| Reviews for Once Upon a Wish |
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   maskedkeeper chapter 7 . 5/18 What I dont get, didn't the dursleys get confundesd to forget them and think harry ran away. But not we have them reporting that the old man kidnapped harry, meaning he didn't forget. |
| Natalie4q6 chapter 1 . 5/16 I stumbled upon Storio (storioai dot com) yesterday — really interesting. You can build interactive novels with decision points and art scenes. Definitely worth a try if you're into writing! |
| blcoachmac chapter 26 . 5/12 Loved it, again! |
| blcoachmac chapter 25 . 5/12 That was excellent! Dumbledore will be beside himself! |
| blcoachmac chapter 23 . 5/12 Dumbledore is going to be a pain in the ass before long, and Tom is gonna make an appearance! But, I think Malfoy will do something stupid first! |
| blcoachmac chapter 12 . 5/11 If Harry is the MOD, he sure could make “Life” a living hell for Tom and his suck up’s! |
| blcoachmac chapter 9 . 5/11 I thought wizards live to 140 or 150 years old? |
| blcoachmac chapter 4 . 5/10 Is Charlus and Dorea past? |
| blcoachmac chapter 3 . 5/10 Great twist! A new Potter will drive Dumbledore bonkers! |
| seltelbani chapter 4 . 4/29 I too much prefer the Charlus/Dorea combination and use that in my stories. |
| Atomikboots chapter 26 . 4/19 I enjoyed it I hope your hands are feeling better |
| purplevictory chapter 26 . 4/12 I realize I should clarify my previous comment about some of the words being clunky. It doesn’t happen often, it’s just that once in a while a word is used when a better one would have fit, or a wrong word is used altogether. It is not enough to detract from the story. In fact, overall, this turned out to be a mighty fine read. So don’t let my comment be upsetting in any way, it was made in the spirit of giving you some feedback if you ever want to comb over the story for edits. |
| purplevictory chapter 25 . 4/12 Great story. Some clunkiness with word choices, although, you mentioned using voice to text software, so perhaps some of the wrong words are a result of that. My only qualm is the absolute filth that Harry constantly seems to eat. Orange soda and pizza seemingly every day and in this chapter you described it as loaded with cheese and meat. That is a very American cuisine (I admit this as an American myself), but even American teens wouldn’t consume that every day. Even if he’s active enough to keep his weight down, he’s got to be rotting his teeth, sporting greasy pimply skin, and ruining his insides. |
| Vee chapter 3 . 4/1 Harry's memory at Petunia shutting the door so he couldn't hear stories was awful. |
| Guest chapter 26 . 3/22 Very good story. |