Reviews for Giving Up and Giving In
AdrenalineRush16 chapter 1 . 12/22/2008
Wonderful. This was perfect, absolutely perfect. :D
NCC-1701.1899 chapter 1 . 12/3/2008
awsome.
SPRACE's Illegitimate Child chapter 1 . 7/5/2008
that was awesome! first time I've seen someone's take on that. Great idea, well-written. Nicely done. :)
Harmony Remarc chapter 1 . 11/25/2006
I'd honestly never noticed the slight hesitation other than getting a breath. You have shed some light on the subject of being offered to scab. This was a great oneshot. I love how you've put David's thoughts on the different people in his life and really showed how much he cares for his family and friends. Bravo!
SkitteryIdol chapter 1 . 10/24/2006
hey! this was cool! i never thought of stretching out a moment where no one says anything before...
davidlaylashipper1 chapter 1 . 7/10/2006
Amazing story! it shows the true side to David. And he's not stuck-up either. Visit my site if you dont believe me.
Swimming Poole chapter 1 . 8/30/2005
You totally drilled through David's skull and spilled out all his thoughts during that moment perfectly.
Sage1899 chapter 1 . 10/12/2003
wow for not knowing Davey I think you did a great job! totally captured what I think he would have going through his head...EEP!

I love skittery too! I am so happy to see that you wrote some skitts stuff that isn't like the others...i'm tired of him being in slashy stuff...he isn't gay! lol Anyway, I will review your other stuff as I get a chance to read more.

Keep up the good work!
Spike chapter 1 . 8/23/2003
Heya. I really liked this one shot. Davey is my favorite character and i never see much about him. I noticed his hesitation at that part in the movie too. I like your interpretation. See ya later.
Chicago chapter 1 . 7/13/2003
Ha HA! Go Davey-boy! You and Jack both make the right choices, well, in the end anyway... *grins* I like this alot... Hasta!

Chicago
Seraph2 chapter 1 . 7/13/2003
That was great! I've never seen a Davey-fic like this one! You made him seem human...compassionate, intelligent, caring...great work!
Frogger No Baka who isn't signed in chapter 1 . 7/9/2003
Wow. That's excellent insight into a thought...

I never realized that brief pause, but when I think about it... you're right...

And it stays true to Davey. To his family. And to his personality. Or what we gather.

Keep up the good work!
Stage chapter 1 . 7/9/2003
ooh! An original-working mind with plotlines AND able to write. XD WO. ::gives cookies.::

I do like it.

Stage
Sita-chan chapter 1 . 7/9/2003
You know, I'm convinced that there's a flying Mischevious!Davey muse that just flies around and attacks people at random. That's what happened to me with "Mothers Know These Things." I don't even LIKE Davey, and suddenly, I find myself writing a fic about him!

Anyway...

This is the first non-slash piece I've read in days, and I'm glad I did read it. It kind of made me sit and think a bit and it shows that David isn't really the stuck-up little snob that I... er, EVERYONE thinks he is. _

Great job!

The Great and Powerful Otaku Sita-chan

...or Ashleigh...whichever...
AlexisVeronica chapter 1 . 7/9/2003
That was good... a nice little thought piece. Good ideas in the story, about how he cares for his family, but they would be so disappointed if he became a scab. Good job!

Dreamer
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