Reviews for Orange Spark |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Love the story! Aready add it to my favorites! Hope to see more soon! |
![]() ![]() i really like this story and i hope it continues |
![]() ![]() ![]() I quite enjoyed the chapter and cannot wait to read the next one |
![]() ![]() ![]() u missed kakashi's taunt toward sasuke during the bell test |
![]() ![]() Great chapter, as always! You're right about the chains being better as a kekkei genkai and about Naruto catching Orochimaru's interest. Can't wait to see what you cook up next |
![]() ![]() ![]() so he is already 11. wtf is the point of this story its basically a repeat of canon. he is still our lovable idiot so what if he finds their legacys he is already set in his ways. i doubt he will be able. sit and read let alone learn their fuin or jutsu let alone fighting style. like wtf is this shit he got some years befor he be hunted for his beast let alone train. then theres the fact the village will just take it from him thats uzumaki shit and flying thunder teleporting thing. he is just gonna be his pathetic 3 trick pony |
![]() ![]() ![]() this better not be cursed with the chunin exams curse. where authors drop their novels at this part. lol i seen that its just reached there after close to 200k words yet still only at the exams so please tell me you aint gonna drop it after i get hooked on the novel lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hasta ahora me esta gustando la historia, espero que no termina como muchas otras de esta plataforma que despues de llegar a varios capitulos el autor por algun motivo no puede continuar saludos desde Paraguay |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter. Interesting that Hashirama's chakra in the forest afected Naruto's sensing ability. I think the fight with Orochi was pretty good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Four chapters in and nothing is different from the manga/show. Why read further? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Orochimaru did have interest in the chakra chains, he said as much in the 4th war when karin awakened hers |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry to hear that you lost your beta. I enjoyed the chapter regardless! I likes how Naruto is more confident in himself enough to get on Orochimaru's radar. I am excited for the consequences of this encounter. Hope you both find a new beta and get a new chapter in the near future :) |
![]() ![]() Please show an Omake of when Ibiki finds out HOW Naruto incapacitated Izumi! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Every new chapter you are somehow able to make it worse. |