Reviews for A Shinobi of Paradis |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome first chapter! I like it very much. Just from this first chapter it actually feels like M rated story; from the AoT level of gore to nice wholesome family moment. I hope i would see this kind of writing again when you describe how the cadets lost their friends to titans. The level of despair, helplessness, and anger toward situation. The gruesome scene that they will witness, shaping their personality to cold hearted soldiers that will gladly genocide the Marleys in revenge. Again, very nice and captivating first chapter, forward for next one :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter |
![]() ![]() How long until Naruto summons the 1,000 armed Buddha Statue, I want to see it “pound away” at the Colossus Titan?! At the very least, will he be able to manifest those Wood Dragons by the time of the attack on the Second Wall? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the chapter and more |
![]() ![]() ![]() kurama is 300 meters tall my man he is the size of large mountains |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kurama is 240 meters tall, not 100. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, K's shown himself |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting story so far! Hope to see more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man i really like this story and the details to the story make ir easy to imagine whata going on. Im really debating to buy this patrion. But even tho there so much detail and feel like alot stuff going on there really isnt. If the chapters were longer then yea there would be no issue but i feel like chapter 2 and 3 could have been put together. But nevertheless the story really good keep up the great work. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Puedes agregar a Pieck y Rico al harem y buen cap, saludos |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is this a sage naruto or even a mokuton Naruto? Either way this is interesting |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow that was really good. If it's only two ladies then one of them definitely has to be the sharpshooter Sasha and... I am going to throw a curveball: Freida. Maybe Naruto meets her through her sister Historia and he changes history. Freida certainly has brothers who can take her place as the Founding Titan. She can choose not to be it if she was influenced by a certain Jinchuuriki. |
![]() ![]() Please tell me that Naruto has the Mokotun, as that would be INVALUABLE against the three Titan Shifter Spies?! Not to mention Hange would LOSE HER MIND the first time seeing Naruto summon the 1,000 Armed Giant Buddha Statue/Golem (would be cool if Naruto could suppress the Exploding Power of the Colossus Titan, and the Exploding Wood Dragons! |