Reviews for Melt
Poptart Guava Kid chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
I 'awwwww'ed for a long time after reading that last line.
alexlyoko13 chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
I love it, so well writen and hear warming
Hybrid Helen chapter 1 . 1/29/2010
(Can't believe I've never reviewed this!)

D'aw, really like the ice imagery, and how very uncertain Bobby is about it all.
Renn chapter 1 . 10/29/2008
That is a really promising start and I'm off to read the rest right now! (and I completely agree with your thoughts on the comics...XP)
Char-chan chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
ooh very nice vignant of Bobby's thoughts i like!
Barkers3 chapter 1 . 1/30/2008
Aw, Awesome! I freaking loved it - I loved the way it didn't have a happy ending :D
SavvyLeBeau chapter 1 . 2/26/2005
I am absolutley in love with Melt, Freeze, and Thaw. They are just so good, I love them! You are a great slash author! Don't give up on the Bobby/J-P pairings they're so cute.
Polka Dot chapter 1 . 4/29/2004
It is sorta weird the comments bobby had made, like "Hi handsome, nice suit" do straight guys really say that?
Stormkpr chapter 1 . 4/2/2004
I love it. Of course, I love Bobby/Northstar pairings and I've hardly ever read any other than my own. So thank you for writing this!
Dana chapter 1 . 2/14/2004
I LOVE THIS STORY
WRIGHT MORE SOON PLEASE!
Bobby should tell JP how he feels or JP should find out some how. Maby Bobby could tell Anni because he doesn't know how to tell JP and Anni could play match maker!
joker's wild chapter 1 . 1/17/2004
More! There is more coming right? Tell me you're not done with this story! I love the way you have told this story! Bobby is hilarious, his analysis of the X-men is great. I would love to see you develop this story more!
Beaubier chapter 1 . 11/18/2003
You've really done a great thing here, with the ice imagery. And you write a good Bobby. Not just some joker, but a real guy, with actual feelings.

Some strange romantic thing in my head rather wishes this could happen, just so JP could smile for once. But it's nice to see I'm not the only one.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/22/2003
Well, one thing that can be said about the story you tried to ruin with the unredeemable drabble of the pairing is that the story is decent. Any other pairing might have made it worth reading.
Fureux chapter 1 . 7/16/2003
am loving this. a huge thumbs up. we sound pretty similar. i too stopped reading a while back due to storylines/pencillers (yes, i am a snob, lol)/character development that disagreed with me. out of curiosity i looked back in on the fandom and positively squeaked when i found out they'd brought jp into the fold. the slasher in me is smiling so damn hard at the whole bobby/jp idea and we can only hope that they take it up a notch in canon. but yes, i prattle on, this fic? yes, yes. M likes. i look forward to reading more! )

cheers,

The M.
Lament chapter 1 . 7/12/2003
I think you did a great job capturing Bobby's voice. I also how you relate the ice imagery to Bobby's emtoional state. Great job!
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