Reviews for A Shinobi of Paradis |
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![]() ![]() ![]() aww bro mad teen gohan vibes, all the ability but like o spirit. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent chapter. Waiting for your next update. Waiting for how Naruto will handle 3 titan shifters, 2 if Annie joins Naruto |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, I recently came across your story and I like it. Will you be continuing it? |
![]() ![]() Hmmm Naruto x krista x Sasha x Ymir x Annie |
![]() ![]() ![]() i vote for Naruto X Sasha X Historia |
![]() ![]() Naruto can infuse people with his Uzumaki Chakra, I am dreading what will happen if/when he does this to Hange! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Chakra enhanced titans are a go here! Excellent chapter. Waiting for your next update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked this. It was a great type of character interactions and it was nice to read. I would have liked if Naruto showed some medical knowledge in these moments and tell his fellow cadets some medical advice like take Sasha's pulse and be like: "Krista, when she wakes up five her tiny sips of water." But that isn't a game breaker for me. I just think a field medic that is actually very capable is very dangerous even to titans. (Cut spines, tendons, blowing up joints, making smoke screens or using granades to the ears , using flammable oil, attacking the eyes or ears). Everything seems pretty nice and I like these character buildup moments. I also like that Naruto is experimenting with his Chakra and discovering what he can do with it. Giving Chakra to someone is very true thing and he is basically giving them recovery Chakra or empowering them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was not expecting a Desmond Doss quote, but I am pleasantly suprised. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice. Looking forward to more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like how you wrote Naruto into this chapter. I also like that he immediately took a liking to Sasha (one of my favorite characters who brought a lot of levity and innocence to the story ( I feel like after she bowed out of the story, the story took a very serious turn that was not good in my opinion )). I also like that Naruto seems to learn what the human body is or can do. It would help him a lot to know the body's weaknesses when facing a Titan shifter. (Like cutting tendons how Mikasa and Levi did, or blowing up ear drums to affect balance or cutting the spines to remove use of the lower half of the body). One thing I kind of dislike is that Naruto seems a bit like a Gary Stu but that's not an obvious thing. I would like to see Eren, Naruto and Mikasa talk about their choices and why Naruto has their father's glasses. Like more interactions. Finally I like that you gave some meaning to the chains and Naruto's Chakra which is able to connect memories and knowledge of the titans. Maybe make a mindscape connection between Naruto and Dina or other pure titans. He doesn't necessarily command them but he can communicate to some level. So yeah, I really liked this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() This development is very good. I really like that Naruto has something of a keepsake from his father and he is following în his footstepsm but he is also a warrior to fight for the people. Basically a field medic, something that could have saved a lot of lives. I am actually glad that you made him a medic because I am one of the few people who did not like the ending and got flame for it online and I had to explain why having the Founding Titan is basically the cheat skill to do whatever including: make the Eldians immune to forceful transformation (which would solve most problems), or disable all the other Titans and only leave the Founding titan, or give the people the ability to gain immunity over time. Anyway, given that Naruto is a doctor and learns things about the titans then maybe he creates a vaccine to prevent forced transformation form Titan spinal fluid, or a treatment for the titans (I consider their transformation a biological reaction like a alergic reaction). I also liked that you gave Naruto chains and for some reason I imagined Naruto as Berserker from "Fate Zero", in that he uses the chains to take control of a group of pure titans to follow his orders. Or that he somehow retrieves memories or visions or communicate with the Pure Titan in a mindscape. Because I would kind of like Dina to be Naruto's titan steed and be his proxy Titan form. Like he ties himself to Dina's nape and takes control of her Titan. Or become his experimental Titan that he keeps secret for experimenting because she is a royal making her DNA more valuable... Damn, I went on a huge segway. I am glad you already wrote the chapters, this is just anticipation though. So I am happy with this story. Finally if you ask me who would I pair with, I said I liked Sasha but I also really like Historia too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finally! This has been some amazing background development for Naruto and the characters. But I would be lying to myself if I didn't say that I had been waiting for this encounter for a very long time. Naruto's powers and chains. Damn I love that! And what is this? A power of the chains to somehow connect to the titans!? Like am umbilical cord to their beings!? That actually makes sense for Chakra and his power and I am actually glad that this is how the story is going: smiling Titan becoming Naruto's Allie?! Whatever the case, I actually really like this. Great work! |