Reviews for The Honored One |
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![]() ![]() I see that you already have an idea of how to lead your story, but if you let me and you don't mind, I have a few ideas that you can use: 1 as a summon you could use kurama and why not and it makes sense naruto considers himself the strongest so why shouldn't he have the strongest summon which would be kurama, naruto could create the 9 masked beasts technique with him but instead of 9 do 12 why 12 for two reasons first 12 is a combination of two six he has six eyes and twelve is more than 9 second reason is the 9 masked beasts technique is a reference to the 12 schikigami that abe no seimei created and each of the 12 had abilities that were missing with the 9 masks except death and two monks e.g. white tiger/byakko control over wind and assassination, blue dragon/seiryu eating chakra and giving chakra , green turtle/genbu barriers and chakra sensing , red bird/suzaku fire control and flying , gold snake/toda poisoning and healing , bronze bull/kochin earth control and endurance , black cat/rikugo hand to hand combat and yang chakra , black and white rabbit/daion control over various dolls (duplication) and yin chakra , pink lotus flower/tenko water control and ranged combat , dark orange bee/tenku lightning control and casting (power, techniques, chakra) to one person (mech) , monk/taijo sealing and strengthening allies and weakening enemies , priestess/kijin proficiency with all weapons and natural chakra . I took inspiration from twin star exorcist I changed it a bit but it's better than what we got with 9 masks or every other chakra mod from conon (we all agree that it was copied from dragon ball) this was my first idea that I will offer you for free, whether you use it or not is up to you, the most important thing is your vision and I will keep reading because your story is awesome I will definitely read your answer and opinions on my idea no. 1 and if you want more ideas and I ask other readers to answer too. best regards |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue with the story, it's very good. Please don't give up, a story that really has no comparison. I can tell you this because I'm a big fan of this type of stories and the truth is that they have no comparison. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this shit is good keep it up |
![]() ![]() I love this well written and I can’t wait for the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() i hope you come back to this story man. this is an interesting one and i like your ideas so far combining jjk's power system and naruto's. |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting chapter loved it hope naruto geta more uses our of six eyes in terms of jutsu creation |
![]() ![]() ![]() sakura getting just enormous levels of upgrades in the span of a month feels weird and kinda silly i mean come on she is sakura nothing much. she should not be able ot fight like that or be at a level near sasuke at all even with her training. also your fights are so easy to understand and so dynamic with it that i can just picture it. it is awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i dont think sakura and sasuke need to change their ability they are still food with what they have and naruto needed something else. and if you even changed them nothing much would change from canon sakura and sasuke so i hope you didn't change them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i gotta clarify that the whiskers are there because his parent was a jinchuriki not because he was one. boruto and the hemwati also have whiskers on their face. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is it unjustly abandoned? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a great story so far I’m exited for the next part |
![]() ![]() I hope you aren’t dead, this story is really good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not dead people, life just gets busy and this is a hobby so I write when I’m free. Thanks for reading |
![]() ![]() ![]() is this dead or? |
![]() ![]() Porfavor continúa está obra de arte |