|Reviews for Til Dawn|
| VryUnique chapter 1 . 11/1
The story sounds exciting. I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes.
I do wish that Bella went into the woods because of an emergency instead
of a walk, how irresponsible when people were dying.
I am confused by what she actually is. Is she a vampire that was also bitten
by a wolf during changing which altered her DNA?
Who is Laney? I at first wondered if she was her older sister. Aunt? Close family
friend? I got the impression she has been around a while. She is supposedly living
at the Swan family farm.
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/3
Great chapter clarifying what she is and can do.
| thmmais chapter 4 . 6/3
Wow! Amazing story! Please keep going
| problemchild71 chapter 4 . 6/3
i like this. please continue.
| Guest chapter 3 . 5/31
Great start. Sounds like Bella isn't like Laney and is instead a werepire, half werewolf and half vampire. Is she the only one of her kind?
| ginkgo00 chapter 1 . 5/29
Quite interesting and a fun read. I'm going to reread to glean more detail. Will there be more?