So yeah love this just as much well really a tad more so than the original

Poor poor Damian thought not getting to at least fuck Yen once XD

Anyway eager to see what’s next for Gray

Very much hope he can still get Molly as a maid and he charms well all the girls

Be nice if he makes friends with the likes of Ginny soon to

Part of me still wonders what would have happened if his sister just got that bit more angry and targeted a bit more of her anger at Grayson and just hexed the shit out of him. It may be a pointless curiosity but it's still enough to make me wonder.

Nice story till now, but with the exclusion of Wednesday I much prefer the other version

Again he is much to careless, just because you can leave the wards doesn't mean you can enter them again

As of now I like this version less than the original, him finding out his mother had a way of fixing his deficiencies in magic should have garnered a greater reaction,, and when she collared herself, he didn't ask her, or maker her do anything she might not have done anyway, in other words he didn't test the collar like he did test the commands with his sizer in the original. He seems a lot more blindingly trusting in this, not testing anything that's said or written down.

Hey Shiro the original one of these was the reason i actually discovered you all those years/months ago (idk how long tbh). Huge fan of your work but this remains my favourite by a good margin probably due to nostalgia and how unique it is. Just wondering if it will get an update anytime soon or anything. Take care regardless.

Dear god pls update i need it

Thanks for the chapter, this is trally good hope it get updated soon

have to say i did enjoy this one more than the original story.

now i did like the originals library part more when it came to him getting the book, but i did like the rework library part more then the crystal puzzle in the original.

the story line movement was over all better as well and the newer parts you added was awesome, when wensday addams showed up i actually cheered a little because i love wensday addams and you got her personality down to a tee as well.

i do hope to see more of this and how good mr greyson will become lol

keep on keeping on my brodda mon

Keep writing my boy, otherwise Dumbasadoor will be disappointed

I thought the original story was amazing, albeit with a one hand wrapped around way, but you have clearly become a much better writer if you can make this. I hope you finish this story!

interesting

wow, imagine getting a job... i shudder at the thought

Thanks for the chapter

good stuff