Reviews for Darkest Before Dawn |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Huh, I didn't realize the Midnight thing was that much of an issue with some people. Don't get me wrong, I know she's a waifu often enough, but in this scenario it seemed somewhat clear that it was a comfort type thing and platonic. And hey, I think the dance thing is fair, especially as, like you mentioned in chapter, Kazuki doesn't really know certain things that for many people are 'normal'. And oh geez, I'm sure this'll lead into a clusterfuck of some kind, haha. Think Kazuki's gonna need his friends, guardians, mentors, and love interests to help comfort him a good bit going forward, haha. Looking forward to more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Happy to see you back working on this story. Even happier to know Endo’s mom was arrested, blame shifting hag had it coming. |
![]() ![]() Knight/ grimn knight |
![]() ![]() I really liked your games fics |
![]() ![]() Probably dark shadow, creation or earphone jack |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the idea of him turning Nemuri into a behind-the-scenes drone strike. Hope it works out. Kazuki teaming with Tokoyami against Ectoplasm has strong themeing, and I’m loving it. Chikuchi teaming up with Ochako was an interesting twist, and I wonder if she and/or Shinso will be atvthe Training Camp, where shit will get really, really wild. Couldn’t work a “Wild Wild Pussycats” pun in, butvthe important thing is I TRIED. |
![]() ![]() ![]() With all of Kazuki’s baggage, he could probably write a tell-all, make a mint. There’s certainly enough INTEREST. That and it’d help the MLA’s message, or at least they could TWIST it to do such. As for Toru’s love life… I ship her and Kazuki more than Momo, which is a sign your OC has been well-written. |
![]() ![]() This is good. But it felt strange when the sections about his childhood stopped while the ones for the present time continued . |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ill have you know, Penny is my favourite character. Such a shame what they did with her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hallo, good work as always. A whole month without updates sounds nightmarish but alas. Enjoy your vacation (I thought you didn't like the outdoors much). Thanks for the chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I honestly prefer this than painstakingly describing each individual exam. It seriously messes with the pacing. I have calendar on my desk, so all of them from 1 to 31. Good luck! I wish you a restful vacation. |
![]() ![]() ![]() To answer your question sprite. That being said I love how you introduced Penny. Didn't see it coming until the Salutations |
![]() ![]() ![]() huh, cpundlt endo make his own dark shadow like grimm? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Toru’s really aiming for Best Girl. Kazuki worrying about seeing down her neck-hole to her OTHER clothes is a funny problem to have. As a spectator. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nicely done. Loving the continued growth and happy to see Kazuki finally use the bit from the Sports Featival about using Alpha Grimm to raise his control count. Excellent work as always! Can’t wait for more! |