Great chapter, thanks for writing! I love this story, it's novel, different from any other story I've read. i enjoy the blending of realism with pokemon adventure. I'm excited for this next arc.

Glad to see an update! Hope to see more from you soon. This genre of gritty pokemon fic is pretty awesome.

Interesting, seeing it from their point of view. And very good point about the poochiena.

Thanks for the update. A unique story in the fandom. I appreciate the world building you have done. I look forward to the next arc!

Love this story, can't wait for more.

I love this story

As I was reading , I couldn’t help but see the world unfolding so vividly in my mind the emotions, the atmosphere, the rhythm of each moment. Your story paints such a rich and immersive picture, full of visual potential just waiting to be brought to life. I’d love to help translate that into a cover that not only reflects the heart of your work but invites others into it at first glance. Whether it’s capturing the intensity of a climactic moment or the quiet power of a single, emotional beat, your story deserves a visual that does it justice.

Well maybe normal animals will also get stronger in some way or become extinct.

Yeah moose are fucking dangerous. They are big enough and storing enough to fuck up a fast moving car. Imagine what they could do to regular humans. There are plenty of pokemon I would bet against when it comes to fighting a moose. Depending on the pokemon even middle stages would be a dangerous fight.

Tftc!

TFTC

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I like this story. I like this story quite a bit. It has a wonderful feel of pokemon with a good touch of "fuck you this is my story". It's a shame nobody really reads reviews because I would recommend this, it's very good.

Thanks for writing!

Every time someone mentions a moon rabbit I can't but think "Because you're green! No, not like me, you idiot."
Yes, I know both DragonBall and Sailor Moon are old, that's not the point.

Question, but what age is Shane? In chapter 11, he says hes twenty-six, and thus wouldnt have a kid, but in chapter 14 it says hes twenty-three, and lucked out with a pokemon. Unless it meant that he was twenty-three when he first encountered zigzagoon, then somehow our mc is stuck in a time rift(damnit dialga!) and constantly changing his age