Reviews for Cindered Spirits |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is...a lot. I'll keep reading for curiosity's sake, but this feels a little too disjointed that may turn off some readers. I like most of the ideas explored so far though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is pretty far out. A little tough to read because the reader is just missing so much context to start off with. But if plot details are revealed soon and some clarity starts to set in I think you could pull it off. Has some interesting threads like an unchained but still strange Dumbledore and some pretty cool Flamels. Interesting intro with Daphne and the Dark Arts stuff. Thanks for writing I will continue to read if I see another update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Por muy bien escrita que este, no entendà nada |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ngl i think i need a degree in cryptology to read this its just look like a random ai generated story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely did not understand anything about this story so I'll stop here |
![]() ![]() The beginning was dry ngl, but it escalated to thrilling quite quickly. Bloody hell! |