Nice to finally see another familiar character from the show show up. As for the 100 Year Quest stuff, I'm interested to see how any of that would play out if you do intend to take it forwards.

Definitely a wasted scene imo just like my previous comment. If we see this flashback after getting more interested and invested in a character it is way more powerful and effective.

I honestly disagree with showing his death like this because I have zero emotional investment in him as a character and honestly don’t care that he died. This scene would have a huge impact if we learnt about it after getting emotionally invested in the MC but since that hasn’t happened yet then it’s just a complete waste imo.

32 years until canon. And story is closed. Lose all interest because I read for si/ocs that experience canon. It's the same reason I won't read Pokemon fics that start with the MC already a gym leader. They just are stupid.

I'll say that I was really surprised by the Harvest Festival reveal. It's an interesting way that you've woven it into the story, with the original purpose being to get money for the Gildarts Shift. Looking forward to seeing how it'll play out

I'll follow this, but I truly hate the premise of the story. Mainly because the entire story so far has felt like nothing more than a prologue to the main story, which is Fairy Tail. Seriously, the fact that you are 46 chapters into the story and still have an idiotic 27 years before Canon is just plain stupid. Is the main story not going to begin until chapter 150, or are you going to do a time skip? The pace is just to slow for my taste.

Yeah I'm glad that Cade didn't end up with Fea. It would have felt a bit too cliche for me. I felt like this arc was pretty good, with how Cade progressed his magic

Well, I get why you gave Cade another magic early on. Enchantment Magic is kinda OP, so I guess this sort of balances it out. I do hope that he eventually moves away from the ice and back to enchantments though. There is a lot that can be done with it. Overall, I think this is a good start to a story, especially for a first one

I do like this story. The way that it explores an earlier time period that we know little to nothing about is interesting. I don't mind the wait until canon, as the story is fun to read, and I find Cade to an interesting character.
The only thing I am curious about is how strong Cade will be WHEN canon begins. Will he be really OP, or be heavily nerfed? I get it if you can't say cause of spoilers though.
Anyways, just want to say keep up the good work, I am curious to see where this story goes.

Nice chapter I am interested to see how you progress the story with cade having etherial state.

Nice chapter, interested to see what happens next

Well I stopped reading now the story was very good but since you started to add the romance especially in the most cliché way possible this fanfic lost its spark, I wish you luck with this fanfic it was good so far

Nice chapter and happy new year.

I really like the premise of the story and the main character of this story you made him interesting to read and see the adventure he is going on. I really like your writing on how you expand the characters and the world it makes it refreshing to read new things happening in a already crazy world. So yeah what I want to say is keep up the awesome work and hope everything is going well I will be here continuing reading this amazing story.

The story is quite interesting but the writing style is just painful to read. There is no need to make such lengthy sentences at every single opportunity, there is no need to explain every bit of irrelevant information, and there is no need to make every dialogue an awkward "who can say the most unnecessary things" contest.

I hope you improve and manage to make a good story but I just can't bring myself to keep reading this one.