Reviews for Longing
Mendip123 chapter 1 . 6/14/2014
"'Cept me."
"'Cept Jayne."
So adorable, could see this scene as a quiet moment in the show. Loved it.
Tibbins chapter 1 . 12/12/2013
Awwwwww. I love Kaylee and Mal's relationship. It's so cute and protective and dawwwww :P this story fits perfectly with the characters. Really well done
Love Tibbins xx
femmefan1946 chapter 1 . 9/28/2013
I like these quiet character building stories. You got each character nicely.
mudpuddledemon chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
Aw, so cute! I love it, love his indulgence and the entwined arms, and Jayne laughing at them.
crazy-chick-mia chapter 1 . 10/8/2011
Dialogue was fantastic :) Loved this!
Luxuride chapter 1 . 2/27/2010
Aw, I love Mal and Kaylee. He's so sweet with her.

Very in-character and well written. Thanks for a great read.

Also, I wouldn't be opposed to you writing more featuring these two. Just sayin'... :)
xXxThe Phantom's RosexXx chapter 1 . 8/13/2008
Aw! This was so adorably sweet! I'm new to the firefly fandom but I have all the episodes on DVD. I haven't written a fanfiction yet but I am begining to read them and I loved this. I love Mal and Kaylee. He's so sweet with her and even Jayne was somewhat-sweet in this too! I loved it! *Favoriting*
Quirky Del chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
Aw...this was really sweet!


BrienneofThrace chapter 1 . 4/25/2006
*Sque that was so cute! I love the way Mal and Kaylee interact. He loves his mechanic, even if her cheerfulness kills him sometimes, he finds it endearing.
Falcon Horus chapter 1 . 12/7/2005
Aw, how cute! I can actually see this happening...really, so cute...
abril4 chapter 1 . 11/11/2005
Very adorable thanks for the write up.

Nova-Janna chapter 1 . 10/27/2005
“Yeah, ‘cause Jayne is a perfectly normal name for a gun-totin’ bully like yourself.”

This made me smile. No, actually, the whole thing made me smile. Kaylee is just so cute- you totally captured them. It ended a little too short for me, but hey, your perogative. Plus it works this way just fine. Whole thing was just written so well- and, as I said before, it made me smile, so thanks for that.
Diamondinsanity chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
Cute story.

Sylver-Star189 chapter 1 . 8/10/2005
Aw! _ That was so cute!

I love Kaylee, she's my fav chara.

Good fic!
BadBoyLover chapter 1 . 12/13/2004
Aw that was cute!
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