Reviews for Til Dawn |
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![]() ![]() ![]() The story sounds exciting. I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes. I do wish that Bella went into the woods because of an emergency instead of a walk, how irresponsible when people were dying. I am confused by what she actually is. Is she a vampire that was also bitten by a wolf during changing which altered her DNA? Who is Laney? I at first wondered if she was her older sister. Aunt? Close family friend? I got the impression she has been around a while. She is supposedly living at the Swan family farm. |
![]() ![]() Great chapter clarifying what she is and can do. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Amazing story! Please keep going |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like this. please continue. |
![]() ![]() Great start. Sounds like Bella isn't like Laney and is instead a werepire, half werewolf and half vampire. Is she the only one of her kind? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Quite interesting and a fun read. I'm going to reread to glean more detail. Will there be more? |