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![]() ![]() ![]() great story, but if this is before 5th year wouldn't Harry be 15 and Hermione 16 instead of 18 and 19? Not flaming your story, just curious why you made them older |
![]() ![]() You are a grandiose arrogant little shit, promoting yourself every chapter while bashing Professor Snape and posting work that looks like a defective 8 year old wrote it. HAVE YOU NEVER HEARD OF A SPELLING CHECKER? A GRAMMAR CHECKER? you are PATHETIC. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() very interesting story here |
![]() ![]() I just checked your patreon account. You can't make money from posting derivative fiction. I don't know if it's you or patreon doing it, whoever it is breaking copyright law. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's rare to stumble upon an actual new plot idea, and this one was fun. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for the fic. It was enjoyable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really hope you have a sequel for this one coming. It reminds me of a saying that age is not a good indicator for wisdom. Maybe for the next one happens following the death of Amelia but would still be there for Harry with her portrait to advise. Some law is triggered due to a unique series of events that recalls the last living minister say due to a declared war time upon death of a sitting minister or is recalled back into office by the queen by emergency power. Either would drag Harry back into office kicking and screaming with his three girls sitting on him to keep him from getting out of it. Perhaps even include Susan who Harry would have been training joins them having been left under Harry’s protection and guardianship. I’ve read enough stories of Harry fighting the war solo and in charge of the Order. This one was different and refreshing. I strongly hope you continue things like this in a new story at some point. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic story. I really enjoyed the snapshot of Harry as Minister and the way you wrapped things up with Fudge. Thank you for sharing your well written tale. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow that was such a kicker. What an impactful chapter showing how not all problems in life can be solved. Poor Harry. Your story is well written and imaginative and I am really enjoying Harry’s journey. Thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting start. I like how Fudge lost everything including his robe. Thank you for sharing your story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't believe I broke my streak of ~20 shitty fanfics just to stumble onto this gem and then IT HAS NO SEQUEL? Great story, scene with ghost council is not overkill in suspension of disbelief, but I liked the pairing and a side of lemons are great. Really didn't expect to even find Harry/Penelope Clearwater pairing. Keeping my fingers crossed for a sequel, I really like the dynamics. Also, I've looked through your stories, why do many of them marked as incomplete? I really hope you'd focus on finishing things before moving on, incomplete stories are sometimes a heartbreak in disguise. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked this story a lot! Very interesting premise and well written. The characters were very well built upon excellent work! |
![]() ![]() Great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's a wonderful story. I hope you decide to do a sequel. |