|Reviews for Fate and the innocent|
| Abby chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
Random question, did I spot a Doctor Who reference in there?
| spacebound1317 chapter 2 . 7/6/2008
woww so cutee i love marty and merril! i lovee it! its awsomee ]
| Kitty chapter 1 . 3/7/2006
What ever happened to punctuation? Your narrative sentences were all run-ons.
| Tunder28 chapter 2 . 1/24/2006
please continue this chap. I'm interssted. please
| Yasmin chapter 1 . 8/25/2005
it's not bad just that there's a lot of mistakes and i couldn't understand the story because of them.
| baby12 chapter 2 . 7/27/2005
wow that was so cute loved it
| Sweet chapter 2 . 7/7/2005
I really like this story keep going with it
| VenomVampire chapter 2 . 1/20/2004
That was a great idea but you should really reread the two chapters and do some editing. I know when I reread my own work, I kick myself for not noticing the mistakes. The constant use of "well" instead of "will" was somewhat irritating. Otherwise, it was a very good story and, with a few tweaking, it could be great.
| Silver Mirror chapter 2 . 8/11/2003
*claps* This is great!
| DarkFate1 chapter 1 . 7/15/2003
Omigod! That was awesome! Pleez write more soon!
| Vanima Nwalmaer chapter 1 . 7/14/2003
This is great! I love Marty! And I was really hoping that they would get those two together in season 2. Alas there is no season 2. Well great fic! Can't wait to read more!