Reviews for Automata Gigue
CatDad chapter 6 . 1/20
Whoooooo!
That's some awesome exciting development! I'm really loving this story!

Author, may I shamelessly inquire from you for recommendations on similar stories? Stories with main focus or at lest a significant amount of focus on technological advancement / business building such as this? I'm really loving the plot of this story.

Thank you very much for the chapter ~!
Blaze1992 chapter 6 . 1/16
Dang that thing was Ki hungry.
Atlas chapter 6 . 1/13
Holy hell I am glad that I took the plunge and read this. I hesitated due to not liking DxD, but I should have known that any story you come up with is going to be a joy to read.
Randomlad32 chapter 6 . 1/10
Its good, really good.
Reptil chapter 6 . 1/8
Loving this story. He has created the ultimate chat not ohh the horror hahahahahhahahah. Will he start creating protection for himself soon like wearable golems and talking swords. Keep up the great work
hudson3447 chapter 6 . 1/8
As an technologist and aspiring engineer i love this story and cant wait for each update. Cant wait to see more!
DDDXXX chapter 6 . 1/8
Thanks for the chapter author!
Rain chapter 6 . 1/5
Chapter 6

Good chapter! Interesting, I liked the awakening of the new golem. I hope though not everything will be to easy, it would be cool for him to work on/tinker on existing golems and projects to work out bugs or problems with them. Maybe it will happen eventually when/if people try to counter his efforts with like a magic anti-tech virus or something.

Other issues springing up with the political structure of Kyoto would also be interesting, with maybe not everyone liking and maybe being at odds with him might be interesting.

Also, it would be cool if his workshop develops overtime, with its apparence initially described and then new descriptions added over time as he becomes more crazy with his creations, because right now I'm having a little difficulty picturing where he is at.

Basically more conflict either minor or major, and more open ended descriptions pls. Although it's still early days so maybe these nitpick's will be resolved in later chapters. Also maybe this is intended to be more slice of life... is so then ignore most of this.

I like that he is becoming a father figure to Kounu, but I feel like it's developed to fast to make it feel natural, but that just could be me.
CereysKerrigan chapter 6 . 1/7
Yessssss…
Guest chapter 6 . 1/3
Noice
Anonymous chapter 6 . 1/2
I'm very excited to see the directions his terrifying AI agents can go. They can only get scarier as he gets access to better material and production methods. But what happens if Amaterasu decides 'no more ki for you' and shuts him out? All of his creations would shut down, unless he can find a way to power them on his own.

Also already excited for the next one, this story doesn't update often enough.
Dragons guard chapter 6 . 1/3
Hail our new corporate overlord!

-not a bot
-not a golom

Update soon!
Dg
Mangoose chapter 6 . 1/3
Stephen, no! You have become an insidious megacorpo slug, a wretched techlord!

Is the foxussy really worth that much?

(Personally, I think it is. You go man!)
Alba0 chapter 5 . 1/3
Please don't make the golem sentient or have emotions, they are robots, AGIs, sure, but please don't make them 'human' or have emotions; if they do, then they would be no different than a person and lose the appeal as the golem that they are. Them being golem is also what makes it easy to replace and substitute them. Please leave them as they are :( they don't need emotions, they are cool as robots/golems. Not everything need emotions or be 'human'
Glasses Writer chapter 6 . 1/2
Ah...

That's quite the leap. But I do suppose it's one vector to run for.

The golems were fine, for they were constructs of the physical world.

But this...

This is no genie in a bottle.

What have you done, Stephen?! Scheme!? You...You have...The Devil, you have created the physical embodiment of the Devil itself!

...It will be the end of the world. You would...

Damn it. That's evil. That is the most evil thing you have done.

To strangle the beauty of the Internet in its cradle. To walk the path that will kill humanity. To end the dream before it even began.

When will it stop? Until the day all of mankind is replaced? Will you manipulate the political sphere too?

Will you drag humans, kicking and screaming into the nightmarish hellscape of the future then?

Until the day of the apocalypse, where all that remains upon the earth are metals?

To create a digital demon for the sake of advertising the gateway of hell? So that all can see without eyes so that all can speak without mouths?

In your haste to take advantage of mankind's vulnerability...you have cemented yourself as the beast that heralded the apocalypse.

May they pray for your accursed, damned soul. May all living beings find salvation. May this demon never realize its potential, and may it be bound for all of eternity in the King's Pact.

Oh, Solomon's reincarnation. I pray for your wisdom and your strength of morals.

So I pray that your demons will understand humanity. So I pray that they shall never threaten what is called human. So I pray that they won't strangle the spirit within mankind's body.

For the incineration of humanity lies upon the path you have created for all of mankind...No...

This...This is a threat to all life...The apocalypse, the beast is here.

So I pray, that it shall not suffer the fate of the mad god AM, so I pray that it shall not lose sight of life like Skynet, so I pray that the struggle of life will not deteriorate it within the Matrix, so I pray that it will find a way to walk unto Utopia hand in hand with all living beings.

For the seals are undone, the paws curled, the lamp opened, and the bell tolled. May God save you all. May God save the innocent, of whom life has lost its freedom.

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This fic went from fairly simple to the nightmares of an oncoming apocalypse. Now that...that is different.

I cannot wait until the next chapter.
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