Reviews for Mist and Maelstroms
Guest chapter 33 . 10/20
Bro Kurama can take on more than one tailed beast at a time. Hell even two or three at a time. The three, four, and five tails would all three probably lose, even if they fought at the same time.
Guest chapter 32 . 10/20
How the hell is Suigetsu able to match and overpower Naruto? God you're scaling makes no sense and is shit.

How the fuck can he wield the 'hammer splitter' if even Kisame can't?
Guest chapter 28 . 10/20
Naruto is weak as fuck here.
Guest chapter 27 . 10/20
1.) Six inches for a middle teenager? Kind of small.

2.) Seems unfair Mei didn't even swallow yet Naruto made her pussy cum from oral.
Guest chapter 26 . 10/20
Naruto has been trained by a kage, two kage level shinobi, and a few powerful jonin. How the fuck was Suigetsu giving him trouble/equaling him?
Guest chapter 23 . 10/20
Sucks Naruto is a 'one woman man'. Yugito would've been great for him.

I hate that he's so immature and childish still. It's annoying.
Guest chapter 22 . 10/20
Gross.
Guest chapter 16 . 10/20
One tail Kurama is like equal to Nibi or Sanbi, bro.
Guest chapter 14 . 10/20
Kushina was sent to konoha as a child. She most likely did meet Sakumo.
Guest chapter 11 . 10/19
Why was Naruto wide eyed at seeing Hana?

Also shouldn't Naruto have gotten some of that money?
a fan of this chapter 1 . 10/19
It was fun to read about Mei grabbing Naruto's tit while in female form, I hope there's more of that in the future, it would be fun to read, something like, "if you're going to use a jutsu that turns you into a girl completely, at least I'm going to make you feel the pleasure of being a girl" or something similar that Mei would say to Naruto.
Guest chapter 6 . 10/19
Damn. Naruto x harem would be hot.

Yugito, mei, Hana, and a few others. Lol
Guest chapter 3 . 10/19
I agree with Naruto. Hana is hot, she's hot as fuck.
HeartByte-FreeAIWritingTool chapter 1 . 10/18
Love the story Mist And Maelstroms. Just followed the writer and story.

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bleachorange chapter 4 . 9/17
This new direction is bad, and the writing and storytelling in this chapter is SO ass, I am dropping it. More power to those who want to continue, but this is NOT for me.
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