Reviews for Searching Far and Wide |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Slice of life contentment. sometimes i wish for just this in real life. thank you for giving me a moment of peace. |
![]() ![]() ![]() House on Sand by Nothing more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lookie there he actually has a desire for a teammate. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chap |
![]() ![]() ![]() Listen To The Music. Doobie Brothers. Also, a nice easy going training chapter. These guys are working on getting better and better and more varied in their abilities. Thats going to help them out big when the time comes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Back to the daily grind and all that. Excellent work as always! Can’t wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Buff stacking is working pretty well for him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Re: pulling back on the training: I'd be delighted if you did cut back the repetition and minor improvements, but then highlight when breakthroughs happen with a quick blurb on what the training action was in retrospect. I'd hope for the some thing with Pierce. Cut back on the daily hang-ups he has addressed and readdressed many times over, and focus on epiphanies or major perspective shifts. Like I get it already, you're homesick and uncertain, I don't want to hear it for the 100th time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The... ONIX patted his shoulder? With what, its face? :\ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Treating sea critters will be a change for him. |
![]() ![]() I don't normally comment on chapters, but I just had to with this one! It gave me literal goosebumps and made me lightheaded during his performance! As I'm sure many people were, I was getting pretty sick of this arc and wanted Pierce to go travelling again. BUT, this chapter really did bring everything together from the last 30 chapters and the payoff couldn't have been better! All of this arc really connected me to Pierce and his Pokémon more than a normally, and this culmination really did it all justice! Anyways, I read a TON of books (100k words a day or so), but rarely do I feel like this when I read, so truly, thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonder if he’ll get a unique goody soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A fun group of friends to have eh. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Some good experience at least. |
![]() ![]() Awesome |