Reviews for La Foi
RubinCompServ chapter 1 . 7/8
I tried it, then I skipped to the end. Even knowing that I was supposed to be confused didn't make it enjoyable.
Theofile Ardin chapter 1 . 7/22/2023
I must say, as a French reader I quite enjoyed it. And for once it was some rather good French too, congrats. It's not often you read correct French when the author decide French people should actually speak it. Thanks for this story it was sweet.
bgreenfl chapter 2 . 5/5/2023
I like having both versions.

I do think that it would help if you made the English translation in version 2 noticable, e.g., underlined (?), bold(?), italics(?)
Guest chapter 2 . 5/1/2023
I like you've included the translated version. It works well.
cameron1812 chapter 2 . 4/30/2023
This is such a beautiful, perfect story! Thank you!
marlastiano chapter 2 . 4/30/2023
thanks :)
DrackNath chapter 2 . 4/30/2023
This will always be my favorite Gabby fic :3 as she said La foi~ and i have it always
LordGraygem chapter 2 . 4/30/2023
To answer your question, it actually works very well. This second version let the reader in on what Gabby was up to without the cumbersome interruption of having to translate (or just miss entirely) what she was saying.
Ronin Kenshin chapter 2 . 4/30/2023
this was very well written i really liked reading the French chapter first it made the translation all the better for it great work
Ginnylove9990 chapter 2 . 4/30/2023
It is great. I liked both chapters. It was funny and loving at the same time. You did and awesome job. Looking for to you next story. Please Stay Safe and God Bless.
Albaholly chapter 2 . 4/30/2023
I definitely preferred option two. I think you should consider italicising the French to make it a little more obvious.
A1 chapter 1 . 4/27/2023
Very very cute, well-written story. The emotion was conveyed excellently. Even the untranslated text fit very nicely with the story.
Shadowwodahs chapter 1 . 4/28/2023
Good story
frisbeeg70 chapter 1 . 4/27/2023
Experiment away, but my reaction to your AN was, "you're a fucking idiot," and then I stopped reading. (I'm not saying that to flame or insult but that is exactly what I thought when I read that.)

Kudos to you though. Most people mean by experiment to try out a different style than they normally use such as maybe writing in first person. You go with writing something people literally can't understand while they read it. I admire the daring nature of it but not enough to actually try to read it.
deepdiver chapter 1 . 4/27/2023
A wonderful tale, well executed!
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