Reviews for Turpentine
Insomniac Dormouse chapter 1 . 5/25/2023
This was so melancholy. I love the whole concept of ages so much; it’s such a versatile idea!
Zer Author chapter 1 . 5/13/2023
Okay, this bothered me. This bothered me a lot. That little thread of despair, of dangerous anticipation...you pulled it off wonderfully, but this story is going on the list of 'things that wig me out, just a little bit.'
17 chapter 1 . 5/6/2023
I kinda like this au a bit more than the original. I NEED MORE! WHAT HAPPENS! IS IT LIKE A TEN YEARS THING!? WHY R YOU SO GOOD AT STORYTELLING?!
stormchild19 chapter 1 . 5/6/2023
I would love more of this one specifically, but I understand if you wanna keep it just a one-shot. Either way its super cool! If you do make this one a 2 shot I'd like to see it turn from black to something else, maybe that stary sky one that Frostbite mentioned? I think it'd be super interesting, especially if adult Danny comes back to Amity Park after the age turns.

Honestly, I've been craving a Danny confronts his parents fic for a while, probably cause the neglect Danny and Jazz experience makes me relate to them so much with how neglected i was during my own childhood. It's one thing to let lab safety go to the shitter when you're young and stupid. It's quite another to be so damn neglectful your kid half dies; which i can understand Danny forgiving them for that, he is a young teenager after all and would naturally be reluctant to see the situation for what it is; the added situation in this fic on the other hand makes the idea of a confrontation even more interesting! Not to mention just how CATHARTIC it would be! Ooooooooh!

Anyway, love your work, every time I see a new update from you I get excited. Can't wait for your next one
Fencer22 chapter 1 . 5/6/2023
I said I’d love more like this and I meant it but at the same time oww that one a critical hit to the feels. Really well done.