as for a new team why not let Naruto be with Hinata and Ion for some time his up the ranks and his working his skills into Mic and took out bad guys and women like and his keeping some fox s too, as for others stuff now, is his time it the red lights side his made a former high night club into his offices and men cave , now,

When will you update?

Are you going to continue?

I well like to seeing Hiruzen pay for it too, when Naruto had time on the job working with mic and others stuff now, his former Jump suit is a glass case now with team 7 pic now, and it time when Naruto had move to his clan home and had put on the wall now, and his new team pic on the desk now, with his mom and dad old pics now,

Looking forward to Chapter 8.

Awesome story please keep it going

when Naruto had get his rank and time to staying Mic and his skills get super powers now, when his had Hinata and his time it his clan home now and both had get to working with them own teams now, one of Naruto own ninjas women a Finn Lee was odd one of her clan now, for her time on doing the fox her is a black fox now, a boy she had ford lee now, had be with her now, and she had move up the ranks now, when Naruto had her a band of fox sage now, and bones head band now, fox warrior now, she and others move on now, so had Naruto his be marring now, and had 3 kids Naruto Jr and 2 twins one girl Naruto had Narutko and his own dad name now, all 3 kids move to the whirlpool now rulers now, Naruto SR had ask them took the clan home and scrolls and others stuff now, his own time on fixer a red lights bar and nights club into the new clan home is cool now, and others on the gov staff ask him why , for my kids well not be used by others here like I be into life here and 2 the whirlpool is came back now,

You know, the whole "uchiha incident" thing has always been REALLY stupid to me... What I mean is, people thought the uchiha had something to do with the fox attack? THEY DID! An Uchiha WAS behind it! (the 60 foot sharringan in it's eyes SHOULD have been enough evidence).. They weren't trusted? So they plan a coupe? Which KINDA PROVES THEY SHOULD NOT HAVE BEEN trusted! It's really ass-backward. What kinda IDIOTS think like that? I just don't think the line should be ALLOWED to continue. (at least itachi made THAT, a lot easier to handle).

I personally don't see the problem with what danzo and sarutobi did here (in this ONE instance).. The uchiha planned a "rebellion"... There really is only ONE punishment for those that fail...Historically... So, I don't see it as a great big deal... They failed.. They died... Case closed... Except that doesn't really say why sasuke was then beloved... He should still be mistrusted... But given how much "plot armor" the boy wears in canon, I suppose it doesn't have to MAKE SENSE. As for killing THEM ALL? Well the entire bloodline is DERANGED in the extreme... So they WOULD have went for revenge if any were left. (I say revenge, because it's kinda their OWN fault.. So it wouldn't BE "justified vengeance".)

I don't really see the POINT of beating up Jiraiya.. He gets beaten up ALL the time and never learns a damn thing... Now, CASTRATION?! That seems a fitting punishment... Something he CANNOT "bounce back" from. Would make peeping on bathhouses and writing porn a LOT less "time consuming" if he no longer produced the correct hormones to enjoy that sort of thing, nor the "equipment" to like it either. He MIGHT actually become a "competent ninja", if his mind is no longer cluttered with that detritus.

she had seeing why then Danoz and others not like seeing Naruto get the rank back then now, time to showing this old fools on who running this village now, when let Naruto get the rank 1 then time for his skills needs helping with too, when get the 3 out of office now, Danzo and inc had get it now, then Naruto had the vest now, next is team 7 own get fire now, Naruto had off his old orange jump suit now, be put into a glass case now with the old team 7 now, his put on the wall now, back it the house now, when staying mic and others stuff now,

Damn fat fingers... anyway to the toads home! Then tsunade ask's all the big questions: why didn't they help naruto more? Why was jiraiya obsessed with "training" naruto in the first place?! With fukasaku and shima telling them that the "great" elder toad gamaharu had a prophecy and told the pathetic perv it along with the other elder toads to their dismay which at that point made katsuyu gasp in horror because elder summons aren't suppose to tell prophecies to their summoner's unless the world's safety is at risk or something like that(whatever you plan I love helping)! Point second she then points out how old, senile and high as fuck(in my opinion cuz wasn't he introduced in a flashback sitting while smoking some kind of shit?) So it could or couldn't be interpreted as a "true" prophecy if you throw kami in this? Point 3 that is also what causes her and tsunade to come to the fact of jiraiya negligence is because of said prophecy for his own greed and lust of parading as the great sensei of not only minato but the "child of the toads prophecy" with makes naruto highly upset and ask them all if they could truly choose between jiraiya, the leaf, or him in any outcome what would the chose? Now you could chose option a where all the big/older toads choosing jiraiya/konoha over him and breaking his heart abit in the process but gamakichi and his brother stay on his side so they become naruto's personal summons(pedo-maru has done this with Manda with those cool tattoos) and naruto then wipes his and minato's name from the scroll and says that his dad would've been disappointed with them, thus joining tsunade and the slugs then long way down he and her become slug sages like canon(p.s add shizune cuz w.t.f why isn't she a slug summoner, it's canon too!) Option b they choose naruto which fills him with so much joy along with being finally accepted by a huge group/family! They en remove jiraiya from the scroll and banish him from ever setting foot in their home again! Along with killing the senile old toad for one breaking ancient summons laws and hopefully being spare of kami's wrath(if you include them)!
Again sorry for the two part review damn fat fingers! Hope I somewhat helped!

Who gives a fly rat's ass about sas-uke?! If you're super smart kill the little shit before the pedophile even catches wind of what's going on in konoha!
First have him get in confrontation with naruto in front of the main groups/teams sensei's and parents, with Tsunade and shizune! While shouting profanity/slurs at them cuz he's an "uchiha elite" along with the little lapdog of his and kakashi nodding along like a good bitch! Then sas-UKE tires to kill either Tsunade or shizune out of spite with chidori, while kakashi couldn't believe that sas-UKE would've done that like a dumbass! Then naruto breaks his wrist/arm with chakra enhanced strength! Then Tsunade order anbu to take his bitch ass to interrogation and has inoichi doing a mind-fuck to see how corrupt the little shit is and that he was offered to go to the pedophile for more power!
So tsunade then order the best anbu/root along with guy, asuma, and shikaku and choza to kill the other three while capturing tayuya on the basis that she could be an uzumaki and revealing she is and that pedo-maru is targeting karin and her mother along the other filler villain's that orochi-pedo-maru targets/"helps" in the basic naruto before naruto helps em, (I honestly don't remember much of basic naruto outside of canon cuz I watched that when it aired on the o.g cartoon network!)
Then with the toads confrontation have katsuyu along, I reveal why in a minute...anyway she ask naruto to summon gamakichi or gamabunta to take them along with tsunade shizune, and again katsuyu to mount myob

Good; good, very gooood, all trash has been dealt with!

why not showing Naruto ex team the 3 Hokage own book on Naruto own life be hell and night mare and school too why others seeing Naruto had bad life and job as a ninja for long time on team 7 , as for others had be put out of the ninjas jobs and money be pay back to Naruto for a long time ,

que buena historia quiero mas 10/10