Reviews for A Shinobi of Paradis
Marvelous Pathetic chapter 1 . 8/25/2023
Awesome first chapter! I like it very much. Just from this first chapter it actually feels like M rated story; from the AoT level of gore to nice wholesome family moment.

I hope i would see this kind of writing again when you describe how the cadets lost their friends to titans. The level of despair, helplessness, and anger toward situation. The gruesome scene that they will witness, shaping their personality to cold hearted soldiers that will gladly genocide the Marleys in revenge.

Again, very nice and captivating first chapter, forward for next one :D
R-king 93 chapter 5 . 8/9/2023
Great chapter
Guest chapter 5 . 8/7/2023
How long until Naruto summons the 1,000 armed Buddha Statue, I want to see it “pound away” at the Colossus Titan?! At the very least, will he be able to manifest those Wood Dragons by the time of the attack on the Second Wall?
FanFictionman43 chapter 5 . 8/7/2023
Nice
Khaos05 chapter 5 . 8/7/2023
Thanks for the chapter and more
RedMamba24 chapter 4 . 7/27/2023
kurama is 300 meters tall my man he is the size of large mountains
magamed7384854 chapter 4 . 7/23/2023
Kurama is 240 meters tall, not 100.
Krieger Techpreist chapter 4 . 7/23/2023
Ah, K's shown himself
Hugo0974 chapter 3 . 7/8/2023
Interesting story so far! Hope to see more
Kaozw456 chapter 3 . 7/5/2023
Man i really like this story and the details to the story make ir easy to imagine whata going on. Im really debating to buy this patrion. But even tho there so much detail and feel like alot stuff going on there really isnt. If the chapters were longer then yea there would be no issue but i feel like chapter 2 and 3 could have been put together. But nevertheless the story really good keep up the great work.
FanFictionman43 chapter 1 . 7/5/2023
Nice
HZ-EL PEPE chapter 3 . 7/4/2023
Puedes agregar a Pieck y Rico al harem y buen cap, saludos
Beta Orionis chapter 2 . 6/27/2023
Is this a sage naruto or even a mokuton Naruto? Either way this is interesting
DarkShadowRaven chapter 1 . 6/22/2023
Wow that was really good.

If it's only two ladies then one of them definitely has to be the sharpshooter Sasha and... I am going to throw a curveball: Freida. Maybe Naruto meets her through her sister Historia and he changes history.

Freida certainly has brothers who can take her place as the Founding Titan. She can choose not to be it if she was influenced by a certain Jinchuuriki.
Guest chapter 2 . 6/21/2023
Please tell me that Naruto has the Mokotun, as that would be INVALUABLE against the three Titan Shifter Spies?! Not to mention Hange would LOSE HER MIND the first time seeing Naruto summon the 1,000 Armed Giant Buddha Statue/Golem (would be cool if Naruto could suppress the Exploding Power of the Colossus Titan, and the Exploding Wood Dragons!
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