Reviews for When A Good Man Goes to War |
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![]() ![]() ![]() kár a történetért. vajon lesz folytatás? |
![]() ![]() Almost a year since the last update of this tale. Have you cocked up your toes? Shuffled off this mortal coil? Taken the eternal dirt nap? Basically, kick your muse's arse, shove a gallon of coffee down it's gullet, break out the defibrillator or whatever is needed to stir the synapses into firing regularly. Or declare it abandoned. Over to you! Ciao. PS; edit out the numerous superfluous words that litter your work, please. |
![]() ![]() "time-diluted"? WTF? Perhaps you should correct the third sentence of chapter 4 to read "time-DILATED". Ciao. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Next, please? This is so good. Is this continuing? |
![]() ![]() ![]() "The last time the hogwarts express didn't leave on the 1st of September was in the 1500s". What do you mean by that? Locomotive train was invented by muggles in early 1800s. And till then students went to hogwarts by Portkeys, floo or flying carriages like we see in hogwarts legacy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seeing other males naked will never stop making man squeamish. The fact that you believe otherwise confirms my theory that you are female. |
![]() ![]() ![]() If cassie and Patricia were really looking for Harry seriously, how were they unable to find him? There are several instances where they could have met him, like during September 1 when Harry boards his train. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Не плохая работа, жаль что заброшенная. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good. Totally in line with canon plot of Albus and Gellert being pals and taking over to shape the world to their image. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Where’s The Next Chapter? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This has gotten SO interesting! I hope the next chapter comes out soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope you haven’t abandoned this or originality. Both are very good and I can’t wait to see if you are going to continue updating them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just finished reading! What I wouldn't give to read the rest |
![]() ![]() Amazing story! Also the first one I've ever seen with evil Flamels. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I may or may not have binged your entire HP fics. And I may or may not be absolutely *desperate* for more. Themes are similar, but I absolutely adore them! And this one! A 180 and including things I haven't seen elsewhere! High Fae, the actual *origin* or mages, creature inheritance... please. I need moar. Please I beg. |