Reviews for The Wind and Fire Sages of Konoha
drkprince chapter 2 . 4/19
knock knock
Lopez760 chapter 2 . 4/9
Hm yes i appreciate good fluff moments like this, and good naruko fics are also very appreciated this is great so far and excited for more in the future
Mr.BrownOptometrist chapter 2 . 4/8
Great chapter, keep up the awesome work
drkprince chapter 1 . 4/8
pretty nice start. no unneeded bells and whistles. Super clean and palatable plot.. yey for more! lol
Super Squashman chapter 2 . 4/7
Awesome chapter
Thank you
I love it
I’m eagerly awaiting the next chapter
BeyndBOT chapter 2 . 4/7
Keep it up, man
NATSUxERZA 123456 chapter 1 . 3/31
This is an interesting story, I love to read more. Hope you update soon and this won't be abandoned.
I hope you don't do any bashing of any characters, while still keeping their negative traits, so that they feel like actual characters.
I don't enjoy reading stories that bash the characters needlessly and only give spotlight to their negative traits.
Good luck in making a good story.
SuperReader3000 chapter 1 . 3/29
Love the start! Can’t wait to see where you will take it!
Super Squashman chapter 1 . 3/26
I am interested
Let’s see where you take this
I do hope you sprinkle dates with these two throughout the story
Sothniz chapter 1 . 3/25
Really good chapter, really it was sorta week in the first paragraph but after that it was solid. The only real issue I see about how you’re writing is that you’re using more of a third person style, like konohamaru is reciting a story it isn’t bad if that’s what you were going for but I think first person would work better for your story
OkamiKageW chapter 1 . 3/25
This is Naruko so remove Naruto from the tags. This isn't Naruto it's Naruko so remove him from the tags.