good sobs - "She blames herself for not volunteering. Especially when she sees the boy from Nine on screen. The one who volunteered for his younger brother." oh ;;;;;;;; throws up a little... roman... - "She thinks Exa is our favorite." Oh my gosh :sob: NOOOO - "It's his duty. He cannot fail them anymore. (And he won't.)" wow finally a sort of normal loving family. i give a standing ovation mr. moquette AHHAHAH: - love how he doesnt have a name - "Something they and his children have in common. Mr. Moquette finds it rather annoying at the timing of Oswaldo's reaping." dog don't you have other negative feelings like idk fear that your son might die in the games - "Perhaps Mr. Moquette's training is beneficial after all." this guy is REALLY slimy ngl - "(Each word is calculated, and carefully said with the right inflection. Mr. Moquette has spent too many hours putting out the fires Oswaldo set underneath him." this guys like a grade a sociopath - "I see my teachings have landed him nowhere." jesus man - "Two of his allies are dead to show for it. Hopefully, the Nine boy wises up before he meets the same fate." hes doing a really bad job at sounding like he cares about his son - "I'll tell them you're not feeling well. Eat up. You need your strength." He shuts and locks the door before she can say anything." jesus fucking christ - "(Soon enough, she'll be back fighting for him in the pits. He only needs a little more time.)" HES SO TERRIBLE... DUDE... - HES ACTUALLY THEIR FATHER? ITS SO FUCKED ermias: - the reaped brother ;;;; - "(Before Ermias was reaped, all he did was think about and talk about Roman. Now, the memories only bring him sadness.)" bursts into tears bruh - "(Ermias isn't strong like Roman. He can't take care of his siblings like Roman did. He so desperately needs Roman to come home.)" GOD... OP... - "Ermias can't accept anything else. It's too sad.)" i cant take this bruh - elder siblings always get me in my fucking pheels - "He's not like mom and dad," Colette cries quietly." THE ADULTIFICATION OF IT ALLLLL... - "Tears are already hitting the ground by the time he reaches the grass outside. Fortunately, no one follows him." my heart starts seizing in my chest - "(Deep down, Ermias fears the Roman he's watching on screen is too different than the Roman he knew growing up. Ermias fears the Roman he loves and couldn't live without, he fears that Roman died on the boat." SHUT THE FUCK IUP... MOOSE DONT SAY THIS... - "(As relieved he is to not be in the fight, the guilt of his brother volunteering will never leave him.)" IM GOIN GM TO BE FUCKING NAUSEOUS... WHEN I CATCH YOU MOOSE! jonquil: - "He barely escaped jail with his life after failing to attend the reaping." GOD... RIGHT... - "His son was going to die and he was going to die and he didn't even get to say his last goodbyes.)" ITS SO FUCKING AWFUL STARTS HACKING UP MY LUNGS - "It's just...how do you thank someone for keeping you alive? For keeping your son alive?" ELLIS IS A SAINT... HELPING THEIR FAMILY IN SO MANY WAYS JUST BY BEING AT THE RIGHT PLACE RIGHT TIME - SKIPPER BURSTS INTO TEARS - PUPPY LITTER WAAHHHHHH - SUCH A WHOLESOME DETAIL - THIS CHAPTER HAS BEEN SO DYNAMIC AND ENGAGING ITS REALLY THRILLING - EVERYTHING I WANT FROM AN F8... SO DELIGHTFULLY WRITTEN! - "It's moments like this he really misses his son. No one understands him like his son. Words aren't necessary between the two of them. Jon always found more could be said without the burden of words." cries softly vet's dad would get along so well with chaffinch too. this is so crazy - its so miraculous that vet and finch found each other - "You'll stay by my side throughout the entire interview? He wishes he could ask her. A wag of her tail gives him his answer." wordless communication... 3 - "(Get me out of here. Stay. For Vetiver.)" ;;;;;;; - "The rocks have stopped falling and both Vetiver and Chaffinch are alive. Separated- but alive." dry heaving - the end is coming - i feel fucking ill bruh i feel so sick youre so sick and twisted aurora: - "What do you mean there's no address on file?" AHJFSBAVHJHCDAHJ - GOD... THE MESS THAT IS CHAFFINCJH'S BACKGROUND - "Well, genius, where do homeless kids go?" GENIUS NHFABJKDKSBHVJKS - "Screw it. We're going to the orphanage anyway. Find me someone to interview." im sobbing. dakari: - "Hours later, the crew shoved Dakari Ngozi, head caretaker, in front of the camera." bruh im shitting myself what the hell - "You say whatever you want about the orphanage, and about Chaffinch living here. Make it up. Say he was a recluse. I don't care." WOWWW. WOW THEYRE REALLY JUST MAKIGN SHIT UP - "How hard could it be to make up stuff about the boy who doesn't speak?" MHAHDVKJSKF - WHATS HE GONNA DO? SAY THEYRE LYING? - "Yes. Chaffinch…he never really interacted with the staff or the other kids. He kept to himself, playing outside a lot of the time." crying. i mean hypotehtically if he DID live in the orphanage this is probably an accurate description of what he'd be doing - "Yes. I believe there were many nights he spent outside, away from his bed here. Yes, I do in fact recall that." im crying - "We're asking about Chaffinch Canasto. Did you know him?" Shit. This is what Kari wanted to avoid." bruuuuhhhh - "Lucian shakes his head. "I saw him once! He climbed to the top of a tall tree and he was dropping things down. A few of the older kids were scared and thought birds were attacking them!" GIVE THIS KID A FUCKING OSCAR?! - "(Kari isn't an expert on bird feathers, but, well, it seems she's been surrounded by chaffinches lately.)" AWH... WHAT THE FUCK... CALL THE AUGURIES BRUH - "But she didn't do it for them. She did it for Lucian and Chaffinch and others their age who aren't blessed with loving parents. It's just that simple.)" this fucking touched my heart i feel fucking ill moose - i feel personally victimized by you - im so distraught and so unready about whats going to come - genuinely really amazing really well-written chapter. emotionally wrecked me up and down bwookie |
Nemris chapter 39 . 10/10 I am not sure how many interviews I have seen implemented in SYOTs, but it is not a lot. It is a weird feeling when the tidbits you remember about the backstory of the tributes comes back with further building on like this. It actually feels like one could have predicted some final 8 tributes by wondering if their home circumstances were memorable. Ozzy especially feels like someone who really needed this look at his home, since the fate of his sister was such a mystery. Set up -} pay off. Nice stuff. Other one I really was how Chaffinch's interview was arranged, they made do and it worked out very well. Keep up the good work. |
darthnell chapter 39 . 10/8 yooo lear is based as fuck :nellhype: lowkey dont remember much of him from choux intro like yeah hes a maybe a lil too focused on legacy buT. hes covering for her murders and is clearly on her side so like. :D thats a W Zanetti parents are creepy as fuck.. LOLL “we've encouraged amatus to express his emotions” bvjhfdbhvfdbvjb stop thats so funny.. sorry i killed all those people i was just expressing my emotions. violently. Lol mr zanetti rly thinks they can shut down the whole house once amatus wins.. bro hes gonna be a celebrity . m a n lian's... :withered: theyre interviewing her PARENTS . what is wrong with you . lian only making this worse by trying to fight them :sob: augh the note about checking on ronans brothers . good luck man. the run-in with jordan too . this is so miserable. “Jordan left home and the Karpathos lost a brother.” get her RB ohh no Exa's dad is NOT doing well :sob: “If he stares too long it's no longer Exa on the screen but it's Anton” :withered: ohh my god Exa's sister feeling guilty for not volunteering because she thinks Exa is the parents' favorite . what the hell man ? :sob: NOO NOT OZZYS DAD . Resecured grip on his daughter . :V HJVBBHFD HE SAID NO. BRO DOES NOT THINK OZZY WILL WIN.. ohh my god hes got her locked in a room whattt the fuck.. this is so sinister. Love how he just straight up doesnt have a first name though LOL. bro doesnt deserve one Ermias... ;—; their parents working even longer hours and leaving the kids alone is so :withered: the poor younger ones dont rly understand.. Ermias being the only one watching the games.. ;;-; the dissonance between the Roman Ermias knows and the one in the arena rn is so wild like.. Roman victory arc would be so insane for that . aughh jon.. HE DIDNT FIND OUT FOR DAYS?:withered: AUGHH DOGGOS :heart: important footage. do not delete. Skipper waah.. emotional support pregnant weiner dog (': its NEEDED.. 100% Vet got his awkwardness from his dad. How did this man even have a child. I don't think i ever actually figured that jon do not have a panic attack during this interview :pray: HAHA they have just. no fucking records for finch :sob: ohh my god theyre paying someone to make shit up :sob: thats. gonna be awkward as fuck if finch wins .. omg this kid knows him :0 ohhhhh... she did it for the kids... ;-; okay... okay yeah thats a vibe. ig if finch does win. she seems like she'd be willing to take a role in finch's life maybe.. he could definitely use that poor birdie has no one :sob: no one outside the arena at least.. waaugh ;-; Love this one moose ;-; rly good stuff :heart: getting more background on the tributes is always so neat.. and seeing how the families are doing which. gestures. many varying shades ! genuinely i have no idea who you have in mind to win bc theyd all have such neat arcs.. even amatus.. who knows maybe if he kills every single remaining tribute he'll set some records he can be happy with..! probably not though. |