|Reviews for Veela Charm and the DarkHaired Man|
| laura232 chapter 3 . 3/15/2021
Snipe? Flour? Hermionen? Even if there is no typo , this seems like lazily written disconnected daydreams of a 13 year old girl. I give up. Sorry
| coolio'sdreams chapter 1 . 3/12/2017
Epic love story, man
| Bronze chapter 1 . 8/29/2016
I haven't read the story and all I can think of is HELL NO! Fleur and Snape together? She's a Veela and would have exceptionally high standards for a boyfriend. So unless Snape was twisted so far out of cannon as to unrecognizable,he'd never have a chance.
| fallintotoday chapter 4 . 3/15/2013
My personal favorites:
'Snape took his bird and but the letter in the feet and it lew into Fleaurs lap.'
'Snape ferociously vociferated.'
'Hermione undulated and sat beside her.'
This is quality. I am satisfied.
| ur a joke chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
Is this a joke. You've got to be kidding me.
| Oh my chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
This is too hilarious! A trolling, my dear.
| i am shunpike chapter 10 . 11/12/2009
Your story is really great! It's funny.
I like all the battle scenes with the Voldemort-Squid. Also the part where Hermione is hiding taking photos. This chapter is funnier than the others.
I know this story is really old but please write more! it's so awesome! I really like it. It's the funniest thing I've read in a long time.
| silly chapter 10 . 5/20/2009
this is the greatest thing i have ever laid my eyes on. good job
| Interestinglyweird chapter 4 . 4/18/2009
Okay, first I have to ask if your first language is English. To be frankly honest, your spelling mistakes are horrible. If this is meant to be a parody then it would be a very good idea to put that fact in a note in the first chapter so we can appreciate your brilliance. Otherwise there are plenty of beta readers out there who would love to help you.
This is a strange pairing! Be strong and make it a good story so originality doesn't die! Don't take this as a flame, it's a very funny idea too!
| cast chapter 1 . 2/1/2008
Your spelling is HORRIBLE. god's above and below, if you write this bad all the time STAY AWAY FROM FANFICTION. okay MY spelling is bad but yorus? is WORSE.
| WTF chapter 1 . 11/14/2006
did u type this with ur eyes closed?
If this is a parody poking fun of FleurxSeverus stories, great job.
If you were serious, uhh...yeah...
Clear up the grammer, u type like a 4 year old.
| HELLO THERE chapter 10 . 8/17/2006
This story is a joke of all Snape/fleur parings right?
It's purposely put under romance/poetry right?
You weren't serious about this story, right?
The bad grammer is intentional?
If you said yes to all four, then...
Your my Hero.
| creamywanton chapter 1 . 6/29/2006
makes no sense even if it were a parody
| uijguoihgtnu chapter 1 . 4/25/2006
This joke of a story is awesome 2 the max!
| WTF chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
I'm confused. Is this a parody? I hope so, or else this is fucking stupid.