Reviews for Veela Charm and the DarkHaired Man
laura232 chapter 3 . 3/15/2021
Snipe? Flour? Hermionen? Even if there is no typo , this seems like lazily written disconnected daydreams of a 13 year old girl. I give up. Sorry
coolio'sdreams chapter 1 . 3/12/2017
Epic love story, man
Bronze chapter 1 . 8/29/2016
I haven't read the story and all I can think of is HELL NO! Fleur and Snape together? She's a Veela and would have exceptionally high standards for a boyfriend. So unless Snape was twisted so far out of cannon as to unrecognizable,he'd never have a chance.
fallintotoday chapter 4 . 3/15/2013
My personal favorites:

'Snape took his bird and but the letter in the feet and it lew into Fleaurs lap.'

'Snape ferociously vociferated.'

'Hermione undulated and sat beside her.'

This is quality. I am satisfied.
ur a joke chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
Is this a joke. You've got to be kidding me.
Oh my chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
This is too hilarious! A trolling, my dear.
i am shunpike chapter 10 . 11/12/2009
Your story is really great! It's funny.

I like all the battle scenes with the Voldemort-Squid. Also the part where Hermione is hiding taking photos. This chapter is funnier than the others.

I know this story is really old but please write more! it's so awesome! I really like it. It's the funniest thing I've read in a long time.
silly chapter 10 . 5/20/2009
this is the greatest thing i have ever laid my eyes on. good job
Interestinglyweird chapter 4 . 4/18/2009
Okay, first I have to ask if your first language is English. To be frankly honest, your spelling mistakes are horrible. If this is meant to be a parody then it would be a very good idea to put that fact in a note in the first chapter so we can appreciate your brilliance. Otherwise there are plenty of beta readers out there who would love to help you.

This is a strange pairing! Be strong and make it a good story so originality doesn't die! Don't take this as a flame, it's a very funny idea too!

Ja ne.
cast chapter 1 . 2/1/2008
Your spelling is HORRIBLE. god's above and below, if you write this bad all the time STAY AWAY FROM FANFICTION. okay MY spelling is bad but yorus? is WORSE.
WTF chapter 1 . 11/14/2006
did u type this with ur eyes closed?

If this is a parody poking fun of FleurxSeverus stories, great job.

If you were serious, uhh...yeah...

Clear up the grammer, u type like a 4 year old.
HELLO THERE chapter 10 . 8/17/2006
This story is a joke of all Snape/fleur parings right?

It's purposely put under romance/poetry right?

You weren't serious about this story, right?

The bad grammer is intentional?

If you said yes to all four, then...

Your my Hero.

Plz update
creamywanton chapter 1 . 6/29/2006
makes no sense even if it were a parody
uijguoihgtnu chapter 1 . 4/25/2006
This joke of a story is awesome 2 the max!
WTF chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
I'm confused. Is this a parody? I hope so, or else this is fucking stupid.
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