Reviews for All For Myself |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Goddamn, this is such a heartwarming chapter. Eri deserves all the hugs. |
![]() ![]() ![]() such bogus |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the storyAll For Myself. Just followed the writer and story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() and yet there's nothing. you're just a lying bastard. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bruh, i liked the story, was looking forward to the fruition of the plan, but then your views on xxx workers was displayed, mc has disgust towards them and expressed it multiple times over the course of a few short paragraphs. Even the observation he made that there were a lot of heteromorphs in the brothel he chalks up to dudes being freaky when within the world youve created that could be explained by it being harder for heteromorphs to find jobs due to discrimination. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Erasure?! He took Aizawa's quirk?! Aizawa, noooooooo! Is he still alive?! |
![]() ![]() ![]() since its rated m better see some context if he has fucked or not |
![]() ![]() The story's far too abrupt, and I've got no incentive to actually like the SI. He's annoying so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *clapping* good chapter |
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![]() ![]() OK up to here your english is not that great the story line is wonderful wonderful this Spelling and the wording behind the writing style doesn't suit the story that well Sometimes you need I don't know how to put it into words but Maybe some direct POV will help saying hey this is your personality now or something else like that or this is your POV that's what it's called I think This story is wonderful the story is wonderful so far It is just that it needs more context the writing needs a little bit more help To yeah and the english needs to be a little better |
![]() ![]() ![]() The difference between a Hero and a Villain is that a Villain is hurt by the world and goes ‘The World shall know my Pain’ while a Hero says ‘I was hurt by the world, I’ll do my best to make sure know one can be hurt this way again’ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay. This is very refreshing, like some ice water in July |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh for fuck sake i just binge read all the other chapters god fucking dammit |
![]() ![]() ![]() Everything in this scene feels unearned. How did he get Erasure? How did he get "Cremation"? How did he find AfO's location? Why is he doing what he's doing? Ever since he got AfO's quirk the story nosedived in quality. |