Reviews for Kuroinu Retaliation |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh, thanks for this update! Gotta love Alicia being a tsundere. . |
![]() ![]() ![]() So im going to guess that the "R" from the letter is Raymondos Lulus. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to admit that this is exceeding my expectations. I came into this expecting some lewd crap that i would probably drop in a chapter or two and instead get a rather well written fic that isn't just a wish fulfilment. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you, thank you very much for continuing with this magnificent story. A wonderful chapter. Hahaha, it's great to see how that one that the princesses saw continues to pursue and tempt them. She is also great at how Naruto has earned Alice's respect and affection as a knight, warrior and woman at the same time, helping her to strengthen herself and praise her beauty. And with Prim honesty, chivalry and a little bit of flirting. Spectacular and revealing moment in the conversation between the cousins regarding what is expected of them, their past, their futures and their feelings. No, you can't cut it right there. It's evil, surely you did it to keep us waiting. ha ha ha Who is "R"? Is there more than what is believed about everything that has happened in the past regarding the elven decline and the growth of the Church? Or the loss of powers of both Olga and Cellestine? Please continue soon to see what comes out of this meeting, Kaguya's movements and Alicia and Naruto's fight along with the growth of her and her cousin's love for him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome work please continue the story |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Pretty nice on how this was done here. Can't wait for more when possible. |
![]() ![]() ![]() another amazi.g chapter and great to see this story updated. Things are definitely getting interesting to say the least. one little note i have is that it would. e awesome if you were to list where the various girls ate from as other than the obvious Kuroinu girls some of tbem serm like they are from other sources |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter anyway. *Thumbs UP!* I can't wait to see/imagine Celestine meeting this R person. I'll wait to read the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter and great to see this story updated again. Wow Prim is really letting her feelings for Naruto show in this chapter by showing that she isn’t opposed to marriage. So we will get to see Naruto vs Alicia round 2, that’s cool. Though i think it would be a good reminder that Naruto had put a gravity seal on Alicia for her personal training so for the fight that seal should be deactivated or removed. That being said I wonder if Alicia will see an immediate result of the gravity seal training? The insight into Alicia’s feelings for Naruto is very interesting as well as the advice she got from Prim. It makes me wonder if Alicia will fully fall in love with Naruto and admit it after the duel? Because the way I see things currently Alicia might be the type to go all the way once she confirms who Naruto’s personality. I wonder if “R” is a clone of Naruto that will help out Celestine. I can’t wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! Glad this is back. Naruto is on the march and the conspiracy from the Church is becoming more unraveled. Soon Naruto will have all the ladies in the land under his "spell" with how he does things. Looking forward to the reveal of the mysterious "R". |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you so much for the new chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter dude definitely Can't wait for the next update |
![]() ![]() ![]() thank you for the chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good chapter |