I wonder if Grayson will manage to sidestep the plans of both Lodge and his mother's.

Great chapter! Hope to see more of Yennefer though.

I find your stories very enjoyable. The plots are fast paced and I don't see anything that would annoy me enough to want to change. However, I don't feel qualified to critique at this level, I can only give it a thumbs up for what thats worth

I’m retarded

Bro, update speed is too slow, please increase update frequency.

I just got an idea for a new fic or at least a concept, it involves the darkness you know the comics and two games of the same name, a dark eldritch entity that's existed before creation I'm sure you can do something with that I don't know what but it would be something

I don't like that you include both NTR and rape again when you easily could have left it out. Don't argue! Forced compliance and blackmail is still rape. Pansy never consented to be fucked by his fingers, tongue, or dick.
As I read this, I couldn't help compare the first one and it's just a rehash and hasn't really improved. It's only slightly different. You claimed you were slowing things down to do it better and he suddenly jumps from a scrawny pipsqueak into an Adonis hunk overnight? F**k that nonsense.

Man Astoria can be such a fun character but she's so underutilised, such a shame

Mannnn! shiro how many fandom/series's are in this fic?!
I already counted 3 or 4 beside the obvious Harry Potter and witcher

The stoey is more intriguing than the previous.
I just don't understand what you are doing with Damien.
I don't think Grayson would allow Damien sexually proposition his woman which he does at every opportunity to Yenefer and Morrigan.
It makes Grayson and the woman look weak.

The character of Damien is a fatal flaw in this otherwise great story

Thia might be more intriguing than the first one.
The only problem I have is Damien. the character just ruins the story for me. Also I don't see someone like Grayson who is a possessive Demon, to just let Damien harass his women as he does to Morrigan and Yenefer.

It makes Grayson and the woman look weak that they are allowing Damien to sexually proposition them every opportunity

Thank you for the chapter

nice

He really let his demon side show with pansy. Though while motricia is hot I feel Wednesday would creep the hell out of me

Thank you! We finally got some smut which is what made me a loyal reader in the first place. Your last few chapter releases - while good - have been a bit lacking in that department.

It ain't Moira, but I've given up on that. Galram it.