Love the story can't wait to see what you do next!

I love shrewd Harry! Excellent!

Great story. Would love it fleshed out a tad, but I like your writing style.

thank you for the story

The power he knows not - legal action. Ha!

bonne fic!

Re: Up in Smoke

Rowling had a terrible habit of ruining her characters for whatever warped reason she had. (usually killing them off, after she ruined them) She turned Harry into a dim-witted doormat. Hardly the Dark Lord's equal. Ron was turned into a traitor (twice over) and a complete asshat. Hermione, an intolerable Mary Sue.

The only characters that weren't supposed to be terrible people and weren't ruined by the end of the series was Luna and Neville.

Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed this, like so many of your other stories. I would love to see a story where goblins are the greedy gits they ought to be portrayed as, not altruistic saints. So few actually portray the goblins that way. They're usually fantastic healers, lawyers, etc etc.

Anyway enough of my meanderings. Thank you again for this. I'd love to see some of the other shorts you did expanded as well.

Brilliant!

i wish there was way more to the story .. to see what Harry Potter gree up to become? who he married? how he led the rest of his life? would have been interesting to find out

I like this tale. Harry is getting exploited to within an inch of his life. This is another ‘Does the Prophecy refer to Voldemort or Dumbledore?’ story.

Fortunately, the only effective party in his corner is Gringotts. I note though that this is not altruism it is because helping Harry benefits the Bank. Grimsneer and those he puts in place exact not revenge, but justice and there is a huge difference between the two. Even the hardships faced by those who benefitted unknowingly from Dumbledore’s malfeasance really have nothing about which to complain. Ignorance of the circumstances is no excuse.

This is not really a Harmony story. Harry has good reason not to trust Hermione too much. In that you parallel the stories “Dual” by phoenixgal126 and “Harry Potter and the Angry Grim Reaper” by TomHRichardson. The difference is that in both stories events end in Harmony. Here, I posit that Hermione’s actions serve to regain his trust. Hopefully, they have a HEA after the end of the story.

DPR

Huh this is fun! Yes sorry I’m surprised but I expected a barely readable mess of ideas thrown out, not a really fun story that’s fairly fleshed out.

Thanks a lot for writing,

I like it as it is.
I don't need to know what color the drapes are, or how somebody fretted for months/years before doing something stupid (to carry the plot in a certain direction). Your writing is succinct, intelligible and easy to follow.

it works just fine.

This was fun. A little scattered, but that fits the events in a way. Thanks.