Reviews for Battered Bloom
TheMortalTwilight chapter 14 . 12/8
loved this chapter
JaysWorld2 chapter 14 . 12/4
Oh this was just so lovely to read
JaysWorld2 chapter 14 . 10/18
Yes, finally, some parenting and concern! Now he just needs to open up his eyes a little more and LOOK at his daughter and see how weary she is.
JaysWorld2 chapter 13 . 10/18
Okay, yes, finally some spirit from Bella. Some kickback. I just hope, if her final test ends up being the bonfire party, that it doesn't end in disaster for her.
JaysWorld2 chapter 12 . 10/18
"...reminding myself the sins of men"
That line. Damn. That's good. And so true. To be a woman is a dangerous thing.
JaysWorld2 chapter 11 . 10/18
Reading this chapter, I can't help the resentment I feel for Charlie. Phil is obvious -he's evil, evil, evil. But where the hell was Charlie in all of this? Why did he let himself be so neglectful of his own daughter?
JaysWorld2 chapter 10 . 10/18
OKay, finally an adult who sees that something is wrong. Go Esme for being concerned - now go talk to Charlie and fix this!
JaysWorld2 chapter 9 . 10/18
I hate hate hate hate hate hate HATE that Phil's skewed her perception so bad that she honestly can't trust a single man around her, even her own father.

And what is up with Charlie? Where has he been the past years and WHY has he not made more of an effort to see his own daughter? This girl has been failed by too many people
JaysWorld2 chapter 8 . 10/18
Okay, so based on the words from the email, I get a little more why Rosalie is so very against Bella. Because that's harsh.
JaysWorld2 chapter 7 . 10/18
damn, the scars run deep in Bella.
JaysWorld2 chapter 6 . 10/17
Rose's view is really black and white, and I hope it doesn't get in the way for Bella and Edward getting close again. I mean, seriously, "people don't changemonsterevil"? harsh words against a then 13 year old
JaysWorld2 chapter 5 . 10/17
Charlie needs to look at his damned daughter and open his eyes
JaysWorld2 chapter 4 . 10/17
ooooo crap, she forgot!
JaysWorld2 chapter 3 . 10/17
the brainwashing she's endured is killing me. and Phil STILL has his claws clutched deep
JaysWorld2 chapter 2 . 10/17
I always wonder why some men hate women so much. Was it an event that caused him to view all women the same, neglect as a child coupled with mysoginistic indoctrination, oe is he just a sadist?
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