|Reviews for After the Fall|
| botan angel de minamino chapter 39 . 1/17
hey i read all your history i love it
and congrates for conclude the history an really i love this history nwn
| Bee chapter 39 . 9/30/2013
I just love your story! I wish you would post the ripped page from the book of reikai about mates from other worlds.. I have been wondering about that document for a long time! Anyways great story!
| moira33 chapter 39 . 8/16/2013
Well finally I finished this epic story!It was ...
I sincerely do not have words to describe this masterpiece
The red head smiled and leaned in, brushing his lips over hers, deepening it when his mate responded heatedly.
"Hn.. Shameless." Hiei sounded out as he watched the reunited lovers, though a smirk played on his lips.
"Nothing wrong with smooching, if you ask me." Yusuke said with a grin, thoughts of Keiko dancing in his head.
"Yeah, you said it Urameshi." Kuwabara replied, his bruised features twisting into a look of a love struck puppy. "I can't wait to see Yukina again."
"Touch her inappropriately and you die." Hiei warned.
Kuwabara blanched but growled. "Back off, shrimp! I wouldn't hurt your sister!"
Your humor in this story is awesome!
| moira33 chapter 37 . 8/9/2013
Hy it is me again I still did not finish this story...
This last week was so full of activities because of my little cousin that came to visit that I did not have time to finish this masterpiece...
| moira33 chapter 36 . 7/31/2013
I am so sorry for Kigorei
At the beginning of the chapter I was chewing my nails wondering when the hell Kuwabara will come in the scene,all of the battle scenes where awesome ...
| moira33 chapter 34 . 7/31/2013
Is it only me or between Ailia and Ren I detect sparks of love?
| moira33 chapter 35 . 7/31/2013
Gotta love Hiei:
You know, I can't say that I like Kuwabara very much, " He began, his voice full of the usual sarcasm and disdain that marked his character. "But only a coward would attack an enemy while he's defenseless."
Lets see Mukuro and Hiei are the serious and cold couple,Yusuke and Keiko are the bickering coupe,Kurama and Botan are the romantic couple and Kuwabara and Yukina are the cutest and shy couple.I loved the variety of how each couple show their love...
| moira33 chapter 33 . 7/31/2013
I am starting to like Ailia she is a great Oc
| moira33 chapter 32 . 7/30/2013
Oau...this chapter was intense and big it took me almost 2 hours too finish.
Glad that Yoh is ok
I felt so sorry for Koenma and that injustice that they did to his brother
I liked Hiei and Yoh s interactions and Hiei and Mukuro s also
I can not believe Botan lost her memories with Kurama T_T
"They all looked perfectly normal. Nearly human in appearance save for the demon energy that radiated from them. Matasuri was tall but lean, elegantly dressed in clothing that rivaled my father's. His hair was long, tied back in a ponytail and he had the most vibrant green eyes I've ever seen in my life. So alive and speaking of a deep intelligence to rival Kurama's."
"Hn." Hiei sounded, smirking at the Reikai lord's description. "From the sounds of it, it was love at first sight."
Ha ha ha ha!I love Hiei his the best character...
| moira33 chapter 31 . 7/30/2013
And now the really adventure begins I must admit this chapter hold me in suspense I really thought that Yoh will bring back Botan ...
| moira33 chapter 26 . 7/29/2013
Great chapter as always
I was just wondering what Utsukushii means ?
| moira33 chapter 21 . 7/28/2013
Oh I love Botan and Kurama so pure...love their relationship
| moira33 chapter 20 . 7/28/2013
Loved the scene between Muruko and Hiei
Yusuke began to chuckle. "Oh man," He began with a shake of his head. "I'd never thought you'd be the one to score first, Hiei."I was laughing so hard _
| moira33 chapter 17 . 7/27/2013
Hiei looked away from his friend, struggling to explain himself without sounding stupid and emotional. God he hated this. Hated admitting his weakness. That he loved Muruko but didn't know how to tell her. He needed to know what he did wrong so he could end the wall of silence that had sprung up between them. "Muruko and I ... We .." He paused, wracking his brain for the right words. Finally with a sigh he said, "She kissed me."
Kurama raised his eyebrows. Although he suspected the two fire demons had feelings for each other he never expected either of them to act on it and he certainly didn't expect Hiei to talk about such things, even with him. "Really?" He said in an amused tone. "Did you enjoy it?"
Hiei glared at Kurama, his features hardening. "What the hell does that matter?" He growled.
Kurama suppressed the urge to laugh at his friend. "Let me rephrase that. Did you kiss her back?"
Hiei frowned in confusion. "Why is that important?"
The fox spirit let out a sigh. "Oh I don't know, maybe because it would show that you were returning the feeling she was so obviously expressing to you."
"Which would be?"
Kurama looked at his friend as if he had announced Kuwabara was a genius.
I laughed so hard at this scene ...Hiei is an awesome character
I liked that Botan and Kurama met at least and liked that childish side of Botan ,because of this side she really fits Kurama
| moira33 chapter 9 . 7/26/2013
best in characters
I wonder if this story contains also Yukina x Kuwabara scenes but I will see...I still have 30 chapters to read