That could work if Akane uses an one time drowned spring packet that Mu-Tsu had. And as Ranko is heading to China anyways she could even ask an old Ghoul for it.

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Finally some calls her on theis round and round crap of Ranko NOT TALKING! This annoying habit needs to be broken! Also curious as to how soonhow big Ranko's screw up in that interview will blow up. Keep up the great work and looking forward to the next update!

Good things cannot happen without risk but at least they are all in agreement beforehand. That is how it should always be, because otherwise someone makes stupid choices for the right reasons. Looking forward to more.

I disagree with your assessment that Books 1-3 were the weakest. Sure, there werre some errors in how you broke up dialogue, but you've long since corrected those. Books 1-3 were relatable and hard hitting in a way that the later stories haven't been. Once Ranko went mainstream, I personally feel like the story lost a great deal of its heart, as chapters seemed to delay or drag out inportant events by including things that really didn't seem necessary (I personally thought that the entire high school storyline was pointless and that the Phoenix: Ascendant story would've been much more streamlined without it, but that's just my opinion).

I can understand the need to improve earlier chapters of one's story. I wasn't able to solidify my own writing style until Chapter 9 or 10 of my own fic, and as a result I sometimes cringe at how poorly written those earlier chapters are by comparison. I plan to go back and revise them eventually, but not until the story as a whole is finished, and that wont happen for quite some time.

If you do these revisions now, you'll be making that same mistake that Netflix's upcoming The One Piece anime is doing: cannabalising the original story that fans love while the original story is still in production and yet to be finished.

Regardless, i will continue to look forward to your new chapters as i really want to see how this story ends. I've enjoyed Odyssey much more than Ascendant, and I'm very eager to see what comes next.

The FFN author UI is awful and I must have replaced chapter 69 with a later chapter. It's been fixed! Confirmed we're good from then on. So sorry about this, and thanks for calling it out!

chapter 69 and 70 feel out of place. these feel like they don't belong at this point in the story. Very confused.

wow way to write i can feel the emotion and can almost see me there watching this. You totally rock,i love the way you write yuri battle to just take 1 drink it really hits home. So glad see you writing again.

Hahahahahaha

And now I'm scared. It's too good to be true.

Love your writing style. Clean, clear descriptions, meaningful scenes.

Really entertaining. All the martial artists are dick. In retrospect, it fits the lore of this universe. xD

I'm not crying, you're crying...oh, wait, yeah, i guess I am...

dun dun dun!

Akane's gonna need a broom cause Ranko just positively immolated Nodoka! Keep up the good work!