Reviews for A Most Beloved Sister |
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![]() ![]() What a disappointment that the following chapters are not online (sad face), I cannot access the other media. The story was one of such novelty ... pity ... |
![]() ![]() Oh that's great! It was a great story! |
![]() ![]() Why can't they get married before Jane dies |
![]() ![]() Your story is based in the 1800s so was it acceptable to hug and kiss men on the cheeks like Elizabeth did with Jamie and Wickham...especially Wickham with whom she was more than friendly with. Mr Bennett was a loser |
![]() ![]() A good time for Georgina to visit and meet sweet little Polly |
![]() ![]() Finally Elizabeth saw her father for what he is |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a fascinating story, and I liked it quite a lot. It's pretty brave to both make Jane Neurodivergent and kill her off too, but it all just worked. I also loved all the other secondary 'damaged' characters. Their treatment even today is pretty bad, but back then it was absolutely brutal and I think you handled that well without making it too much of a downer. Elizabeth's stubbornness seems just about right, and Darcy's defense mechanisms are plausible. Well done. |
![]() ![]() Mrs Bennett is still loud and delusional. Mr Bennett is a joke, responsible for the behaviour of his wife and the disrespect and amusement towards his wife and daughters does more harm. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for sharing this awesome story. |
![]() ![]() How lovely! A beautiful ending to an exceptional story! What about Georgina!? And Lydia!? Enquiring Minds need to know! |
![]() ![]() Oh boy! No disasters for a few weeks!? Or at least a few days! |
![]() ![]() ![]() such a lovely story |
![]() ![]() Delightful writing. Glad it was caught about the pronouns in the prayers. It did make it a bit confusing. - but you have written a very excellent story. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() Such a nice chapter. So glad that Georgiana is widening her circle of people who care about her. Thank you ! |
![]() ![]() Such a nice chapter. So glad that Georgiana is widening her circle of people who care about her. Thank you ! |