Good on how this was done.

The ending was pretty stupid tbh. People should really stop spreading this narrative.

I know it sounds "progressive" to say men should cry more and all but this is not something that you do in front of women.

They just end up thinking you're pathetic. Literally anyone who has ever cried in front of a women knows that they instantly lose all attraction towards you and your relationship permanently changes afterward.

Overall a good story but shoving that in at the end kinda ruined it.

Gran historia me encanto.

Nobody pick up that phone, he's only going to brag!

It's a very honest look at how broken jaune is and how someone, anyone, could help him heal. I love your take on it, naturally, but there are so many options.

except V9 Ruby, uh, she's not having it

Part 2?

Amazing work as always Mallo it was fun and sad and I just want Jaune to be happy...recent canon events make this chapter even more important our boi needs help and Weiss can be that help

We need more Rusted Knight Jaune Arc fanfics. Be it rated T or M. (Lancaster, White Knight, Knight shade, Dragon slayer or xHarem)

Pretty touching story.

I just blew through volume 8 and caught up in volume 9, and am happy to see the show becoming a bit more refined and (dare I say) mature. Good to see fics looking into Jaune's experience in the Ever After, and Whiteknight is always a pairing I'll stand by.

Great work! I am so happy that finally someone wrote a story that focused on the trauma that Jaune went not juming into the bed in 5 seconds.
Yet you captured the MATURE vibes perfectly to make it little bit lighter.

That last scene had me imagining Weiss getting a really thirsty face over Jaune (Think Hisoka from HunterxHunter) during THAT fight with Gon

Here’s to hoping more white knight in the last few eps!

This was a nice story
Bittersweet and also leaving more questions unanswered

You really know your stuff when it comes to the characters

I hope you continue this story

Was hald expecting horny, instead I got wholesome. Can't complain.
Nicely done.

Very good story, good balance of heartwarming and sad. But I'm going to bet in canon Jaune won't make it to end of the season.

Wow.

When I first saw the name of this fic, I was expecting for it to turn out very differently. Some of the recent White Knight fanart also certainly threw fuel on that fire.

However, I'm very pleasantly surprised by the direction that this story took. Weiss' interactions with Juniper were very cute, and the scene between her and Jaune was both heartwarming and a total tearjerker.

Thanks for the great story, Mallobaude.

great story bro.