Reviews for When Dreams Become Reality
Jericho chapter 1 . 12/16/2000
Great! Marvelous! Can't wait for me! You are writing excellent work. You should be proud of it.
laura chapter 1 . 12/16/2000
i liked both parts
Jericho chapter 1 . 12/16/2000
Good story! Looking forward to Part II. Excellent plot idea too!
Aimee J chapter 1 . 12/16/2000
I think this is great. I'm glad you were able to get this part out quickly.
girle chapter 1 . 12/16/2000
Get part three out now!
Sarge chapter 1 . 12/16/2000
This was good. Sorry I didn't review it before when I read it. It really is. I can't wait for part two.
Bored chapter 1 . 12/16/2000
How about putting Max into a swimsuit? Heh Heh Heh. In one she just might be able

to make a few guys faint. Heh Heh Heh.
bk11 chapter 1 . 12/16/2000
ooh! I liked how you're leading into it and not making it choppy. Nice detail work there :-)
Alisha chapter 1 . 12/16/2000
Loved your story, but don't forget about us! We want part 2 as well. We'll be waiting for it!
QuasiPhile chapter 1 . 12/16/2000
haha. gotta luv max/logan stories. i think that it was good but part of it was unrealistic and i didn't think it really seemed to fit their characters. i don't know if max would actually come out and say 'Logan, you could never disappoint me' maybe im wrong, it just didn't fit. but the plot of the story is good!
Sheridan chapter 1 . 12/16/2000
o0o0ohh! I like! please continue! i love it!
The Unknown Critic chapter 1 . 12/16/2000
Well, they both have basically the same scenes, but the grammar and spelling seem better in this one. Anyway, regardless, it was a very good representation of their thoughts. Good job!
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