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Hm yes i appreciate good fluff moments like this, and good naruko fics are also very appreciated this is great so far and excited for more in the future

Great chapter, keep up the awesome work

pretty nice start. no unneeded bells and whistles. Super clean and palatable plot.. yey for more! lol

Awesome chapter
Thank you
I love it
I’m eagerly awaiting the next chapter

Keep it up, man

This is an interesting story, I love to read more. Hope you update soon and this won't be abandoned.
I hope you don't do any bashing of any characters, while still keeping their negative traits, so that they feel like actual characters.
I don't enjoy reading stories that bash the characters needlessly and only give spotlight to their negative traits.
Good luck in making a good story.

Love the start! Can’t wait to see where you will take it!

I am interested
Let’s see where you take this
I do hope you sprinkle dates with these two throughout the story

Really good chapter, really it was sorta week in the first paragraph but after that it was solid. The only real issue I see about how you’re writing is that you’re using more of a third person style, like konohamaru is reciting a story it isn’t bad if that’s what you were going for but I think first person would work better for your story

This is Naruko so remove Naruto from the tags. This isn't Naruto it's Naruko so remove him from the tags.