Reviews for The Last Goodbye
FanFictionAddict13 chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
is there a sequal of when she comes back, shes just got to come back!
Sugar Snaps a lot chapter 1 . 1/24/2004
SO SAD! But very good...
Paris Marriott chapter 1 . 11/30/2003
omg, this is so sad! are you going to continue? this is great! maybe a reunion of TJ and Spinelli where they finally confess their love? anyway, good job
trayguy chapter 1 . 9/19/2003
Please don't leave us in suspense why did Spinelli have to move.
x.Irish.o.Eyes.x chapter 1 . 8/10/2003
Aw! That was so sad! I can't believe Spinelli had to leave! But that last heartfelt goodbye between TJ and Spin was so sweet! Please write more! Loved it!
beckie13 chapter 1 . 8/4/2003
i lovedyour story you should writw a sequel to it.
Peaches the First chapter 1 . 7/28/2003
c'mon, everybody together now... AW! lol, very good, not too cheesy, and not boring... just right. Great work. (don't listen to the other dude, I suck with paragraphs too!)

Love, ~Peaches
GuardFaerie chapter 1 . 7/11/2003
I like your story, only one thing to comment on. When TJ calls her Ashley, you might want to make a note that Spinelli's ok with him calling her Ashley, b/c otherwise it seems like a link's mising. I like the story line, and I loved the way you portrayed Mikey. Keep it up!
Peebles chapter 1 . 7/10/2003
A good fanfic. One major problem though.

There are things called paragraphs. Use them. And no, they do not consist of only one or two sentences. It would help if you would group together everything in the beginning.

Nice plot, bad format.