Reviews for Kuroinu Retaliation
coki13566 chapter 10 . 11/18/2024
Celestine's luck may be turning but Claudia's became none, by the time Celestine return to her fortress she will be round with Graves children.
Aruto-kun chapter 10 . 11/18/2024
you know good wine should be drunk on a good day that's what makes it special like this story, I don't want to read this good story when I have a bad day like this is the good day. Thank you for the update. I hope you can update faster because of this good story.
Ryu wolf chapter 10 . 11/17/2024
The true battle is yet to come
Borello chapter 10 . 11/15/2024
really good work. i wonder when celestine meet naruto.
Drakon45 chapter 10 . 11/17/2024
hope the next chapter is soon
Stratos263 chapter 10 . 11/16/2024
Good luck Celestine
Elchabon chapter 10 . 11/16/2024
Thank you very much for updating this magnificent story.
A spectacular chapter.
Wow, more of the mystery and traitors in the church and the "good" side are revealed.
Poor Celestine must have been quite a shock to her, everything that happened, the only good thing was that she found another elf like her.
I loved how Naruto continues to relate and make the princesses fall in love even more.

I have seen those things in the comments, it is best to ignore it.

I stopped by and read your other new stories, they are interesting but I prefer and love this story and the one about the spiderverse.
warhawk talons chapter 10 . 11/15/2024
So it looks like the other conspirators have finally made their move. This was bound to happen, with Volt and his mercenaries dead Grave would take over. With their original plan now ruined and Olga's faction growing closer, and Celestine Investigating the missing children they can't afford to play conservative anymore. It's too bad Claudia and Eleanor couldn't escape.
MatthewGremory chapter 10 . 11/15/2024
Finally, this story is back! I was afraid you wouldn’t be able to continue it, but I’m glad you haven’t abandoned it. I’m sorry about your condition and hope your arm is getting better so you can go back to writing your story. I hope Claudia and Eleonora are alive and well, and I look forward to seeing them in Naruto’s harem in the future. I can imagine Claudia and Naruto having a child together. I hope to see all the princesses happy with Naruto, saving them from a much worse fate. I look forward to seeing more of this story in the future.
Guest chapter 10 . 11/14/2024
This was an incredible chapter. I can't wait for more.
Guest chapter 9 . 11/14/2024
This was a great chapter.
DaftMerc39 chapter 10 . 11/14/2024
Great chapter.

So Grave's long-time ally was John Mandeville and acquaintance with Shamuhaza, the three of them are working together to move up for their plan.

Now Claudia sees the truth of Grave's methods on why he is letting everyone in Ur to be sacrifice for sending his troops to Thorn instead of Ur to help Leona. Now that bastard is abandoning Ur.

Eleonora Bern I feel sad for her be in a cell. Least Celestine ask her of the children she's in care for them. The missing children have affinity of strong magic.

I wonder how Grave and his associates know of Celestine and Princess Knights investigation of the missing children.

Now Grave the traitor made his move on Claudia and Celestine to seize power and have fun with Claudia to bear his seed.

Celestine is going to have to leave her own home, Celestine better make it to Thorn to reach Kaguya.

Naruto gives Prim a rapier. It suits her to wield.

Take Ur's large majority of foods and the farmlands to cripple and rob the Church supplies faster excellent idea from Naruto.

Celestine enjoying to cleaning herself up in river to wash up from the sewage.

Anna Florence as the Guardian of the forest glad she's going to help Celestine, the two elves first time met each other. It's nice that Anna Florence made her first appearance in this chapter with a different role.
xXwolfsterXx644 chapter 10 . 11/14/2024
Great chapter dude definitely Can't wait for the next update and for when graves and all those traitors get what's coming to them
Ryujomaru15 chapter 10 . 11/14/2024
Once again great chapter. Glad to see you writing again.

So Graves decided to make his move and stage a Coup and even meets up with Shamuhaza (aka Kaguya’s antagonist from canon) to do so.

Now Kaguya her fortress are in danger and Celestine is now on the run from their former allies. This will make things complicated for Shield Alliance minus Alicia and Prim (or maybe so considering how they had allies there too).

I wonder what will happen to Claudia now considering she is now in a position similar to when she was captured in canon except that her fate in more vague as I can’t if she has been captured or has somehow escaped?

I feel bad for Eleonora, she was completely innocent in this conspiracy and now she is a true prisoner now rather than just being hold for questioning. I wonder what will happen to her next?

I see that you are going to give Prim some combat training in the form of a Rapier which is a good choice for her and that she has a good bonding moment with Naruto is a good thing for their relationship.

Also glad to see that you pointed out Naruto’s lack of Clairvoyance since the first chapter and showed how Naruto doesn’t rely on it.

I see you included Anna Florence (with a different role) now in this story, which makes sense. I wonder how her presence will change things?

Also we are approaching the battle for the second fortress. This also means this will be the first time Alicia will have to show her worth as a general for the legion I wonder how you plan to utilize this?

Also what will be Kaguya’s plan going forward as she seems to be aware of many things and chapter 6 is the last time we see anything from her. What’s the plan with that?

Overall great chapter, can’t wait for the next one!

PS: I actually sent you 2 PMs. One is an income message while the other is the real message. Please look at them when you have the chance. Thank you.
LoamyCoffee chapter 10 . 11/14/2024
And so now they know of Graves' treachery.
I worry for Claudia, as it's possible her husband may have said something thinking that his father could be trusted.
Naruto's getting closer, which is nice~
I hope she can get to allies soon.
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